健康的中考英语作文【一】
导入：
第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文：
第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论：
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
健康的中考英语作文【二】
1。 头绪分明，脉络清楚
写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心，详略得当
在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：
One night a man came to our house and told me， "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family， I saw the faces of those little children disfigured （破坏外貌） by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces， just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two， and went out， carrying half the rice。 When she came back， I asked her， "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer， "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言，准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动，其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文：
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money， but they didn＇t take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后：
The other day， five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time， he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home， he started and crying。 Just then， two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy， why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom， I go home。" said the boy， still crying。
"Don＇t worry， we＇ll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy＇s house。 With the help of a policeman， they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound， she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully， she offered them some money， saying it was a way to express her thanks， but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
健康的中考英语作文【三】
想拥有健康是每个人的梦想，谁不想拥有健康呢？
我小时候体质特别差，打针吃药都快和吃饭一样频繁了。每天望着苦苦的中药就再也没有胃口吃饭了。我就在想身体健康的感觉应该很美好吧。我真想偷点健康让自己好起来，不受病痛的折磨。从“病魔”那儿解脱。
我想偷点健康来给姥姥。姥姥有脑血栓、高血压，身体十分差，药品吃了不知道有多少瓶多少盒。而且有时还要去打针，每次到姥姥家便看见一个大盒子里摆满了药品。姥姥每次都让我把同一种药或治一种病的药放在一起，分清楚吃什么。有时还让我把吃完的药盒子拿给妈妈，让妈妈再去买。每当帮姥姥整理药的时候就有一种心痛的感觉。我多想偷点健康给姥姥，让姥姥好起来，可以不用药物就能身体健康，不生病。我愿意当这样的小偷，为姥姥偷一点健康，不让她这么大年纪还要遭受这种折磨。
小时候我很想为老爷爷偷点健康，现在我还想为老爷爷偷健康，但已不是一点而是一些。从我记事起老爷爷的脚就一直没好过，最后忍受不了病痛，做了截肢手术，从那一刻起老爷爷就困于轮椅之中了，爸爸说，在解放济南的战役中，老爷爷的脚被子弹打穿致使残疾，在截肢以前，老爷爷家充满了碘酒的味道。尤其是夏天，截肢以后，我就想为老爷爷偷点健康，让老爷爷像正常人一样走路，脱离轮椅和拐杖，现在我想偷一点健康，在英文中“一些”是lot，而这个单词中唯一一个元音字母o发的音，像一个嘴，贪婪的吃下所有的东西，我愿意让这个贪婪的嘴吃下一些健康给老爷爷，让他再天堂里健康的生活。
健康是个多么奢侈的词，人生中能有几回拥有他？我真的很想偷点健康给我的家人。
