初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大,但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能,人们可以i用电脑做很多事情,比如说看电影,听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器,所以我很喜欢电脑。
今天我和妈妈一起在电脑上看漫画《父与子》,我给大家讲一个里面的故事,叫《有趣的漫画书》。。有一天,一家人该吃饭了,妈妈和爸爸坐到了餐桌上,爸爸说:“小明怎么不在呢?”妈妈说:“你去儿子的屋看看,儿子是不是在屋里呢?”于是,爸爸就去小明的房间看了看,小明趴在地板上看书呢!爸爸说:“你快点儿,妈妈等着你去吃饭,快吃饭去!”小明就听了爸爸的话去吃饭了。小明和妈妈坐好了,一看,爸爸怎么又不见了。妈妈就跟小明说:“去看看你的房间,是不是爸爸在你房间呢?”于是,小明就去了,一看,爸爸又在地板上看书,小明很生气:刚才爸爸让他去吃饭,结果爸爸还在看书。这个故事不是一般的笑话,是特别的搞笑,小明很可爱,爸爸也很可爱,他们可以演笑话了。
半个月前的一次教育活动观摩,让我看到了系列漫画书《父与子》的魅力,这是德国埃·奥·卜劳恩的一部经典之作,据说是作者与儿子的真实写照,简单的黑白线条,向人们展示了一对可爱父子的平凡又温情、幽默且诙谐的生活片段。受到那位老师的启发,让我认识到漫画作品的教育价值,看图——理解——讲述,在我们轻松一笑之后,父亲和儿子乐观、幽默地面对人生的态度也给我们留下了深刻的印象。我想:妙儿的理解能力和语言表达能力欠佳,生活中也缺少幽默感,这不就是一部很好的教材吗?通过这样的练习,不知道会一举几得呢!于是,从网上找了一些《父与子》的漫画图片,试着和妙儿一起看,今天看了其中的一集《有趣的圣诞书》,在看完图片后,妙儿呵呵地笑着,并主动要讲给我听,她给儿子起了个名字叫“小明”,故事讲完后,还说:“这个小明和他爸爸太有意思了,真搞笑!”要不是因为时间关系,真想让她多看几集。今天算是首战告捷,妙儿对这部漫画很有兴趣,对画面内容理解也不错,只是不太注意有些小细节,另外,个别地方的语言使用不够恰当。下面,我们就一起来欣赏一下吧!
这是一本选材于家庭故事的漫画,它出自德国漫画大师埃·奥·卜劳恩之手。
该书主人公是一对父子,爸爸幽默搞笑,儿子淘气可爱,是一对世界著名的欢喜冤家。虽然这本书里没有文字,但其有趣的漫画,却让人更懂得了漫画的内容。 父与子,他们过着无忧无虑,快乐温馨的生活,从一对普通的父子成了200万马克和宫殿的继承人,又漂流到无人的小岛,但他们那善良、淳朴的性格和深深的父子情一直伴随着他们到漫画结尾。这部漫画以深深的父子情感动了数亿读者,但其间又不失搞笑之风。那就让我来介绍 父子俩吧 !|||爸爸 这位爸爸深爱着自己的儿子,虽然没有真正为我们说明,但在他的每一个举动中,都可以看出这一点。他非常善良,也非常幽默,同时带着一种傻乎乎的感觉,让人一见到他就有一种想笑的冲动。哦,对了,他还经常为了一些小错误,打儿子。不过,棍棒底下出孝子,儿子非常爱他的爸爸;俗话说;打是情,骂是爱。爸爸因为把孩子当做亲人,所以才打孩子。。这是一位十分爱自己孩子父亲。|||儿子 这是一个聪明、淘气的小男孩,他时常会“捉弄”老爸,但同时他又会使用他的小聪明替爸爸解决问题。但有时却会被爸爸“误解”,招来一顿痛打。他爱他的爸爸,当他的爸爸受到别人嘲笑时,他总会替他的爸爸打抱不平。这个小男孩虽然有一点小聪明,却总是想找机会不学习,哦,对了,他还很贪吃。就像我一样,会偷偷拿零花钱买东西,他和我一样有着纯真的遐想,有着无限的幻想。我们唯独不同的是:他有的是快乐的童年,巨大的空间。 这是一对快乐的父子,这是一对犹如兄弟的父子,这是一对搞笑幽默的父子。他们善良,他们淳朴,他们乐观,他们……他们就像是一对铁哥们(哦,比铁哥们还铁!),形影不离,最令人羡慕的是:他们之间没有隐私!
这就是父与子,一对不一样的父子,一对乐观善良的父子,一对令人羡慕的父子……不仅小说里,真实生活里也是有的哦!
在一个艳阳高照,骄阳似火的中午,大黄狗趴在树下———哧,哧地喘着粗气,知了在树上叫着。“好热,好热啊!”
而小东家是很凉爽的。慈爱的妈妈煮完饭,用洪亮的声音喊道:“吃饭了。肥壮的秃头大胡子爸爸迈着矫健的步伐,来到饭桌前坐下,闻了闻饭桌上的菜,“啊!好香哦!”大胡子爸爸情不自禁地说:“真是的,儿子去哪里呢?”小东妈妈说:“可能在屋子里吧!要不我去叫他。”爸爸说:“我去叫好了”。
小东爸爸走去小东屋前,打开门,说:“你在干什么?快去吃饭。”而小东却搭着下巴,在地上津津有味地看书,根本没听到父亲的话,说了几遍像口渴喝盐水———徒劳无功,急得像热锅上的蚂蚁———团团转,于是,他大叫一声,都快要把屋子震塌了。小东才隐隐约约听见,出去吃饭,而小东爸爸却心想:咦?儿子到底在看什么书,有这么好看?而等了好久的妈妈和儿子,都说:“你爸爸在干什么呀?怎么还不出来吃饭,菜都凉了,不出来吃饭我就拿家法伺候”真是出门不戴口罩———嘴上一套,根本不会这样做。小东的妈妈叫小东叫他爸爸,小东心想:真是女儿穿娘的鞋子——老样子。
小东迈着矫健的步伐,大步流星地走到门前,打开门说:“爸,吃饭了。”而看到的是爸爸正在看自己的漫画书,而爸爸看得却像瞌睡磕枕头——正合意,如果叫的话,岂不是会被爸爸骂,不叫的话,会被妈妈说,真是霸王敬酒——不干也得干。可是喊了几遍,老爸就是老榆木疙瘩——挪不动。小东和他爸爸真是相似,俗话说“有其父必有其子”。真是“百闻不如一见”
爸爸在家门口种了一棵小树,小树越长越高,长出了许多嫩叶。
一天,爸爸带我到树下量身高。爸爸让我背贴着小树站好,我照他说的去做,背挺得直直的,眼睛看着正前方,双脚并拢,一动也不动。爸爸用一把小锤子量好了我身高,然后把钉子钉在我身高的位置,用钉子当做记号。爸爸高兴地说:“这就是你的身高,我们做了记号,等明年再来量一量,就可以知道你长高了多少!”我听了也很兴奋,心想:一年之后,我一定会长高很多吧!
天渐渐变冷了,树枝上的叶子也都落光了,冬天来了。我和爸爸在门口一起堆了一个雪人,雪人盯着树上的那根钉子,好像也很好奇,想看我到底会长高多少呢!
冬去春来,寒冷的冬天很快就过去了。小树也慢慢长成了大树,枝头的叶子更加茂密了。和爸爸约好一年时间也快要到了。
这天,爸爸和我一起来到树下,他说:“一年过去了,我们再量一量,看看你有没有长高。”我激动地跑到那棵树下,抬头看了看,“咦?钉子怎么离我的头顶更远了呢?”我有点难过,心想:为什么一年后自己没有长高,反而变得更矮了呢?看我想了半天也想不明白,爸爸微笑地说:“哦,我忘了其实树也会长高的啊!”我突然恍然大悟,“对啊,一年过去了,小树长高了,原来不是我变矮了!”可是,我为什么还没有原来那么高呢?爸爸看着我,耐心地说:“小树跟我们一样也会长高,但是小树长得速度会更快。”我蹦着跳着要去摸那颗钉子,高兴地说道:“我也要像小树一样,快快长大!”爸爸看着我笑了。
一天中午,要吃饭了,调皮父亲和宝贝妈妈已经就坐了。
可看到儿子小刺猬头的位置上却没有影,调皮父亲于是就问:“我亲爱的老婆大人,您因该知道小刺猬头在哪吧。”宝贝妈妈指着书房说:“全地球人都知道。”于是父亲大步流星的向书房里走去,大声说道:“我的小刺猬头皇帝,该用膳了。”调皮父亲看里头没动静,便走进书房,打开书房门一看,小刺猬头正趴在地上专心致志的看书呢!调皮父亲就用手一把,把小刺猬头的耳朵揪了过去,大喊道:“哥们,该吃饭了,再不吃饭就不够哥们了。”小刺猬头故做害怕的说我的不良青年老大。”调皮老爸心想:这小兔崽子每天到这个时候都会去找人玩的,怎么这几天居然呆在书房里好好的看书,我这个聪明绝顶的父亲可要好好查查,什么《幽默大师》。说着就趴在地上、手托腮边,看起《幽默大师》起来。当小刺猬头坐在位置上时可调皮父亲的位置上却空空如也,宝贝妈妈发话了:“我们就再等一下秃头太监。”小刺猬头说:“喳,娘娘。”过了十分钟后调皮父亲还没有来。饭菜都凉了,宝贝妈妈又发话了:“小刺猬头,你给我去把秃头太监喊来。”小刺猬头心想:他刚刚恶整了我,这一次我要报仇。小刺猬头打开书房的门,看见调皮父亲像一匹马一样趴在地上,小刺猬头赶忙坐了上去嘴里叫着驾驾,还用手不停的拍打调皮爸的屁股。调皮父亲忙起来说:“大人,你把这本书借我看行吗?求你了。”小刺猬头仍然是不领情,父亲求了再求,小刺猬头终于答应了。小刺猬头便拿起“奏折”念道:“奉天成命,皇帝召曰,快去吃饭。”调皮父亲说:“喳!”
瞧!这对父与子高兴的出去了。
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