Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
小学组(一年级--六年级)、初中组(初一年级--初三年级)
因为我们这个,是市里面11个县的学校统一抽考,期末除了语数英之外,还有品德与社会(生命与健康常识)和科学,所以最后一个月的学习特别紧张。妈妈也给我买了一套同步试卷模拟做,同时根据我的学习成绩制定了严格的计划:①每天早晨6:20起床,读半个小时的英语;②放学回家做完作业,读背一个小时的'语文课文和数学公式及英语(如果作业多,至少也要读半个小时);③一天做一张试卷,妈妈对照答案批改;④家庭作业给妈妈检查,错题要更正并写在错题本上;⑤双休日只允许出去玩一个小时,其余时间在家里做作业和卷子、难题;⑥上学期间酌情允许是否可玩电脑,上网只准看有关文学的东西。
我按照妈妈拟定的计划做着,学习效率提高了许多。我自己也总结了我这个学期的优点与不足之处。首先来说说优点吧,这个学期每次的语文考试(第八单元和期末综合卷还没考)我都勇夺桂冠,老师都说在她眼里我是个几乎完美的学生。数学呢,也比上个学期爱钻研难题了,第四单元考试应用题的最后一题只有我做出来了呢!然后字也有大大的进步,上课认真听讲,积极回答问题。最后嘛,画画技术和策划技术进步了,这学期目前为止出了三期黑板报,我为主策划,老师说我们班的黑板报被校长点名表扬了,老师还大大地夸奖了我呢!
再说说不足的地方。考试时,我总是粗心大意,不是这里数错,就是那里算错,这点必须得改;然后呢因为一点儿芝麻小事就发脾气,还无缘无故地打别人,必须要改;最后就是懒,不爱整理课桌、书包,书本常常是这里一本,那里一本,以至于找不到需要的书。
这个学期以来,我进步了许多,可也要改掉一些坏习惯、坏毛病。在新的一年里,我要做个品学兼优、人人称赞的好班长、好学生!
您好!在五一国际劳动节即将来临之际,谨向您致以诚挚的问候!并为您长期以来对学校工作的支持与配合表示衷心感谢!
为帮助家长合理安排好学生“五一”期间的学习和活动,现将我校放假时间及相关要求告知各位家长。根据xx市政府的通知要求,“五一”期间,全校放假xx天(xx月xx日至xx月xx日),xx月xx日开学。
假期学生精神放松,家长容易放松对孩子的管理与监督,不少问题便接踵而来:无节制的玩乐、上网、结伴外出、夜不归宿、打架斗殴……每逢节后返校,老师们都头痛于学生不完成假期作业、上课走神发呆、迟迟不能进入学习状态、处理学生矛盾等现象。
其实,只要家长们能配合学校做好孩子的.管理和监督,这些现象和问题都是可以避免的。假期里,要帮助和督促孩子做好每天的计划(包括:作业、复习、预习、课外阅读、锻炼、家务、适当放松、休息等),严格规定孩子外出活动的时间、地点以及同伴。
小长假开学以后,学校要检查学生个人风纪(着装、发型和指甲),请家长督促孩子整理好个人风纪。
家长朋友们,让我们共同努力,密切合作,让孩子过好一个有意义、有价值、安全文明的假期。最后,祝您身体健康、合家欢乐、万事如意!
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署假马上就要结束了,我将以新的精神面貌跨进初中学校的大门。进入初中,一个完全陌生的学习环境,再加上现在社会的竟争如此激烈,为了尽快适应新生活,并且迎头赶上,为自己提几点要求,作为初中的学习安排:
一、做好预习工作,对第二天老师要上的课程自己先看上一遍,对新课的内容有大致了解。把第二天老师讲课当作复习,着重听还不算很理解的重点难点,并记好应记笔记。
二、要认真完成老师布置的所有作业,做到一丝不苟。课堂作业当堂完成;课后作业和家庭作业也要按时独立完成。
三、尽量抽出时间复习老师所讲的课程,温故而之新,只有掌握好老知识才能为今后的学习打下更好的基础
四、要利用星期天和节假日,继续参加奥数、英语,多读课外书,不断丰富自己的知识。多发挥自己的强项,即使再繁忙的初中生活,也不能丢了自己原来的特长,而弱项则需要不断去弥补。
五、上课的时候,我要认真听讲,不做小动作,不和同学交头接耳,要力争把老师课堂上讲的知识全部消化;对于疑难问题,要不耻下问,虚心向老师和同学请教。不能“似懂非懂”,更不能“不懂装懂”,
以上是我最基本的学习安排要求,但想完全做到也并非易事。我只有努力+努力,勤奋+勤奋,一点一点,提高自己的学习水平和班级排名,争取向最好的成绩奋进,创造一个属于自己的初中三年。
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