又是一年女神节,我决定为我们家的女神妈妈榨一杯香甜可口的奶昔。
下午写完作业,我便开始着手实现我的大业。
我先拿来一只红彤彤的大苹果,然后从工具箱里翻出一把削刀。我将削刀的锯部对准果皮,唰地一下往下削去,只听咣当一声,削刀卡在了果肉里,拔也拔不出来,我有点慌了,费了九牛二虎之力才将它拔出来。我不灰心,决定试第二次。可那果皮又像打了蜡似的,削刀在上面划了几次,都没伤着一点儿皮毛,顺着皮自由自在地往下滑。这下我可真急了眼了,没想到,怎么在第一步就卡壳了?这可怎么办哪?
突然,我急中生智,回想起妈妈平常为我削苹果的样子来。哦,对,妈妈说过,削皮动作要轻一点儿,太重反而没效果。于是,我照着妈妈说的做,轻轻的,轻轻的,我终于慢慢削下了一块皮,渐渐的,我找到了感觉,动作也快了起来。
削好了皮,我又拿出水果刀切苹果。我找准位置,猛下一刀,可我感觉切的是一块石头,苹果只留下一条细长的痕迹,根本切不进去。我闭目凝神,又忆起妈妈切水果时,是从四周各切一刀,再切下的。我按照方法去做,果真顺利地切了下来。然后,我倒了一杯鲜牛奶进去,一切准备就绪。
最后一步,榨汁儿。这一步容易,只需将榨瓶放到机器上,盖紧盖子,先后按下启动奶昔键即可。我按下按钮,噼榨汁机听话地开始工作了。
不一会儿,我自制的`奶昔就诞生了,我立刻把榨好的奶昔倒进碗里。那奶昔绵绸如雪,靠近再闻一闻,我的鼻子、心里似乎都沾上奶香了。我赶紧把它端到妈妈面前,开心地说:妈妈,喝甜的可以保持好心情。祝您节日快乐!妈妈的脸上笑开了花,虽然刚才有点忙乱,但此时我的心里也漾起了爱的涟漪
其实,看似简单的榨奶昔,经历过之后才发觉是有多么不简单啊!我想起妈妈平时为我做的那些小事,洗衣服、钉纽扣、冲牛奶哪一样又都是容易的呢?因为有爱,妈妈会将每一件小事做成习惯,做到极致。
谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。一次小小的榨奶昔,也让我懂得了感恩。感恩妈妈,感恩爸爸,感恩每一个爱我们的人。世界不也正是因为有他们,才有着无限的爱和不灭的希望吗?
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
我们做的是水果奶昔,老师让我们提前准备了自己喜欢的水果带到班里。老师拿着料理机和牛奶等材料进来啦,教室里热闹非凡,像炸开了锅似的,同学们议论纷纷。老师咳了两声,我们立马就安静了,目不转睛地看着,生怕漏掉任何一个步骤。
看完老师的示范,我自告奋勇地上了台。我先把切块了的桃子和常温牛奶倒入料理机当中,在把桃子打的`“粉身碎骨”后,再加入冰牛奶和一些蜂蜜,搅拌均匀,一杯桃子奶昔就做好了。我把奶昔倒入杯子里,往上面撒了一些奥利奥饼干碎,又放了几颗心形软糖在上面,真好看!我喝了一口,桃子味掺杂着牛奶味,香香甜甜的,真好喝!
这是我第一次做奶昔,做的很成功。大家是不是也觉得很简单呢?不妨也试一试吧!
说干就干,我开始准备材料和工具。一切准备就绪,我便行动起来。第一步也是最重要的一步,我小心把鸡蛋的蛋清和蛋黄分离开来,我小心翼翼地轻磕鸡蛋,把蛋壳分成两半,把蛋黄和蛋清在两个蛋壳中不断地倾倒,直至它们完全分离,经过一刻钟的努力,我成功分离了四个鸡蛋。俗话说:好的开始是成功的一半。第一步成功了,使得我对后面的步骤更有信心。我一气呵成地完成了搅蛋清,拌蛋黄,和面粉等一系列步骤,最后我把混合好的面糊倒进了电饭煲里,按下开关,我辛勤地劳动就要出成果了,我的心情非常激动,又有点紧张。激动的是第一次自己动手做蛋糕,紧张的是怕蛋糕做失败了。二十分钟后,一阵香味扑鼻而来,我迫不及待地打开锅盖,黄嫩嫩的蛋糕散发着诱人的香气,仿佛在称赞我出色的表现。
接下来就要装饰蛋糕了!!!我先把蛋糕均匀的.涂上奶油,再拿起一个绿色的奶油棒,在蛋糕的中心添上了两片嫩绿色的叶子,然后把粉色奶油棒和白色奶油棒的颜色混在一起,当然,粉色要多一些,要不然花朵就是白色的了。再然后我把桃子切成碎块,均匀的放在蛋糕边上,当然还有花边,我用一种很细的奶油棒镶嵌上了一种类似于波浪般的花边。最后我用一种纯棕色的奶油棒做了一个小猴子,给他了一双鲜红色的小露珠般似得小眼睛,手里还捧着一个桃子呢!!看上去生龙活虎。
虽然这个蛋糕没有我想像出来的那么好,但吃着我亲手做的蛋糕,我心里还是美滋滋的。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
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