August, September and October are the months of kites flying, because the wind blows north-westwards. During these months, many Wonderful kites are flying in the blue sky.
One day as the school was over, Qin Bo, my classmate, called me accompanying him to have kite flying at the big grass field. I had not been flown kite for a long time. So I promised him at last, when I reached there at five, I found him waiting for me.
Many boys were flying their kites higher in the sky. They were excited when they found their kites win another's. They shouted with joy and jumped up and down.
Not long after, Qin Bo's kite was in the sky, but mine was not. I was so disappointed that I wanted to give up. But I thought how disgraceful I was. So I asked Qin Bo to exchange the kites. Oh! His kite was wonderful. It was so light that it flow higher than the kites of all. He told me why my kite could not fly because it was maderoughly; the head was heavy, and the end was light, I agreed and made up my mind to make a new kne that would fly high in the sky.
成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
(一,介绍你SpringFestival.
TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.MyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestival.It
comesinJanuaryorFebruary.TheSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsin
China.BeforetheSpringFestivalpeopleoftenpreparesomethingnewanddeliciousfood.On
theeveoftheSpringFestival,peopleoftengettogethertohaveabigdinner.Chicken,fishand
dumplingsarespecialfood.DuringtheSpringFestival,familyoftengotovisittheirrelatives
andfriends.Childrencangetmuchluckymoney.IliketheSpringFestivalbecauseIcanspenda
lotofhappytimewithmyfamily.
(二介绍中秋节
TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.IliketheMid-autumnFestivalbest.It’sone
ofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.ItcomesonlunarAugust15th.Familyoftengettogether
forthefestival.OntheMid-autumnnightfamilyhaveabigdinner,thentheyenjoythefull
moonandsharethedeliciousmooncakeswiththeirfamily.Themooncakescarrypeople’sbest
wishestothefamilytheloveandmiss.IlikethisfestivalbecauseIcanspendahappytimewith
myfamily.
In the afternoon, my mother and I went to South Lake Park to fly kites. As a result, it was found that many years ago to buy the puppy parachute kite is broken, so I and my mother in the park and bought a new kite. A silver kite plane. It's beautiful. We tied the string together, and put it up when there is a wind. The wind comes, kite flying, but the wind stopped, the kite fell down again, so repeated several times. Originally, kite flying is not as simple as imagined.
In a little while, to a great wind, the kite flew very high, has been flying into the air. I was dancing with joy, very happy. "Oh dear! Not good." Mother suddenly called out. I quickly asked her mother: "what?" My mother said, and who do not know the plane kite kite line. At this time, I saw a lot of aircraft flying kites, not only worried, "how to do? How to do?" I saw my mother side line side goes to go forward.
At this time, the owner of the kite winding --- a small brother also came. The little brother and mother together with the patient to tie the line to solve. The line was untied. I looked up and saw the plane flying kites flying in the sky. The air of the kite flying high, the hands of the mother line also put more long. I suddenly saw something on the kite line spinning quickly. Mom said, that's a kite line. Suddenly, the kite line is joint involved with the high flying free.
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