元旦已经过去好多天了,但是每当想起那天的场景,我都会仍不住的开心一下!
那天我和妈妈早早的来到班级,到了班上就看到和平时不一样的教室,真漂亮啊!好多气球和彩带把教室布置的喜气洋洋!节目到8点多正式开始的,第一个节目是女生表演的唱歌,当时记得她一边唱一边还跟着节奏跳舞呢,同学们都纷纷为她鼓掌。轮到我们的时候不知道是第几个节目了,我们的是一个集体表演,我和其他三个同学带着自己的爸爸妈妈表演猜词。这个节目很有意思的哦!就是我们的爸爸妈妈看老师手中早就准备好的词语(我们看不到的),让爸爸妈妈做动作或手势,不准说。第一轮我和妈妈猜了一个刷牙 一个板凳还有一个一心一意,看着妈妈的手势我试着猜了,结果我全中!到了第二轮的时候,妈妈开始有点不知道该怎么做的样子,后来我看妈妈蹲下来了,像上厕所的样子,直接猜了个上厕所,结果好多同学都笑了,但是我答对了!我还得了第一名呢!
后面还有好多节目呢,有的同学表演唱歌,有的跳舞,还有的表演魔术。有集体表演也有个人表演,我们班的元旦晚会真是丰富多彩啊!
在新年的第一天我和我们班全部同学还有老师一起过了个开心元旦!
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
自古逢秋悲寂寥,然而今日秋时,更胜春朝。告别了盛夏的灿烂,丰硕的秋季带着一丝神圣与庄严,它仿佛在提醒我们:在这最美的季节里,有一个人,有一个节日属于他,有一份感激应为他而升华。
那个人的名字不必提,那个节日的名字不必说,但我们与他的点点滴滴却永远不该被忘记,请聆听,请回忆,请感激。
老师们,教师节快乐!
每个人闪亮的韶华都有老师来点缀,无数的青春经由他们的精心指引而激情四射,无数的梦想经由他们的助力扬帆而幻化成真,无数的灵魂经由他们的精心雕琢而志存高远!中华大地,无数可歌可泣的事迹书写着教师纵横千古的华章,我们身边的老师可能没有光耀中华,但他们一定是同样的伟大!
当你为难题苦苦思索却毫无头绪,是他耐心的解答精准的描绘解散你心头的乌云;
当你被挫折沉重一击却无法直立,是他坚定的目光深刻的话语重燃你遗失的信心;
当你因疲倦孤单而感到筋疲力尽,是他温暖的双手无言的相信夯实你灿烂的`明天!
也许你常常抱怨,班级的要求怎么这么多?布置的作业怎么这么难?可当三好班级的荣耀灿烂每个人的笑脸,当引以为傲的成绩攀登胜利的高峰,当优秀卓越的人格伴随人生的足迹,你会发现,你与老师是战友,疲惫时共患难;你与老师是亲人,欢乐时共分享;你与老师是知己,风起时共扬帆!
是老师撑着油纸伞和你相逢在知识的雨巷,与你讲述洒满余晖的康桥;是老师手捧豌豆带你徜徉在遗传的花海,向你诉说分离定律的奇妙;是老师转换经纬携你跨越在绚丽的版图,带你领略洋流山川的伟岸;是老师评古论今助你穿越在激昂的朝野,帮你实现天人感应的梦想!曼妙的函数,深奥的哲学,唯美的字母,这一切都是您为我们深深埋下的种子,只待破土冲天的那一刻荡气回肠!
这一切,我们都已记得;
这一切,我们仍将记得!
您已付出了太多,岁月早已被银丝斑驳,让我们在这里做出承诺:
定不负苦心,勇创辉煌!
千言万语,唯有这一句话能表达我们的感激,让我们一起说:
老师,您辛苦了!
一年一度的元宵节终于到了,我怀着兴奋的心情,急匆匆地吃了饭,便直嚷着爸爸妈妈带我去逛赛歧最繁华的一条街——十二米路商业街。
一路上我们说着、笑着,不一会儿就来到了商业街。只见这里早已人山人海,热闹非凡,整条街被挤得水泄不通。看到这情景,爱凑热闹得我怎么肯放过?于是便不顾一切地往里挤。可是,只一会儿工夫,我便感觉自己得一双脚不听使唤了,忽而被挤到左,忽而被挤到右,最后直被挤到了街中心。
街中心到处都是花灯,红的、黄的、绿的、紫的……色彩斑斓、十分耀眼。我仿佛走进了灯的海洋、灯的世界。不信,你瞧!有光彩夺目的龙灯,活灵活现的牛灯,闪着金光的狗灯……多姿多彩的花灯,看得我眼花缭乱。其中最让我喜欢得是造型别致得猴灯,猴灯各式各样,有孙悟空打白骨精的,有孙悟空吃仙桃的,有孙悟空拿芭蕉扇的……咦?怎么有这么多孙悟空的灯呢?噢!我猛然醒悟过来,原来今年是猴年,孙悟空是猴王,又是我们儿童心目中的英雄偶像,难怪很多小朋友都争先恐后地抢购自己喜爱的猴灯。我看了心里也直痒痒的。于是也赶紧买了一盏孙悟空拿芭蕉扇的花灯,并希望这盏灯,不仅夏天可以给我带来凉爽,也会是我快乐。
忽然,背后传来“我猜对了,我猜对了!”的声音。我扭头一看,原来是工商银行的门口挂着五颜六色的纸条。灯谜?猜灯谜不是我的拿手好戏吗?我为什么不去显显身手?我赶紧挤进去选了这样一条谜语:“一旦有心便能持久。”我想:“一”和“旦”可组成一个字,是什么字?当我念到“有心”时灵机一动:“心”不正是“忄”,与“一旦”结合不就成了“恒”字?“恒”不就是持久的意思?果然不出我所料,我猜对了。这下更增添了我的信心,我连续猜对了好多谜语哩!猜谜语真有意思,它不但让我增长了知识,而且还锻炼了我运用知识的能力。
不知过了多长时间,街上的游人渐渐少了,爸妈催我快点回家,我才依依不舍地离开了商业街。抬头望天空,月亮好亮啊!它似乎正微笑着向我招手,仿佛和我一起陶醉在节日的无限欢乐之中。
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