五年级英语看表格小作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语看表格小作文【二】
一个阳光明媚的下午，一群男孩子们高高兴兴地走到这片空地，把书包和帽子一丢，堆成两堆，便成了简易的球门。激烈的球赛开始了。
那位头发金黄的守门员，脸因紧张和高兴涨成了红色，虽然昨天膝盖被擦破了，但他毫不在意。只见他把双手放在膝盖上，半蹲着身子，聚精会神地盯着足球，跃跃欲试。
站在他身后的小男孩，穿着红色的运动服，挺着肚子，有些不服气，昨天大哥哥的腿摔破时，还是他踢进了一球，取得胜利呢。他想到这，有些洋洋得意。
过往的行人都被这场紧张的球赛吸引了。纷纷停下脚，坐在长凳上，也不知是谁家的小狗，它可对足球不感兴趣，它只对主人供它玩的小皮球感兴趣呢。现在正无所事事地在草地上打呼噜。
你瞧，那个带着弟弟的小男孩，目光紧紧的琐在黄队，坐着一动不动，生怕黄队输了。
和守门员一样有着金黄色头发的小男孩，伸长了脖子，口中轻声喃喃自语：加油！踢！好！站在他身后的，头上系着深红色蝴蝶节的小女孩儿，索性站起来，只见她双手叉腰，眉头紧皱，好像有什么不顺心。
戴红色帽子的小女孩，弯着腰，伸头向右望去，她涨红了脸，虽说她没有上战场但她的心跳自己清清楚楚能听见。
一位抱着洋娃娃的女孩，一直微笑着，眼睛却繁忙了，一直盯着球，看球究竟在哪队里。那个穿着绿衣服的小男孩，也许是第一次看见这种场面吧。他的小手在计算胜负，一边轻轻摇手，一边说：真精彩，太不可思议了。
看得最认真的算是那位大个子叔叔了，他看得津津有味。他想起了童年，他是足球的先锋，那是多么难忘的岁月啊，他又想到了将来足球事业的发展，和即将到来的世界杯。
五年级英语看表格小作文【三】
在一棵大树下，一场激烈的在足球赛正在进行。
简陋的空地上，在用书包堆成的简陋球门前，一个金发男孩守着球门。从他那紧张的神色可以看出，他就是守门员。在他的右脚，有一处伤口，用一块白布包着。他目不转睛的盯着对面，似乎对右脚的伤口毫不在乎。
他的身后，有一位候补人员。他是一个挺着肚子的男孩，身着红色的运动服，一身红服在明媚的阳光下闪闪发光，他一脸的不耐烦，似乎在想：快点到我上场吧！
在最右边，有一把长椅，观众们也紧张的看着赛场。
在最右边的一个男孩，抱着刚刚进来的弟弟，站在旁边，弟弟咬着红领巾，瞪大眼睛，似乎不想错过任何剧情。长椅下，不知道是谁家的狗狗，正舒服的躺在阳光下，看它那享受的表情，似乎对球赛的输赢不在乎。戴红帽子的哥哥双肘撑着红扑扑的脸蛋，弯腰看着赛场，似乎对太阳的燥热有点不习惯。在他身后，有一个小男孩，抬头垫脚的，好像被挡住了视线，身后的姐姐索性站了起来，红色的大蝴蝶结占了她头顶的三分之一，像雨伞一样，为她遮住了炎热的阳光。左边的小女孩一手抱着洋娃娃，一手又在洋娃娃精致的小脸上抚摸，那表情，像极了一位慈祥的母亲，看她那投入的神情，好像对比赛丝毫不感兴趣。穿着绿色的连体衣，正目不转睛的盯着赛场，好像是他在比赛似的。坐在最左边穿黑色风衣的的叔叔，似乎不理会太阳的拷打，津津有味的看着赛场，脸上还时不时露出一丝微笑，他似乎想起了自己的童年，想起了那些年奔驰在赛场上的那种惊心动魄的感觉。
这真是一场精彩的足球赛啊！
五年级英语看表格小作文【四】
一个阳黑暗媚的下午，在麦田尽头的牛瓜角树下，一场小足球赛正激烈地进行着，引来了不少观众，有小孩，也有大人。
矮墙边，有一个用书包和帽子做成的简易球门。球门正中央，站着一个沉稳的小球守门员。他肤色微棕。上身穿着一件黑色白领的短袖衫，下着一条青绿色裤子，右腿膝盖上有一处擦伤口，用白纱布包着。只见他半蹲着，身子微微向前倾。双腿叉着，目光炯炯有神，望着前方，，严阵以待，随时准备扑上前接住球。
站在他身后的小男孩，穿着白色的运动服，挺着肚子，有些不信服，昨天大哥哥的
腿摔破时，还是他踢走了一球，获得成功呢。他想到这，有些洋洋自得。
左边是一排长木凳，凳上坐着观看球赛的人们。一个黑黑的小男孩搂着他的小弟弟，俩人都聚精会神地看着，一只不知是谁家的哈巴狗正趴在地上打呼噜;旁边有三个红领巾，第一个小男孩似乎被什么挡住了视线，情不自禁地弯下了腰，他后边的男孩则使劲伸着脖子，戴蝴蝶结的小女孩索性站了起来;前面还有一位束发姑娘，她抱着心爱的洋娃娃，挺直着腰板，满脸泛着红晕;最前面的是一位大个子叔叔，他身着西服，顶着礼帽，脸上绽着笑容，仿佛回忆起他自己儿时在球场上的飒爽英姿。
河边，阳光在涟漪上闪烁跳动，仿佛是不息的小梭子在织着金色的挂毯。这时，只听见风和水潺潺相激的声音，看见花儿默默无言秘密。大家一同注视着眼前的这一幕……
五年级英语看表格小作文【五】
六年级的小学生奥蒂斯酷爱足球，了解与足球有关的许多知识，球踢得一直是“顶呱呱”，守门也十分厉害，只要他守门，别人根本别想进球。著名球星——贝克汉姆，就是他的偶像，他一直都有一个愿望，就是当一名和贝克汉姆一样的著名球星，于是，他天天邀伙伴练习足球......
“叮铃铃，叮铃铃......”，使人期待已久的下课铃终于响了!“哦!下课了!放学了!”几个男生不约而同的喊着。接着，把书往书包里一塞，争先恐后跑出了教室，像一群脱了缰绳的野马。书包中铅笔盒当当作响，书本更是“翻江倒海”。几个男孩子跑啊，跑啊......好像丝毫不觉得累，谁也不知道他们要去那里，去干什么。终于，他们跑到一个空旷的地场地停了下来。潇洒的把书包一扔，身心彻底地解放了。他们要干什么?奥蒂斯神秘地拿出来一个黑白相间的足球，然后微微一笑。哦!原来他们要进行足球比赛呀!书包堆成两堆当球门，两队队员准备好了，上半场比赛开始了!
守门员就是“足球天才”的奥蒂斯，手上戴正规球赛的守门员用的手套。他前几天踢球不小心一条腿受了伤，今天只能来守门，他比起专业守门员可毫不逊色!奥蒂斯半弯曲腿，弓着腰，一双手搭在膝盖上，全神贯注，严阵以待。一颗球火速向他飞来，他向上一跳，抓住了球。“好样的!”咦?声音传自哪里?不知不觉中，一旁的木椅上坐满了人，是一位叫奥德赛德斯诺的著名记者在呼叫，他目不转睛的看着比赛，手中还夹着一个本子，准备把这场激烈的比赛写成文章呢!而一个戴红头花的小女孩站了起来，一幅不满的.样子，愤愤不平的想：“为什么没进球呢?是不是守门员太厉害了!?”另一个文静的小女孩，撅着粉红的小嘴，抱着自己心爱的洋娃娃，目不转睛地看着比赛，给男孩们加油助威。“加油!加油!”大家喊着。看着自己的观众越来越多，男孩子们十分兴奋，踢得更卖力了。
奥蒂斯虽然守住了一个球，但丝毫不敢松懈。比起奥蒂斯的队伍，阿勒斯的队伍就有一点逊色了。奥蒂斯的队友接到了足球，深深吸了一口气，微微一抬脚，向前一踢，一个“香蕉球”直射对方球门，把对方守门员打了个措手不及。“进了!进了!”大家一齐呼喊着。奥蒂斯的队员进球了!对方有些垂头丧气，像一群打败仗的士兵。奥蒂斯和其他队友把那个进球的队友抱了起来，当一位英雄似的向上扔去，又接住，这样重复了好多次。下半场比赛开始了，几个男孩挥汗如雨，奔跑着，足球在他们的脚下滚来滚去。下半场，对方谨慎了许多，不给奥蒂斯的队伍留一点儿机会。最终，冠军还是属于奥蒂斯的队伍。观众们热烈鼓掌，而一旁躺着的小花狗，卷缩着身体，头也不抬一下，仿佛比赛的输赢与它无关。奥蒂斯和队友抱成一团，在球场上打滚，用这样的方法庆祝欢呼比赛的胜利。一个穿红色衣运动服和奥蒂斯年龄相仿的男孩，手背在身后，挺着小肚子，微微一笑，赞许地点点头，仿佛是获胜球队的教练似地。
太阳打了个哈欠，缓缓落下。夕阳染红了朵朵白云。他们的“忠实观众”们也为自己看了一次“视觉盛宴”从而心满意足地回家了。几个男孩约好下次还来这儿比赛。接着便也背起书包，向家奔去，因为他们的作业，还没来得及写呢!
五年级英语看表格小作文【六】
一个秋高气爽的下午，一群刚放学的孩子在小楼旁的空地上举行了一场别开生面的足球赛。
时间已近黄昏，太阳懒洋洋地下沉，场地也非常的简陋，可夕阳下的足球赛却进行得十分紧张、激烈。场上的球员互相死死地盯着对方，谁也不让谁。一个脚上受伤的守门员仍忍着疼痛半蹲着，眼睛一眨也不眨。就连场外的一名替补队员也睁大了眼睛，绷紧了面孔，时刻准备上场。
这场激烈的小足球赛引来了不少围观者，有些是五六岁的儿童，有些是十二三岁的少年，还有一位身穿西装、头戴礼帽的叔叔。一条毛绒绒的小白狗也跑来凑执闹，趴在一旁似乎看得津津有味。
攻击好手米拉——一个十来岁的小球员首先打破了僵持的局面，他飞快地带球闪过对方三个球员，一个大脚射门。可是很不幸，球被那个受伤的守门员接住了。守门员将球抛给迪斯，迪斯立刻展开反击。没人守得住他，他带球左晃一下，右蹦一下，如入无人之境。接近球门时，迪斯一个劲射，球进了!观众一片沸腾，大家齐声叫好。
米拉很不服气，从对方进攻球员尼克脚下抢回了球。只见他三步两步绕过了尼克，快速挺进，幸亏迪斯一个倒地飞铲把球又踢给了尼克。尼克趁机***入禁区，一脚挑射成功。刚刚恢复平静的观众们又喧闹起来。
一场小小的足球赛，却是那么的激烈和精彩，不管是获胜的一方，还是失利的一方，不管是参赛者，还是旁观者，心中都充满激情。
五年级英语看表格小作文【七】
喔，放学了，放学了，去踢球了。放学了，许多孩子兴高采烈地朝着一片草地跑去。
来到绿茵茵的草地上，大家把书包放在地上，左边一堆，右边一堆，足球赛的球门就做好了。大家守在自己的位置上，一个戴眼镜的大个子吹了一个口哨，把球往空中一抛。两队前锋立马跃起。哎呀，不好，蓝方队员抢到了球，把脚一踢。坐在一旁的观众都目不转睛地看着这场球赛，路边经过的大叔叔也都停下来观看，坐在旁边的小弟弟随球摇晃着身体，一只小白狗也来凑热闹，它不知道人们在干什么就在一旁睡觉，坐在后面的小妹妹干脆站起身来看。球直冲球门，但红方守门员头一顶，球就飞回去了。守门员有一头金色的头发，弯着背，双脚轻轻弯曲，双手放在膝盖上，他眼睛直直地盯着足球。守门员身后站着一位身着红衣红裤的人：挺着胸，腆着肚，前后左右在不停的摇动，感觉非常紧张，好像自己就是守门员。原来他是候补守门员，他巴不得马上上场，扑住几个险球。喔……，红方队员一个倒挂金钩，一下踢了过去，蓝方一个海底捞月又还了回去。哎……观众不时发来感叹声。
嘘的一声口哨响了起来，上半场的足球赛结束了。比分：0比0。
下半场开始了，红方的人率先发球。蓝方也毫不示弱，冲过去抢球，足球如流星一般，横冲直撞。蓝方主力一下子接住了球，用绝招大力飞球足球飞过去，红方队员都没接住，守门员一个猛虎扑食把球扑住了。观众们都看了，个个呆若木鸡。守门员一脚踢了出去，他大口大口喘着粗气。红方队员高兴极了，因为只要进一个球，就算赢了。红方队员脸上露出了自信的喜悦。不一会儿，他们派三个人出去，三人一起冲了过去，两个人保护中间一个，中间人踢球，一射门，被蓝方守门员挡了回来。红方队员三人一起踢了过去，由于速度快，蓝方守门员也没接住，红方赢了。队员们高兴得又唱又跳。
一旁的观众齐声说好！。红队员挥洒着胜利的汗水，背起书包回家了。
一场精彩的足球赛就在观众欢呼声中结束了。
