有关水稻英语四级作文【一】
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先，提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段：摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence：关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰，层层展开。
完整性(completeness：以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型：It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as，如：
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.，相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
有关水稻英语四级作文【二】
Dear my father and mother,
This letter is my inner feelings. I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help.
During my growth, you have made a lot of efforts and love for me. When I make a success, both of you are more excited than me, and support me to do better. Even though I have failed, you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up. Especially, during my preparation for CET-4, the support from you is always everywhere. I have passed the exam successfully.
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected, so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed. Anyway, I would like to express the deep gratitude to you.
With best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
有关水稻英语四级作文【三】
大狼是海边救生员，如果发现有人落水，他就奋不顾身地跳下水，把落水者救上岸。
(在大海里或者游泳池里玩水是很开心的，可是也会有危险，有了救生员就安全多了。
花狗汪仔很佩服大狼，可是，从不敢接近大狼，因为大狼平时严肃得很，总是板着脸，目不斜视，走起路来一阵风，他那昂首挺胸的样子，好像谁也不在他眼里。
汪仔有时候会悄悄地学大狼的样子，昂首挺胸地走路，谁也不看。可是没过一会儿，他就偷偷笑起来，在开满野花的小路上又蹦又跳，直打滚儿。
(小朋友，你学过谁的样子?学得像吗?
有一天，汪仔捡到一张大狼的照片，他高兴极了，天天把大狼的照片带在身边，没事就拿出来看一看。
一天，汪仔正坐在海边看大狼的照片，想再学一学大狼威猛的样子，突然，他感到身后有动静。回头一看，天哪，是大狼!
“我……我……”汪仔吓得说不出话来。
大狼紧皱着眉头，一把抢过照片，走了。
汪仔一屁股坐在地上：“完了完了，大狼要生气了，怎么办?”
汪仔站起身，问水里的小鱼：“大狼是不是很生气啊?他一定是去拿棍子来揍我，我要是跳进海里，也不成呀，人家大狼可是救生员!”
汪仔办法还没想出来，远远地看见大狼又过来了，吓得拔腿就跑。
大狼在后面追过来，一边追，还一边大声喊：“站住!给我站住!”
最后，汪仔累得跑不动了，只好停下来，准备挨打，谁知大狼忽然伸出手，递过他一张照片说：“给你。”
哇，好帅的一张大狼的照片，汪仔真不敢相信是真的。
(有时，我们会误会别人的意思，说清楚就好了，对不对呢?
“这一张才好看，那张照片把我的鼻子照歪了。”大狼脸上有了一点笑容，“你喜欢吗?”
“喜欢，太棒了!”汪仔赶紧把照片装进口袋里。
“刚才我拿走照片的时候，你想说什么呢?”大狼问。
“这一张才好看，那张照片把我的鼻子照歪了。”大狼脸上有了一点笑容，“你喜欢吗?”
“喜欢，太棒了!”汪仔赶紧把照片装进口袋里。
“刚才我拿走照片的时候，你想说什么呢?”大狼问。
汪仔说：“我想说，我……我好喜欢你。”
大狼不好意思地笑了：“我也很喜欢你呀，汪仔，你又机灵又活泼，身上还有好看的花斑点，很漂亮。”
汪仔没想到自己也会有人喜欢，他说：“真的吗?那你愿意和我做朋友吗?”
(每个人都有自已的优点，要相信自己也很出色呀!
大狼说：“当然了，我天天在海边，你来玩呀。”
从此，汪仔和大狼成了好朋友，汪仔还跟着大狼学游泳，他也想成为像大狼那样的救生员。
有关水稻英语四级作文【四】
分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文，那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界，
一花一天堂，
手中即无限，
永恒亦短暂。
有关水稻英语四级作文【五】
有一条小鲤鱼，肚皮是银白色的，背脊是青灰色的，大家都叫他小灰鲤。一天，小灰鲤和他的许多兄弟姐妹，来到了水稻田里。水稻田里住着无数小稻秧。小稻秧们看见一大群鲤鱼游过来了，怕鲤鱼来吃稻根，都着急起来： “哎呀，小鲤鱼怎么闯进咱们家里来啦?”
“唉，瞧他们横冲直撞的，一定是些坏蛋!” “咱们今年要多打谷子，现在怎么办呢?” “快想办法告诉农民伯伯!” 小鲤鱼们甩动尾巴，一摇一摆地在水里游来游去，没听到小稻秧的谈话。小稻秧们担心极了，生怕鲤鱼来伤害自己。
忽然传来了“巴达巴达”的声音。啊，小鲤鱼在吃东西哩!他们是在啃稻根吗?小稻秧们更加紧张了，他们低下头来，四处张望。忽然，一棵小稻秧高声地说：“哈，瞧!小鲤鱼在吃孑孓(jiéjué!嘿!好呀，好呀!孑孓都是大坏蛋，长大了就变成蚊虫去害人，赶快把他消灭干净!”
真的，小鲤鱼个个都是消灭孑孓的能手，他们一大口一大口地，吃得快极了。小稻秧们松了口气，互相瞧了瞧，笑了。
有的小稻秧还帮着小鲤鱼找孑孓： “喏，那儿还有，对，这儿，这儿!好呀，你们真是除害虫的小英雄!” 小鲤鱼们听到小稻秧夸奖自己，心里乐滋滋的，越吃越有劲儿。没多久，稻田里的孑孓都被吃光了。现在，小稻秧们不再怕小鲤鱼了。他们只是奇怪：小鲤鱼为什么要住到水稻田里来呢?小稻秧问小灰鲤说：“小灰鲤，你们从前住在池塘里，怎么搬到我们这儿来的呢?” 小灰鲤一本正经地回答说：“是农民伯伯给我们搬的家呀!农民伯伯说： ‘鲤鱼孩子们，水稻正需要你们去帮忙哩!上他们那儿去住些时候吧!’瞧，我们就这样搬来了。” 小稻秧说：“小灰鲤，你在我们家里住得惯吗?” 小灰鲤回答说：“住得惯，住得惯。这里工作很多，吃的东西也很多。你们瞧，我们都长胖了哩!”
小灰鲤和小稻秧从此成了非常要好的朋友。
一天，小灰鲤在水里游着，忽然听到有谁在吵嘴： “走开，你这个小坏蛋!别偷吃我们的养料……”
“不走，怎么样!偏不走!” 小灰鲤睁着大眼睛四处找，原来是小稻秧和水藻在吵嘴。水藻真是不讲理的邻居。农民伯伯给小稻秧吃的养料，他们却抢着吃。他们长得又组又长，把太阳光全挡住了。小稻秧吃不到养料，晒不到太阳，都变的又黄又瘦了。
小灰鲤安慰小稻秧们说：“好朋友，别着急，我们来帮你们的忙。” 小灰鲤急急忙忙的游开去，一边游一边大声嚷： “鲤鱼弟兄们!水藻在欺侮小稻秧啦!咱们快去帮忙呀!” 许多小鲤鱼都游过来了。他们张着大嘴，“咔嚓咔嚓”吃起水藻来。水藻吓得索索发抖，小稻秧们可笑得前仰后合地说：“小灰鲤真厉害呀，真像铲草机!”
欺侮小稻秧的'水藻给消灭干净了。小稻秧越长越结实了。他们挺直了身子，摆动着长长的叶子，一阵风吹过，“悉里索罗”直响。小稻秧已经长成真正的水稻啦!头上都长出谷穗来了。小灰鲤每天早晨游近水稻，快活地招呼他们说：“早哇，朋友们!” 水稻在微风中轻轻地摇晃着身子，他们弯下腰来，也很亲热地说：“早哇，好朋友!” 可是有一天，小灰鲤看见水稻紧缩着身子，脸色焦黄焦黄的，满面愁容。
小灰鲤关心地问：“水稻大哥，怎么啦，你们生病了吗?哪儿不舒服?” 水稻皱着眉头说：“小灰鲤，我们又遇到大祸了。你看，可恶的螟(míng虫在伤害我们。”
小灰鲤细细一瞧，嘿!真的，稻叶上爬着一条条小虫。他们沿着稻叶爬到稻茎上，把稻梗(gěng咬了一个洞，钻进去吃水稻的心。水稻痛苦极了，被螟虫害得面黄肌瘦的。这些小强盗真坏，他们吃完了一棵水稻的心，就爬出来，用自己吐出来的丝，把自己挂在稻叶上。一阵风吹来，螟虫就像荡秋千一样，飘到另一棵水稻上，又去偷吃另一棵水稻的心。
小灰鲤看了又气又恨，马上去和兄弟们商量。大家七嘴八舌谈起来： “一定要救水稻!” “咱们帮水稻消灭螟虫!” “对，吃螟虫去!”
小鲤鱼们伏在水里等候着，看到螟虫爬到靠近水面的稻根上，就赶过去把他吃掉。有的螟虫吐出丝，挂在空中随风飘荡，一不小心落到水面上来了。小鲤鱼也决不放过，一口把他吞下肚去。日子一天一天过去了。小鲤鱼吃着水稻田里的杂草和害虫，长得又肥又大。他们拉出来的粪，又作了水稻的肥料。水稻也长得又粗又壮，结了一穗一穗沉甸甸的谷粒。秋风轻轻地吹过，金黄的稻穗就“沙拉沙拉”唱起歌来。丰收的季节到了，收获的季节到了!农民伯伯拿着镰刀来收稻了。他们放去了稻田里的水，小灰鲤他们就沿着小沟，游到稻田旁边的永塘里。
一路上，金色的稻穗恋恋不舍地欢送他们： “再见，鲤鱼兄弟，谢谢你们的帮助!”
