My father is a tall, with big eyes and black hair...
He is also a kind person, like to participate in activities...
I remember one time I failed the exam on the exam. But dad didnt scold me also said that after "to learn" Im a 5th grade children, still have to need to take care of mom and dad. In my small heart father is how great ah! Dad to work to make money to feed us, dad every day to day work. Father will be very early Monday to Friday to cook for us...
When I was a kid my father often told me stories, for example: "Cinderella" "little red riding hood," "Snow White"... Actually when I was a child is very naughty, often fell bad things, break things, dad would say: be careful next time dont fell bad things again, each child will get errors, mistakes and just change the are good children. The words impressed deeply in my heart. I want to say to my father: dad, you really great, you are my hero in my heart.
我的爸爸是个个子高高的,眼睛大大的`,头发黑黑的……
他也是个善良的人,喜欢参加活动……
我记得有一次我在考试上考砸了。但是爸爸并没骂我还说“以后要好好学习”我现在是个5年级的孩子,还得需要爸爸妈妈的照顾。在我小小的心里爸爸是多么伟大呀!爸爸要工作赚钱养活我们,爸爸每天还要起早贪黑的工作。星期一到星期五爸爸会很早起来为我们做饭……
在我小时候的时候爸爸经常会给我讲故事比如说:《灰姑娘》《小红帽》《白雪公主》……其实我小时候很调皮,经常会摔烂东西,弄坏东西,爸爸都会说:下次小心点不要再摔烂东西了,每个孩子都会出错,知错就改那是好孩子。这句话深深的印在了我的心里。我想对爸爸说:爸爸你真的很伟大,在我的心目中你是我的英雄。
你们好!今天能在这里写信给你们,真的是我莫大的荣幸。虽然没有看过原版,也不知道是否真实,但是我承认自从看过三国演义之后,我就变成你们的「忠实粉丝」了。在我的家,三国演义不但有小说,还有漫画版,甚至连绘本都有!所以,从小到大,你们都一直用不一样,却又大同小异的脸,伴随在我的身边。
我最希望、也是这封信最主要和你们探讨的,一直就是「和平」的问题。大家做好自己的本分,不要妄想登天,这一切的一切,不就不会发生了吗?可是,人心不是我想象的那么天真,人心是自私的!每个人都有自己的企图心,企图占领国家、企图称霸世界……,可是你们有没有想过,这些永无止境的企图,将会牵连多少无辜、平凡的老百姓们受害?难道就不能和平共处吗?
或许,你们会觉得那都是我的一面之词,你们会说我根本没生活过乱世。没错!我既不懂武功、也不会内政,我甚至不了解为什么要战争!为什么一切事情,都要靠动干戈才能了结?那如果战败了,了结掉的又是多少人的性命呢?就算三分了天下,干戈有平息吗?你们说皇帝无能,那无法让百姓安康的你们,不是更无能?
现在是发达的国际社会,距离三国的时代已经过了好几百年。再谈这些,不仅无法改变既定的'事实,也不能甦醒牺牲掉的亡魂,所以其实没什么用了。既然事情终究会过去,那战争的意义何在?既然生命终将会灭亡,那当上霸王的意义又何在?
我相信世间有轮回,当你们投胎至现代,有何感想?地上的土是你们曾经踩过的,土地上的人们安居乐业、自由又快乐,从不担心何时有战争,也不必被国家给束缚住……。因此,战争不是唯一,世界是大家的,不是你们的!如果再给你们一次机会,希望你们可以停止战争,统一天下,改写历史。
敬祝福如东海寿比南山
中华民国一百零一年二月二十三日
最尊敬您的王倩怡
这一个周末里,我读了故事书《英雄人物》,书中写了董存瑞、王二小、岳飞、狼牙山五壮士、雷锋、小萝卜头宋振中等这些英雄,描绘了这些人物乐于助人、勇敢顽强、面对敌人临死不屈的精神,而这些人物里我最喜欢王二小了!
1929年,王二小出生在一个很贫困的农民家庭里。有一次,他的.妈妈被鬼子十分残忍的***害了,11岁的王二小便成了孤儿,有人给他饭吃,有人给他衣服,可王二小不想连累他们,便到一个地主家当放牛郎,黑心的地主只要不满意,抬手就打,张口就骂。王二小一年到头果汁猪狗不如的日子。后来,王二小参加了儿童团站岗放哨。有一次鬼子来抢粮,鬼子对王二小吼道:“快带我们去卧虎沟!”王二小假装说:“好。”于是王二小把鬼子带到了一个四周都是坑坑洼洼、找不到离开的路的地方,王二小见鬼子筋疲力尽,心中暗喜,打算把鬼子带进李团长布置的埋伏圈内,当鬼子走进埋伏圈时,寂静的山谷响起了一片口号声、喊***声,敌人被打得落花流水,才知道中了埋伏,那中队长举起刺刀刺进了王二小的胸膛,13岁的王二小牺牲了。读了这个故事我的泪水滑落了,我的心被深深的震撼了,为了保卫祖国,他身上中了无数刀,他像风雨中的巨人倒下了,他用自己的生命谱写了一首英雄的壮歌。
我想我们应该好好学习,将来用自己的力量回报祖国、父母、老师!
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
1948年,董存瑞所在的解放军准备攻打热河的隆化。敌人在隆化城周围修建了许多碉堡,他们躲在碉堡里向外扫射,使我们部队无法前进。只要炸掉这些碉堡,解放军才能前进。经过了深思熟虑之后,连长决定把这个光荣而艰巨的任务交给了董存瑞带领的爆破组,命令他们炸掉隆化城北边的,火力异常凶猛的4个炮楼和5个碉堡。
董存瑞的机枪,像一阵飓风,突然刮起来了。开路先锋的爆破组,就碠股火力的掩护下出动了。董存瑞挟起炸药,一挥手,就冲向前方去了。战友郑顺义和其他几个队员也冲了出去。
就要接近碉堡的.时候,敌人的火力集中在了董存瑞的身边,他趴在地上,向四周望了一下,四周被子弹打得尘土飞扬。敌人见他不动,以为他死了。就在这时,他向突击队组长郑顺义一挥手,把便领会了,投了两颗手榴弹,响声一起董存瑞便冲了上去。冲到碉堡前,敌人的机枪咯咯地响起来,他机警地伏在两个枪口的中间,机枪震动得他微微抖动。他快速地把炸药放在碉堡上,拉响了导火线,翻身滚下来。只听山崩地裂的一声响,第一个碉堡被炸飞了,紧接着,董存瑞跑到第二个碉堡,当敌人发现时,他已把炸药拉响了,战友孙有德也把第三个碉堡炸飞了,紧接着三声巨响,我军的冲锋号响起,吓得敌人逃都逃不了。
战士们越来越接近隆化中学时,敌人的冲锋枪像在风暴雨般打来。把我们压了下来,部队无法前进。仔细观察,发现机枪是从桥上打来的,桥两边有围墙,顶上还有盖顶,是一个非常坚固的碉堡。不炸掉这座碉堡,解放军无法前进,这个艰巨的任务又落在了爆破队的身上。
一个战士上去了,两个战士上去了,三个战士上去了,都因碉堡的坚固而牺牲了,董存瑞决定自己上,可连长和指导员都推托不让他去,右董存瑞非常固执,连长没办法再推托了,只好让他去,并让他小心点。
董存瑞几次把炸药放在桥上都滑了下来。想找东西支撑,可四周没有一样东西可以,经过深思之后,决定为了全中国,牺牲自己的生命也无所谓。
董存瑞托起炸药包,抵在桥上,右手拉着导火线,用心全身的力量,喊出一句口号:“同志们,为了胜利,前进啊!
一声巨响,碉堡被炸飞了。这声巨响像命令一样,让战士们一跃而起,扑向敌人。隆化中学的围墙被炸飞了。
红旗在隆化中学升了起来,残余的敌人投降了,隆化解放了。
董存瑞为了全中国,为了人民的幸福牺牲了自己的人命,是我们的骄傲,是中华民族的英雄!
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