好的文章动静结合、张弛有度有节奏感。句式也是一样,要有变化性,这不仅能使文章更生动,也是语言表达方式的需要和表达能力的体现。句式的`变化,主要是要注意两点:
● 不要从头至尾使用一种句型。
● 长短句结合。
由于语言功底的欠缺和惯用思维,很多人写的文章一种句式到头,如:
I think …
I hope…
He does it.
He will take it
这样的文章虽然意思表达出来了,却显得呆板,欠生动。解决的办法是:
1.间或使用主从复句。
Because he is very much determined, he will carry it out this time. (原因
比较:He is very much determined. He will carry it out this time.
2.使用分词结构句。
The weather being fine, a large number of people went sightseeing.
比较:The weather is fine. A large number of people went sightseeing.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
比较:Africa is the second largest continent. Its size is about three times that of China.
3.使用不定式句。
To be or not to be, that is a question. (莎士比亚
To study or not to study, that is much different.(引申
To do it well, you must plan it well.
比较:You want to do it well. And you must plan it well.
4.倒装句
Only when we fully recognize its importance can we have control of its essence.
比较:After we fully recognize its importance, we can have control of its essence.
No sooner had he arrived home than it began to rain.
比较:He arrived home. And it began to rain.
5.失衡句
whether or not he will come is still unknown to all the people present.
比较:No one present knows whether he will come or not.
That he has done it all by himself is known to everyone.
比较:Everyone knows that he has done it all by himself.
当然,句子并不是越长越好,也不是越复杂水平就越高。凡事皆有度。太多长句的堆砌让人觉得是买弄。有时侯,一个短小精辟的句子可以起到画龙点睛的作用。特别是在文末段尾。比如:
●As a creature, every one knows.
●Actions speak louder than words.
●Practice makes perfect.
Since the 1970s, with the worsening oil crisis, the major businesses in the automotive internal combustion engine as much as possible to reduce the car's fuel consumption, while sparing no effort in the development of hybrid vehicles and new energy vehicles. There are hybrid gas-electric hybrid and mixed fuel in two forms, both in the car body design is no different with the traditional internal combustion engine vehicles, the future trend is nothing more than a continuation of current trends, efforts to reduce the drag coefficient, reducing weight while increasing strength and stiffness and so on.
Hybrid vehicle technology only in the product over, to really new energy vehicles, preparatory and experimental products, the ultimate trend or completely replace the existing traditional energy vehicles by the new energy vehicles.
说干就干,我在药堆里找出一个漂亮的空药盒子,再拿来两根吸管,和一根针,还有四个瓶盖,便开始做汽车轮胎。
妈妈先在药盒子上用针挫了四个对称的洞,又在每个瓶盖上用针挫了一个洞,把管子挫进药盒里,再把露出来的两头装上瓶盖,。就这样,前面的轮胎做好了,眼看前轮胎做好了,我高兴不已没想到只有一只手的我,也那么能干,不过有些地方实在不能做,只能让妈妈帮忙了。后面的'按照前面做就做好了。
接着,开始做车身。我先拿来卡纸,剪下一块,折了四下,用透明胶让它和药盒子一起粘住,再用水彩笔画上四个车灯。再剪下两小块,一起用透明胶粘在车身旁边,再在车身上画上三个长方形图案(前面一个,旁边两个)。然后,妈妈在车顶上用针挫一个洞,我在用剩下的卡纸上,粘上双面胶粘在中间,把白色的一面撕下来,再用管子粘上去,接着用水彩笔在上面写上张俊杰号,再挫进孔里就完成了。我高兴的一蹦三尺高。
觉得不够漂亮的小朋友可以在后面加上迷你加速器。迷你加速器的制作方法如下:用彩色的纸卷起来,再用剪刀斜斜的剪一刀,再用双面胶贴在底下,再粘上去,就完成了。第二个也找前面这样做。你可以试试看能开多远,我是从厨房的门开到我房间的门,足足4米呢!无聊的时候可以玩玩,也可以跟小伙伴比赛,看谁开得远。这样一来,就不用花钱到超市去买玩具车了呢!而且既好玩又环保!
我发现自己做的东西非常好玩,能在其中感到快乐,还可以提高动手能力呢!
星期六,点点要去小姨家玩,妈妈特意给点点扎了两个羊角辫,还给点点换上一件花连衣裙。
点点高兴地来到公共汽车站,耐心地等车。一辆浅蓝色的公共汽车慢慢地开来了。点点小心翼翼地上了车,坐上了第三排的好位置。接着,又上来一位手捧故事书的大哥哥。大哥哥可神气了,他抢了车上最后一个座位,舒舒服服地坐了下来,津津有味地欣赏故事书来。公交车慢慢又开动了,车刚过两站。到了第三小站,车又停了下来,这时上来一个右腿受了伤的大哥哥。只见他腿上缠的绷带还真不少呢,真是太可怜了。他双脚刚落地,就有一位满头白发的老奶奶对这个受伤的大哥奇说:“小伙子,我的座位让经你,你坐吧!”小伙子说:“不用了,谢谢您,老奶奶!”不料,这话被点点听见了,她想,这怎么能让老奶奶给我们小朋友让座呢。她这下可着急了,急忙站起来,伸出她那小巧玲珑的右手,高声呼唤起来:“大哥哥,我把我的座位让给你!快过来,你不用坐老奶奶的座位。”大哥哥听到小女孩要让座给他,高兴极了,因为他的腿的确现在疼得厉害。他一瘸一拐地走了过去。而坐在点点前排的看书大哥哥却把头低下来,假装没看见这受伤的男孩。他心里嘀咕道,我好不容易抢到的'座位,干嘛要文具盒给别人。他暗自庆幸自己运气好。想着想着,他不禁偷起来,还得意地瞅了受伤的小男孩一眼。受伤的大哥哥艰难地走到了点点跟前,不住地对点点说:“小朋友,谢谢你,真是太谢谢你了!”点点笑了,她说:“没关系,我过两站就要下车了,我站一会儿不要紧的。”可是,点点才五六岁,太矮了,抓不到扶手。没等她站稳,司机叔叔来了个紧急刹车,点点身子情不自禁地往后一仰,让坐在车上的所以乘客都吓了一跳。而受伤的大哥哥还没来得及抓住点点,点点就已经撞到了看书的大哥哥身上。看书的大哥哥眼疾手快,一把拉起点点,还问:“小妹妹,你没事吧?”点点连声说:“没事没事,谢谢大哥哥!”这个看书的大哥哥心想,刚才我太自私了,生怕座位被人抢了,我真不应该呀。想到这,大哥哥果断地站了起来,热情地笑道:“小妹妹,来,我的座位让给你!”点点笑了,笑得多么灿烂呀:“谢谢你,大哥哥!”受伤的大哥哥和坐在点点后排的一个戴老花眼镜的老爷爷脸上露出了幸福的笑容。老爷爷还自豪地夸奖道:“现在的小朋友和年青人呀,就爱助人为乐,做好事!真是太可爱了!”看书的大哥哥听了脸红了,但他还是心里还是挺高兴的,毕竟,他也学会了乐于助人了。
公共汽车里充满了欢笑声。大家笑得多么甜,多么开心呀!
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