Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
How time flies! Three years has passed. I will graduate from junior high school. I will enter a new school to study. What will my new head teacher be like?I imagine that she/he is not only young but also beautiful/handsome. She/He maybe both patient with us and kind to us. She/He is also strict with us. I hope she/he is outgoing. She/He can understand us and make friends with us. If she/he likes doing sports, we can play together after class. She/He can get moreknowledge from her/him.I am looking forward to seeing her/him!
我的新班主任
时间过得真快!三年过去了。我将从初中毕业。我将进入一所新学校学习。我的新班主任会是什么样的'人?
我想她/他不仅年轻,而且漂亮/英俊。她/他也许对我们既有耐心又对我们很好。她/他对我们也很严格。我希望她/他是外向的。她/他能理解我们并与我们交朋友。如果她/他喜欢运动,我们课后可以一起玩。她/他可以从她/他那里获得更多的知识。
我期待着见到她/他!
到了那里,我们把东西放在宾馆里,就一起去植物园参观。我们看见了铁瓜树,高高的,树皮厚厚的、硬硬的;还看见了鸡蛋花、莲雾树等等……
晚上吃完饭后,爸爸带我去海边玩,我卷起裤子,跑向大海,浪花也一起向前冲,好象要和我拥抱,直到我看见大海才知道,那飓风掀起大海惊涛骇浪,直到我看见大海才明白,那太阳搅乱海水染成蓝色的海洋,直到我看见大海才清楚,那海水来去拍打海岸呼吸的欢畅。我还捡了好多贝壳,其中有一种是最美的.叫彩扇贝,分布于热带太平洋,生息环境于深海底,种类稀少。
第二天,我们去了南山的大小洞天,大洞天是整个南山,小洞天是神仙住的地方。下午我们一起去游泳,我刚刚下水时特别害怕,一看见妹妹像一只鸭子一样快活的游着我一点也不害怕了。也赶紧跳下去,向海里游去,游着游着我游到了水位最深的地方,妹妹看见我游得那么快,她也想游过来。可惜的是妹妹一次游不到一米,才九十多厘米,一游到那儿她就会沉下去。六点整了,我累得气喘吁吁,都走不动了!
第三天是最开心的一天,也是最难忘的一天。我们去了南山的海边,零距离观看了一百零八米高的海上观音圣像、观海平台。 其中我最喜欢的是108米高的海上观音,她是正观音的一体化三尊,分别表示和平、智慧、慈悲。为华夏造像之最。有一句是:“祈福万事兴,南海拜观音”。然后就用我的名字写诗。那个叔叔给我写的诗是:林茂枝青花倍红,美姿娴淑玉玲珑,君秀端庄分外娇,学林植栋金榜名。看完后,我们准备回海口时,妹妹和我都累了,所以想要爸爸背我,爸爸不动声色,让我和妹妹比赛,看谁坐的“车”跑得快。过了五六分钟,我们到终点了,妹妹输了,因为我的动作比她快。下午,我们就回海口了。
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