五年级购物英语作文题【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级购物英语作文题【二】
在浩瀚无边的宇宙里，漂浮着一个巨大的红苹果，它是一个苹果星球。
在苹果星球里，住着一条胖乎乎的肉虫子。
它每天除了吃苹果肉，喝苹果汁，就是躺在苹果核中间的苹果洞里睡大觉。
有一次，它吃得太多了，一路啃啊，啃啊，啃到了苹果皮上。粉红色的苹果皮，被它啃成了半透明的。这时，它看见了从外面透过来的几束光亮。
“这是什么?”肉虫子想，“这墙壁外面一定有一些我没见过的东西。”它感到有些害怕，就赶紧又缩回了苹果核里。
可是，从此以后，肉虫子每天都会梦见外面的那个宇宙，每次的`梦都不太一样。有时，是红彤彤，暖洋洋的;有时，又是黑洞洞，冷冰冰的。它醒来之后，就越来越想知道，外面究竟是什么模样呢?
因为想得多了，睡得少了，它就觉得更饿了，它吃得越来越多，越来越快，最后，苹果星球被它啃得就剩下一层薄薄的皮了，而它却长成了一条很大很大的肉虫子。
终于，有一天，这层皮“啪”的一声破了，肉虫子从瘪了下去的苹果星球里钻了出来，它看见了一个无边无际的世界，四面八方都有星辰在闪烁，真是太美了!
可是，肉虫子却觉得有点透不过气来，它的身体里似乎有什么东西正在迅速膨涨，涨得它快要裂开了。“我快死了吗?”肉虫子颤抖着想。
就在这一瞬间，一条闪闪发光的银丝忽然从它的嘴里喷了出来。这条银丝越来越长，长得缠住了肉虫子，把它和苹果星球裹在了一起，变成了一个圆圆的、闪闪发光的银茧。
苹果星球就这样消失了。又过了很久很久的时间，从这个漂浮在宇宙中的茧子里，钻出了一只七彩斑斓的大蝴蝶，它衔着一颗金色的苹果种籽，向着宇宙的最深处飞去——它是要去寻找一片最宽广的土地，好种下这颗种籽，让它长成一棵开满花朵的大树，那时，宇宙间就又会飘起一阵阵苹果的香气……
五年级购物英语作文题【三】
我不敢去面对我没有做过的事情。第一次妈妈给我十元钱，让我一个人独自去千盛百货买酸牛奶。这是我没有做过的事情，我想了想终于还是鼓起勇气走出了家门。
我走啊走，终于走到了千盛百货。此时此刻，我忽然觉得没有那么害怕了。我走进商场找到了食品区，看到了酸牛奶，此刻我很高兴，因为我找到了我自己想要的东西，我的心情豁然开朗。我要买5袋酸牛奶。可是，有很多种酸牛奶有华西酸牛奶、菊乐酸牛奶、乃奇乐酸牛奶、新希望酸牛奶……。我东看看，西比比，我最后还是确定华西酸牛奶好一点，就拿了5袋华西酸牛奶。每袋1元2角钱，5袋就是6元钱。
我走到收银台，看见人山人海的人，我走到一个收银台，把钱给了售货员，阿姨找给了我4元钱。我拿着牛奶就往外跑，跑到家门口我看见妈妈在门口等着我了。我飞快地跑到妈妈的身旁。把牛奶和钱给了妈妈。妈妈高兴的对我说：“你真是太棒了！”我听了这些高兴得不得了。
今天，我什么都不怕了！真是一个有趣的第一次！
