一),从你的好友WangLin的appearance,personality,hobbies等方面叙述他过去和现在
的不同。
Ihaveafriend.HisnameisWangLin.Wehaven’tseeneachotherforthreeyears.Hehas
changedalot.Heusedtobethinandshort.Hewasalittleshywhenhewasintheprimary
school.Hisfaceturnedredwhenhetalkedtogirls.Butnowheistallandalittlefat.Heisn’tshy
anymore.Heisoutgoing.Heoftenplaysbasketballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Heusedto
likeplayingpingpong,butnowhelikesplayingbasketball.Hethinksplayingbasketballcan
makehimgrowtallerandstronger.Hedidn’tusetolikeEnglish,butnowheis
interestedinit.Nowheispopular.Lookatthegirlsaroundhim.
二),可以从长相,性格,学习等方面谈论自己的变化。
Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Iusedtohaveshorthair,butnowIhavelong
hair.InthepastIwasquietandshy.However,nowI’mactiveandoutgoing,andlliketalking
withothers.
ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasthatIusedtoplaycomputergamesanddidbadlyin
English,butnowIhavemadegreatprogresswiththehelpofmyEnglishteacher.Thisisthemost
importantchangebecauseatalkwithherinfluencedme.IfIwanttoplaybetter,Ishouldlearn
Englishbetter.NowIamgoodatEnglish.Thismakesmyteacherandparentstakeprideinme
now.
三),生活多姿多彩,变化无处不在。假设今年暑假你回到了你三年前就读过的小学,你发
现学校已经发生了很大的变化。原来陈旧的教学楼变成了高大的新教学楼;过去学生们只能
在教学楼前活动,现在他们可以在绿树成荫的大操场玩耍。原来只能整天在教室里学习,现
在有了电脑室,美术室,音乐室····
Thissummervacation,Iwentbacktotheprimaryschool.Istudiedtherethreeyearsago.
Ifindtheschoolhaschangedalot.Inthepast,theteachingbuildingswereold,butnowthereare
tallandnewteachingbuildings.Weusedtodosomeactivitiesonlyinfrontoftheteaching
buildings,butnowtherearebigplaygroundwithlotsoftreesaroundit.Wecanplaythere.
Weusedtostudyintheclassroomallday,butnowtherearecomputerclassrooms,artclassrooms,
musicclassroomsandsoon.Ihopetheschoolwillbecomebetterandmorebeautiful.
四),(改自江苏省南通市中考题请你按照下面表格的提示,写一篇题为“ChangesinMy
Hometown
要求:1.2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文;
3.词数:80词左右(包括已经写出的单词)。
ChangesinMyHometown
分析:本篇作文的题目和要点已经给定,有两种写法,一是今昔整体对比,也就是先说明过
去的总体情况,再说明现在的总体情况;二是单项对比,也就是先说明过去的房子是什么样
子的,而现在的房子是什么样子的,按照不同的比较项目逐一列举。最后也可通过对比,表
达自己对家乡变化的喜悦之情或对家乡的热爱。
在选词方面,同学们可灵活运用本单元重点结构usedtodo/be或thereusedtobe/do,注
One day, Paula and Richard decided to make a kite.
First they went out and found two straight sticks of the same length. They brought them back home and tied them with a piece of string into the shape of a cross. Then they took some string and used it to tie the four ends of the sticks together. Then, they spread some brightly coloured paper over the frame and glued it around the string.They stuck a tail made of paper to one of the corners, and tied a long string to the centre of the kite.
On the next windy day, they took the kite to a hill near their house and flew it.
一天,保罗和理查德决定做一个风筝。
首先,他们出门找了两根一样长的直木棍。他们把木棍带回家,用一根绳子把它们绑成十字形。然后他们又拿了些绳子,把木棍的四个顶端连在一起。然后,他们把一些颜色鲜艳的纸涂上胶水,粘在风筝的框架上。他们将纸做的尾巴粘在一角,在风筝中间系上一根长绳。
在接下来的一个有风的日子里,他们就在家附近的小山上放风筝了。
成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐,每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如:
必须按时回家,不准打电子游戏等。请你结合家庭的实际情况,根据下面的提示
和要求,以“MyFamilyRules”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家规;2、对家规的感受;3、对父母的建议。
要求:1、必须包括提示内容,可以适当发挥;2、词数:80个左右;3、文
中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
MyfamilyRules
Myparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetell
yousomeofthem.IamnotallowedtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfing
theInternetonschooldays,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodo
myhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomevery
morning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewith
them,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,
Iwillfollowthem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.
Unit8ItmustbelongtoCarla
【原创习作点评】
请以Jack的身份根据下面提示帮他给他的老师Mr.Black发一封电子邮
件。词数在80词左右。
提示:1.当Jack到家时,他发现自错拿了英语书,他认为肯定是Tracy
的,因为书上有Tracy的名字。
2.Jack的书可能在Mr.Black家的书桌上。如果在,请老师帮忙保存起来,如
果不在,麻烦Mr.Black告诉他Tracy家的电话号码。
DearMr.Black,
Iamsorrytotroubleyou.Iwantyourhelp.AfterIgothome,Ifoundthatmy
Englishbookwasn’tinmybackpackandItookawrongbook.Ithinkitmustbe
Tracy’s①book,becausehernameisonit.IthinkmyEnglishbookmightbeon
yourdesk.Ifitisthere,pleasehelpmekeepit.Ifitisn’tonthedesk,pleasetellme
Tracy’stelephonenumber.Shemighttakemybook.Iamlookingforwardto
youre-mail.Thankyouverymuch.
Jack
教师点评这是一篇比较优秀的学生习作。得分点(1)内容完整,行文流畅(2)
We take out our kites, mine are butterfly, my friends are birds, all are so funny. I start to let my kite fly, but it could not, so I run faster and faster, then my kite flies, I go let go it gradually. A few minutes later, my friends’ kites are also flying.
Seeing our kites flying, I feel so free. Today, I have a great time.
现在我已经放寒假了,我很开心,可以和朋友们玩。朋友们和我约定风来了,我们就去公园放风筝。今天风终于来了,早饭过后,我和朋友们去公园。我们拿出自己的\'风筝,我的是蝴蝶样,朋友的是鸟的样子,都很有趣。我开始让风筝飞,但是飞不起来,因此我跑得越来越快,风筝终于飞起来了,我慢慢放飞。不一会儿,朋友们的风筝也飞起来了。看到我们的风筝飞着,我觉得很自由。今天,我玩得很开心。
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