描写夏天作文中午开头句子有诗意

描写夏天作文中午开头句子有诗意

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描写夏天作文中午开头句子有诗意

描写夏天作文中午开头句子有诗意【一】

今天中午,杨老师神秘地对体育委员说:“下去问而体育老师借两个乒乓”然后,让我们报纸裹成类似于水槽的样子,我那一颗好奇的心又犯了,心中一个劲的'想“老师带我们做活动的准没错,可是为什么一定要乒乓球和“水槽”呢到你是一个怎样的游戏呢?

一到大操场,老师便给我们介绍游戏规则:首先把裹好的报纸一个一个的连接在一起,乒乓球要从报纸上滑落到呼啦圈里才算胜利,如果前面没有报纸了后面一个人要主动的接上去。

游戏开始了,首先我们1队和2队先比。乒乓球从最上面一个人的手中“刷”一下子像做报纸滑滑梯一样滑到了地面。管不了那么多了,对方的快到一半了!我心想,连忙抓起乒乓球放在我裹的报纸上然后大叫:“谁来接一下呀!”队员们立即梦中惊醒过来,连忙跑来接住乒乓球。渐渐地,我对只把乒乓球放在眼里,哪儿管什么队伍呀!此时,心情一步一步的紧张,快到终点了!快到终点了!“太棒了,我们胜利了!”一阵欢呼声响彻云霄。对方不服,要求再战一次,我们欣然答应,因为有实力什么都不怕。

第二场比赛开始了。硪们吸取了上轮的缺陷,将计划更精确了一步,队伍保持不乱,尽量少掉球。可一个要求做的还好,第二个就不怎么好了。“人都去哪儿了!”只见梅子涵大叫声,让我们立即去他那边救球。台下的观众越看越高兴,然后的双掌合十,仿佛在向上天保佑某队利:有的在叫“加油”;有的觉得十分精彩“一蹦三尺多高”......“又胜利了”我们又一次的大叫起来了,我想对2队说:不要灰心,下次还有机会打败我们。

这一次的活动给予我们了一个道理:团结是一切困难的钥匙,是克服困难的刀刃。

描写夏天作文中午开头句子有诗意【二】

一个好的主题句是文章成功的一半。不仅文章有主题,段落有纲,句也必有中心。文章失却主题,就会不知所云;落无纲,则一盘散沙,句缺中心,就无意义。所以,在立足于篇章时,一定要首先明确文的主题;在发展段落时,也要首先写好主题句。从PETS三的特点来考虑,主题句最好是置于文首或段首,这样让人一目了然! 以下就是两个实用的开门见山式发展主题句的方法。

●To begin with, we must attach the greatest importance possible to this issue/fact (key word.

●As is well known to all, it is now high time that we took this (topic word into serious consideration.

描写夏天作文中午开头句子有诗意【三】

好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:

● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。

● 长短句结合。

由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:

I think …

I hope…

He does it.

He will take it

这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:

1.间或使用主从复句。

Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因

比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.

2.使用分词结构句。

The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.

比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.

Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.

比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.

3.使用不定式句。

To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚

To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申

To do it well, you must plan it well.

比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.

4.倒装句

Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.

比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.

No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.

比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.

5.失衡句

whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.

比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.

That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.

比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.

当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:

●As a creature, every one knows.

●Actions speak louder than words.

●Practice makes perfect.

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