1.词数:100左右:
2.参考词汇:房租Tent(n..
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
和以前一样,每个月周老师都会选出几位作文写得不错的同学来做日记组长,而我经常被选中,这次也不例外。我觉得十分荣幸。
可接下来的事却令我十分伤心。报组的时间开始了,我满心欢喜地期待着同学们来报名。可除了周老师分配的朱思远和老“战友”吴德亮,其他人都没有到我这里来,我有些失落。你看,张飞扬那儿多热闹,大部分同学都一下子涌到了他身边,争先恐后地报名。再看看其他组长的身边,也是人头攒动,报名的`同学异常踊跃。看着组长们忙碌的样子,我的心情越来越沉重。只得低下了头写起了作业,心里却不停地在盘算:现在组里只有3个人,怎么办呢?我无力地靠在了椅子上,手脚冰冷,背上全是冷汗,周围的空气似乎凝结住了,同学们的眼神也让我异常难堪。让我煎熬的日记分组终于结束了,最后周老师只能把唐心怡分了过来,凑满了人数,这样的结果让我感觉心跳和呼吸都是那样沉重。
我边做着作业边暗自反省:同学们不来我这一组已经不是一次两次了,每次分组几乎都是这样,大家总说我要求太严格了。其实我是想让大家发挥出好的写作水平,不应付了事,让我们的小组夺得冠军呀!那样大家都会高兴的。可没想到这样反而造成了同学们的不理解、不欢迎。我转念又想:我是不是应该改变一下方式或方法呢?主动接收些写作水平一般的同学,不让他们受到冷落,和他们一起提升写作水平,让人人都能得到优+。对,我决定下次分组要主动出击,邀请他人,去帮助他人,不再设置条条框框,重新赢回同学们的心。
不愉快的日记分组就这样过去了,虽然令我郁闷,但我也收获很多:遇事多从自身找找原因并努力改正,终会被别人认可的。
High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior three student, it won't take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
高中被认为是一个人一生中最好的时间。作为一名三年级的学生,在我毕业前不需要很长时间。现在,我和我的同学们分享了很多。
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."
首先,我想对我所有的方式,教师,家长和朋友包括我的赞赏。没有他们的帮助和建议,我的生活将是不同的。其次,是对我伤害或误解的同学说对不起的时候了。沟通和微笑是友谊的桥梁。最重要的是,我已经下决心要尽一切努力去学习,因为我相信努力工作是成功的关键。正如俗话所说:“没有痛苦,没有收获。”
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.
最后,我希望所有的年轻人都能充分利用时间,因为时间和时间等待任何人。
(1可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
(2词数:100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数 。
High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.
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