哪怕乌云遮天,哪怕大雨倾盆,看见你,我都会感到阳光明媚。
来到新家的一刻,我与你相见。你那会儿光秃秃的,立在小区的路旁,寥寥无几的叶子微微浮黄,凌乱的枝子更令我心生不悦。我每天的路上,必有你的影子,你摇晃着向我问好,我却匆匆而过,从不愿意为你驻足。你那么平常普通,我差点没有发现你的存在。
当冬天化作飞雪,为你镀上银衣,你依旧迎风向我问好。我终于停下看你,你的枝丫像缀满了梨花,阳光下亮晶晶的,好像正在努力吸收阳光的能量,并把它储存起来。我有点惊喜,凑近你,观察你,你那么调皮,枝上的雪珠弹进了我的'衣领。享受着这随风而起的清凉,我,开始喜欢你。
不知怎的,见着你就莫名的喜悦,每次路过,你的枝条好像在跘我的脚,挠我的痒。初春的风吹去了你的银装,我惊奇地发现,你的脚下残雪点点,枝上也有雪珠点点。不,不是雪珠,是一颗颗泛粉的小苞,呀,你竟是株梅树!点点雪珠是那么的晶莹透亮,凡我恼时,一眼看见你,所有的烦闷便就烟消云散。
我期待你开花的那一刻。
那天我忽闻着阵阵香气,便向你跑去。你含苞待放的骨朵已开了少许。虽少,但香气逼人,沁人心脾。你的花瓣又轻又薄,好似玉片,白里透红,红中带粉。花蕊如丝,阵阵芬芳令我陶醉。我莫名的兴奋,每日看见你,一朵一朵次第开放,仿佛初升旭日,充满朝气。你娇嫩的花朵里蕴含着力量,也给我传递着力量,我觉得我也正与你一同开放。
风雨打落了你的花,初长的嫩叶在初夏的大雨中摇摇晃晃。猛烈密集的雨打在你的身上,发出“啪啪”的响。但你依然傲然挺立。你脚下的草,正对你微笑。你身下的花,感动地哭泣。我一切都看见了,你不必隐瞒。
你鼓舞着我,你稀少的叶在雨中弹奏,是圆舞曲,也是进行曲,坚定了我的心。我知道,你经历着的风雨,正在为你积蓄着力量。你会有雨过天晴,会有再一次的花开花落。
看着你,我也开始努力,我要与你肩并肩,我要像你一样,每天精神饱满。让风雨打在我的身上吧,我会和你一样,努力克服!我要和你一样,努力汲取每一份养分,每一缕阳光,我会和你一样,开最美的花,结的果!
秋风吹啊吹,你又开始落叶了。但你仍然是我生活里的阳光,是陪伴我指引我的朋友,愿你枝繁叶茂,愿我们一同经风雨,共成长。
在英语村里,模拟了现实生活中的四个场景——“城市馆”、“自然馆”、“生活馆”和“商业馆”,四个场馆中的部分物品和布景都是实物,每个场馆又被分成几个场景,外教和中教轮流授课,我们这次可真是与英语世界来了个亲密接触。在全英语的语言环境和实物情境下,我们对学习英语的兴趣变得前所未有的高涨。就比如说在城市馆里吧,刚进城市馆,一个美丽的大都市——上海的模型立刻呈现在我们的面前,那一个个地标性建筑物的模型,在镭射灯光的映衬下是显得格外的雄伟壮丽,你甚至猜想不到的是在城市馆里居然会有一节能移动的地铁车厢,在最后一节课中,老师终于带着我们“乘坐”了一次地铁,这“地铁”中,老师不停的作者令人捧腹的`动作,使得大家都争先恐后的想“乘坐”一次平时已经坐得习以为常的地铁。每当外教拉开悬挂的粉红色幕布时,或旋转布景板进行场景切换时,我们都会发出声声惊叹,因为,我们以前从来没有这样学习过英语。在商业馆的超市里,甚至可以看到真实的收银机等等实物,我们真实地体验着用英语对话来购物的整个流程,我们扮演着不同的角色,来学习这个角色所要说得话;在生活馆里,老师会用英语生动地为我们介绍各式厨具用品,并且还和我们做游戏,让我们在游戏当中来巩固与加深你对这个英语单词的印象,如果你读得好的话,老师会和你拍手,表示鼓励;在自然馆中,我们仿佛亲身来到了大自然中,有热带雨林,有北极,海洋,在教室的墙上还贴着国家的地图和标着英语单词的国旗名称,在自然馆中最有趣的还是要数在进门时有一座假山,不高的假山上悬挂着一个吊绳,仿佛可以真的用来攀岩一般。我们不时为老师们幽默、生动的语言、表情和肢体动作爆发出阵阵笑声,为同学的精彩表现鼓掌加油。
通过这次活动,让我们在现实生活中快乐的学习了一次英语,也然我的英语水平提高了不少,希望以后这样的实践活动多一些,能够我们丰富我们的课外生活。我期待着有更多的同学能来到这个英语村里来,让他们也体验到更多学习英语的快乐!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
Smoking is a bad habit that does harm to smoker and others. Many kinds of diseases and cancers are caused by smoking, such as tracheitis, lung cancer and many other diseases. Recent years, there are tens of thousands of people dying of smoking. But there still are many people enjoying smoking, because they think smoking is a kind of fashion and smoking is so cool, especially among teenagers. In addition, smoking does harm to others as well. Second hand smoking has been recognized harmful to other people. Even worse, it may cause more damages. Therefore, people should remember that smoking is harmful to others and those people who smokes should give up smoking as soon as possible.
吸烟是个坏习惯,它对吸烟者和别人都有害。很多疾病和癌症是有吸烟引起的,比如说气管炎,肺癌还有很多其他疾病。近年来,成千上万的人死于吸烟。但是仍然有很多人喜欢吸烟,因为他们认为吸烟是一种时尚,很酷,特别是青少年。另外,吸烟也会对别人有害。二手烟是公认的对别人有害的。更糟糕的是,它会带来更多伤害。因此,人们应该牢记吸烟有害他人,那些吸烟的人应该尽可能戒烟。
健康将影响整个家庭的生活作息,例如我的大姨丈,本来他是一位烟、酒、槟榔不离身的人,天天不懂得要养生爱惜身体?有一天他觉得喉咙不舒服去医院检查,才 知道是食道癌,后来开刀切除还要接受化疗,大阿姨、表姐、表哥每天医院家里两边忙碌奔跑,也常常看到他们害怕担心流眼泪。大姨丈手术后要承受身体的痛苦及虚弱,连同爷爷、奶奶我的爸爸、妈妈都为他烦恼,所以照顾好自己不让自己生病是很重要的。大姨丈自从生病后只要看到有人抽烟、喝酒、吃槟榔,都会把自己亲身体验劝谏身边周遭亲朋好友。要懂得爱惜身体不要吃有害身体食物,也要少吃垃圾食物,以免影响身体健康。
现代的.文明病那么多,每日生活在噪音吵杂、空气污染的环境中过生活,若不在多注意生活起居、饮食习惯,那么你将是那位疾病缠身,带给全家人痛苦的人,所以每个人都要爱惜自己、珍惜健康,唯有健康的身体才有快乐的人生。
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
I attended Jack's birthday party tonight. After dinner, Jack gave cigarets to our boy students present.
At the important moment, I stop them and told them the bad effects of smoking: firstly Smoking is a waste of money and it's greatly harmful to our health. And it can lead to fires easily. So we should not smoke at all.
But it seemed helpless and they wouldn't listen to me. Somebody even said that body and health belonged to themselves and it's up to them to decide whether to smoke or not. I told him calmly, "Even if you have the right to harm your own body, but it doesn't mean that you have the same right to harm others'."
At last, they agreed with me, and some students said that they would never smoke any longer.
For the next one hour, we danced and sang happily, and nobody did smoke again.I felt very happy that my classmate all understood the harmness of smoking.
我今晚参加了杰克的生日派对。晚饭后,杰克给我们的男同学吸烟。
在重要的时刻,我阻止并告诉他们吸烟的不良影响:首先,吸烟很浪费钱,它对对我们的健康危害很大。它会很容易引起火灾。所以我们不应该吸烟,所以我们不能吸烟。
但很无奈似乎他们不听我的。甚至有人说身体是自己的,这是是否吸烟由他们自己说了算。我平静地说,“即使你有伤害自己身体的权利,但这并不意味着你要伤害别人的权利。”
最后,他们同意我的看法,一些学生说他们不会再抽烟了。
在接下来的一个小时里,我们跳舞,唱歌,没有人吸烟了。我感到非常高兴,我的同学都知道了吸烟的危害。
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