适合写在中考的英语作文离别(中考作文万能开头和结尾大全英语)

适合写在中考的英语作文离别(中考作文万能开头和结尾大全英语)

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适合写在中考的英语作文离别(中考作文万能开头和结尾大全英语)

适合写在中考的英语作文离别【一】

在这里,我不去教给他们生硬的.理论知识,而是带他们发现自己,认识自己;在这里,我认识到了不一样的自己,也记住了不一样的孩子。知识,我不知自己拥有多少,只知倾囊以尽。技能,我不知能掌控多少,只是默默传授。每每想起他们,我就想到那首《野孩子》 :我也笑我原来是个天生的野孩子,连没有幸福都不介意。我常常想,我们的到来能给他们带来什么,让他们懂得什么?后来我想明白了,短短的十天,我们能带给他们的很少很少,带有一样东西我们一定能,也必须带给他们的,就是快乐与幸福。

人生记忆的片段有很多很多,但是能让我们回忆一生的片段不多,就让我们这用着短短的十天,去创造一个让孩子们回忆一生的片段吧。男儿有泪不轻弹,只是未到伤心处。就让这个离别前的晚会成为最后的纪念吧,起飞吧,我的孩子们,让我能像蒲公英一样,承托着你们追逐的梦想一路前行。

适合写在中考的英语作文离别【二】

1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2。 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。

I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3。 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。

"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。

"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。

适合写在中考的英语作文离别【三】

Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.

Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?

Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.

适合写在中考的英语作文离别【四】

1。 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。

2。 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3。 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4。 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。

The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5。 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。

适合写在中考的英语作文离别【五】

时光隐冉,转眼之间,初三毕业了。

在已经是盛夏了。每天不是乌云密布就是晴空万里,在这种情况下,我的心也跟着时阴时晴。

上完最后一堂课,只是和老师告别。收拾一下自己杂乱的课桌,把该带走的带走,背着大包小包的和同学告别,最后在关上教室门之前,环视了一下空荡荡的教室。我的心也不禁茫然起来,似乎有太多东西留在这里了。想带也带不走。

我关上了教室门,随着“吱呀“的几声,在那一刹那间,我的心突然有一股尖锐的痛,忽然想起了四字“青春散场”。

慢慢地走下楼梯,我似乎想起可刚刚来到这里时,数着楼梯走进教室的样子,无知,单纯,甚至幼稚。但随着一年又一年的过去,现在我已经在四楼读初三了,那楼梯也越数越长。但儿时的心情已俨然不在了。童年的心也一去不复返了。而这一切的一切都变成我脑海里那泛黄的一页了。我知道,我该和它们告别了。

最后的一堂课,是和老师告别。

最后一次考试,是和学业告别。

最后一个人离开,是和同学告别。

最后一个脚步,是和301告别。

走在通往校门的小路上,我忘不了,昔日在这里埋头苦读的身影;忘不了,昔日在这里倾心畅谈的快乐;忘不了,昔日在这片绿茵场驰聘的快感。

在这离别之际,我们依然别情依依,走一回校园的.小路,数一回教室的楼梯,心中荡起了甜蜜的回忆。

在这离别之际,我们依然有千言万语,看一眼校长的白发,摸一把老师的坐椅,腮边挂满了滚烫的泪珠。

当我的脚跨出校门的一瞬间,我忽而明白我已经不是这里的一员了。但也许不是永久,但也不是瞬间。

虽然这初中三年跟高中三年和大学四年相比,是多么的微不足道,但对于我们小孩来说是多么的珍贵和满足啊啊!

再见了,我的朋友!

再见了,我的老师!

再见了,我的学校!

再见了,我的初三!

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