To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
我最喜欢读历史书。《上下五千年》、《中华典故》,我都读过。最近,我正读《史记》,读到《高祖本纪》,我忽然想起了一件好笑的事。那是我刚升入四年级,记不清上什么课了,老师问了一个问题:“明朝的开国皇帝是谁?”教室里,议论纷纷,乱成一团。有同学说:“秦始皇。”尹梓涵大声喊:“明始皇!”老师连连摇头。这时,我站起来,说:“明太祖朱元璋!”老师冲我竖起大拇指,同学们纷纷把羡慕的目光投向我。那一刻,我是那么自豪!
我还喜欢看小说。曹文轩、沈石溪、罗尔德·达尔的小说,我看得如醉如痴。曹文轩的《青铜葵花》,让我懂得了爱可以战胜一切困难。青铜为了给家里挣钱,把自己穿的那双芦花鞋卖了,在茫茫大雪中一步步艰难地走回家。葵花为了给奶奶治病,独自去江南捡银杏,这真让人感动。罗尔德·达尔的'《查理和巧克力工厂》一书中,主人公查理,宁愿放弃整座巧克力工厂也要跟亲人在一起!看来,亲人比什么都重要!
我也读童话。安徒生的,格林的,我都读过。上个学期,我喜欢上了《夏洛的网》。主人公夏洛用网救了小猪威尔伯,可正在欢庆胜利时,夏洛的生命走到了尽头。友情多么美好,它的力量是无穷的!那天晚上,我做了个梦,梦见我长出了一对翅膀,飞到了威尔伯身边……哈哈,阅读让睡眠都变得丰富多彩。
早晨,当爸爸妈妈还在睡梦中的时候,我早已趴在被窝里,悄悄扭开台灯,打开一本书。阅读,让生活变得如此美好。
科学在我们的日常生活中无处不在。如建筑、航天、医学、信息技术、交通……随着科学的高速发展,我们的生活将变得更加快捷便利。
我曾经看到过一篇报道,报道中称在某个旅游景点的沙滩上,成功地建起了一幢百层大厦,最让人不可思议的是,根基并没有透过厚厚的沙层建筑在地面上,而是建在了容易流动的沙子上。看到这里我不禁惊叹:难道随着沙子的流动,大厦不会倾斜,倒塌吗?
原来,科学家早已经过多次地试验和精密地计算,只要在沙子中打进几百根钢柱,只要利用钢柱的表面与沙子产生的磨擦力,就能够使钢柱撑起一定的重量。然后再把大厦建立在钢柱上,这样在沙子上建设大厦的梦想就能实现。看到这样的奇迹,真得让人感动。也让我明白了科学在社会发展中的重要性。
信息技术的高速发展,使我们足不出户,就可以通过网络了解世界各地的风土人情及新闻要事,使我们的生活变得多姿多彩,当劳累了一天或是空闲之余都可以上网放松一下自己,这样不仅可以使自己的身心得到放松,还可以将心中的寂寞“打发”走。
然而,在世界科技高度发展的今天,我国还有不少偏远的地区出现了愚昧的`现象,如看相算命、修庙建坟……我曾在思品课上看到过邪教妖言惑众,宣称火星要与地球相撞,世界末日来临,只要将钱交给“神的儿子”,就可以被带入方舟升天获救。于是,便有百名善良的村民变卖家产,结果被人骗到黑工厂里群居劳动,直到病死、饿死。这让我想到:这也不能全怪那些可怜的人们,国家的相关部门也应该关注偏远地区的科学文化建设,从而使人们相信科学,并且掌握一定的科学技术,使他们改变旧思想,让生活更加美满幸福。
我们爱科学,是他给我们带来了欢乐;我们爱科学,因为它能给我们装上理想的翅膀。我们爱科学!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
我最喜欢读历史书。《上下五千年》、《中华典故》,我都读过。最近,我正读《史记》,读到《高祖本纪》,我忽然想起了一件好笑的事。那是我刚升入四年级,记不清上什么课了,老师问了一个问题:“明朝的开国皇帝是谁?”教室里,议论纷纷,乱成一团。有同学说:“秦始皇。”尹梓涵大声喊:“明始皇!”老师连连摇头。这时,我站起来,说:“明太祖朱元璋!”老师冲我竖起大拇指,同学们纷纷把羡慕的目光投向我。那一刻,我是那么自豪!
我还喜欢看小说。曹文轩、沈石溪、罗尔德·达尔的小说,我看得如醉如痴。曹文轩的《青铜葵花》,让我懂得了爱可以战胜一切困难。青铜为了给家里挣钱,把自己穿的'那双芦花鞋卖了,在茫茫大雪中一步步艰难地走回家。葵花为了给奶奶治病,独自去江南捡银杏,这真让人感动。罗尔德·达尔的《查理和巧克力工厂》一书中,主人公查理,宁愿放弃整座巧克力工厂也要跟亲人在一起!看来,亲人比什么都重要!
我也读童话。安徒生的,格林的,我都读过。上个学期,我喜欢上了《夏洛的网》。主人公夏洛用网救了小猪威尔伯,可正在欢庆胜利时,夏洛的生命走到了尽头。友情多么美好,它的力量是无穷的!那天晚上,我做了个梦,梦见我长出了一对翅膀,飞到了威尔伯身边……哈哈,阅读让睡眠都变得丰富多彩。
早晨,当爸爸妈妈还在睡梦中的时候,我早已趴在被窝里,悄悄扭开台灯,打开一本书。阅读,让生活变得如此美好。
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