中考,意味着辛勤工作后梦想的收获;意味着汗水浇灌出成功的花朵;意味着努力奔跑后冲破终点的喜悦。中考,应当是一个温暖的字眼。
假如明天就中考,我要以一个宁静的心情去参加考试,让中考见证我辛勤奋斗的历史;挑灯夜战,孜孜不倦,只因心中拥有梦想。我要让中考实现自己的梦想;走进理想的高中,海阔凭鱼跃,天高任鸟飞。我要让中考见证我的辉煌,为自己的向前迈进注入一份信心,一份新的力量。七月,收获的季节。
假如明天就中考,我会花时间记住每一个同学,有互相帮助的友谊,有互相打闹的纯真,有互相关怀的.感动,有互相体谅的理解。我痛苦并快乐着。我会用自己最真挚的心,来为每个同学祝福;我会用最真诚的泪,溶化初中生活的一切苦辣酸甜;我会让眼泪变为珍珠埋藏在心底,成为一生最宝贵的记忆。六月,流泪的季节。
最难忘却师长的谆谆教诲、父母的字字关心。假如明天就中考,我会用成绩来报答老师的辛勤培养。我要用那张重点高中录取通知书来报答母亲煞费苦心的唠叨、父亲被时光染白的鬓角。我要以骄人的成绩,留给父亲最深的感动。爸妈,你们绝不会白白付出,我也绝不让你们白白付出。六月,感恩的季节。
假如明天就中考,我不会感叹时光流失太快,一转眼便三年。因为我拥有青春,拥有大把的光阴。假如天就中考,我要让它使我的青春更加绚丽多姿,我要让成功的花朵更加娇艳美丽,我会让它把人生装扮得更加充实无憾。六月,装扮的季节。
假如明天就中考,那么便让它快些来它!我要以一个胜利者的姿态征服它,让它重新刷洗我的人生。中考应当可以温暖人的一生。
明天就是过独木桥的日子,我在"题海"中忙碌着,欣然发现:"忙"也可分为下中上等。忙的时候叫踏实,很忙的时候叫充实;忙得气都喘不过来时,反倒会气急败坏。心里骂着万恶的应试教育时,嘴里还不时的嚷嚷到:"孙子才考高中呢!"可偏偏还得干孙子要***事。
老爸进来了,手里拿着茶杯:"来,喝杯牛奶吧!"我无精打彩地接过茶杯,感觉很紧张。老爸拍了拍我的肩,无声的笑了笑,当我以为老爸的."临考动员"已"千呼万唤始出来",不料竟"犹抱琵琶半遮面"。"好好考吧!"相对无言,心里却比长篇大论还要令人心情沉重。
老妈也"粉墨登场",端着碗小米粥,叫我停下来休息一会儿,一边心疼地摸着我的手:"Look,手都生老茧了。"妈妈拍了拍我的头,便走出了房间。
想想中考也离我不远了,三年的艰辛尽在着一考,成王败寇就在这一息之间。我多么希望这一天不要来临,可我知道这一天迟早要来临的。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论 オ
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