节约粮食英语中考作文【一】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
节约粮食英语中考作文【二】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
节约粮食英语中考作文【三】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
节约粮食英语中考作文【四】
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
节约粮食英语中考作文【五】
人无信不立，业无信不成，国无信不威。对于一个人、一个家、一个国而言，都不能没有诚信，这是根基。诚信如粮食，如果短缺，会造成恐慌，引发危机。
在西方，每人拥有一份由资信公司做出并保留的信用报告，任何银行、公司或业务对象都可以付费查询这份报告，你可以凭着个的良好信用记录在欧盟各国之间自由流动，但若一旦有不良记录，报告将保留多年，在这期间，甚至以后更长的时间你若贷款、做生意、申请工作、租房，甚至住旅馆会遭遇极大的困难，这说明一个人无诚信于社会那么他就很难在社会上立足。
诚信对一个人而言有时候与眼前利益相悖，若缺乏一种长远的眼光来看待诚信，丧失了诚信，你的信任度就会下降，出现信任危机，一件难忘而酸涩的事让我深深明白这个道理。英语老师按照贯例考我们默写课文，以往我宁可不及格，也不会作弊，但这次老师说要记入档案，我慌了，如果不及格，丢了面子是次要的，要是影响升学，岂不很惨？于是心生一念，趁着老师的目光转移他处，同学们安安静静默写的时候，我做了只可意会不可言传的事，由于害怕老师发现，神情慌慌张张，心里像揣了个小兔子，嗵嗵嗵的越跳越快，从脸热到脖子耳朵，手心渗汗，心正担心着，突然一个晴天霹雳，老师叫我的名字，此时，如五雷轰顶，脸火辣辣的，像被火烧的一样，当天老师并没有教训我什么，同学们也没议论什么，以后，每次考英语的时候，老师的眼睛总会不经以意看我，每次向同学借东西的时候，同学们都会很犹豫的借给我，遇到这种情况，我的心就很不是滋味。很长时间以后，这种情况淡化了，老师和同学们慢慢的接受我，这次教训深刻让我还时时觉得痛，我暗暗发誓：我要老老实实做人。人真的不可缺少诚信。
人没有了诚信，有时丢失的不仅是面子，甚至连性命都不保。杰克·伦敦笔下的比尔到美国西部淘金，利益熏心，半途将同伴抛下，凭自己的力量没能走出荒凉的旷野，比尔至死都带着他那装满金沙的厚实的鹿皮口袋，只是厚实的鹿皮口袋已经给尖利的牙齿咬破了，比尔的骨头散乱在孤独的荒野。诚信如粮食，不可一日无它。
“做诚信人，办诚信事”听起来简单，但做起来难，尤其是对自己守信更难。因为无人监督，无人检测，人很容易就放弃了对自己的承诺。然而海伦凯勒在千难万难的情况下，一直坚守自己的承诺，对自己守信。海伦凯勒一岁零七个月因病而失去视觉和听觉，这个又盲又聋的孩子，后来成为享誉世界的作家和演说家。她生活在无声的黑暗的世界里，却攻读英文、德文、和拉丁文，并考取了哈佛大学，寂寞的侵蚀没有击垮她，无边的黑暗没能吞噬她，她告诉自己要“忘我”。是的，海伦必须忘我，忘记黑暗带来的恐惧，忘记无声带来的孤独，忘记命运的不公：她从容地散步，骑双人自行车四处兜风，她划船、下棋、欣赏歌剧。她把别人眼睛所看见的光明当做自己的太阳，别人耳朵所听到的音乐当做自己的乐曲，别人嘴角的微笑当做自己的快乐。她认为虽然生命中有很多缺陷，但她可以有如此多的方式触摸到这个多姿多彩的世界。世界是美好的，甚至黑暗和沉寂也是如此。无论处于什么样的环境，都要不断努力，都要学会满足。海伦凯勒对自己的承诺“忘我、努力、满足”，她认真履行她的诺言，她真正达到了“忘我”的境界，所以她快乐地生活着，她一生都坚持不懈地努力着：七岁的时候，她发明六十多种不同的手势与家人交流，十四岁进纽约市聋哑学校，十六岁进剑桥女子学校，二十岁进哈佛大学，四十六岁进白宫，五十三岁担任英国皇家盲人学校的副校长，八十岁生日成立“海伦凯勒奖”。事实上，海伦凯勒每走一步，属于她的每一分、每一秒都充满艰辛和苦涩，她想义正词严地抗议命运之神的无情，酸楚的话语流溢在唇边，欲言又止，泪水直往肚里流，沉默凉透了她的灵魂，最终她选择了忘我，选择了快乐，“忘我就是快乐”，她一如既往地坚守对自己的承诺，诚信如粮食，滋养着她，让她过得很舒适、很快乐、很成功。对自己守信是为难自己，同时也成就自己。因此，每一个人都应该、也能够对自己守信！
诚信如粮食。朋友们，人类、社会、国家是不可缺少诚信的，让我们双手捧着，心里揣着，珍视诚信，做一个诚信人，一个诚信的青年！
节约粮食英语中考作文【六】
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第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
节约粮食英语中考作文【七】
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第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
节约粮食英语中考作文【八】
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第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
