五年级英语作文20词我的一天【一】
今天，我和爸爸妈妈一起去铁岭七星游乐园玩，为了锻炼我的胆量，爸爸妈妈都挑了一些有挑战性的项目，有过山车，摩天轮，海盗船等等，这些都非常的好玩，非常的刺激。
我和爸爸先上了过山车，开始我还有点好奇，不知道怎么回事，我和爸爸坐上去后，车慢慢启动了，上坡的时候还行，速度可以接受，下坡的的时候速度越来越快，都要飞起来了，我的心都悬了起来，害怕急了，脑袋里想着：这要是掉下去可怎么办呀，不过时间非常短，不一会就到站了，我下来的.时候还有怕点呢！
接着，我和妈妈又去坐摩天轮，看到摩天轮升的那么高，心理不免有点害怕，但是妈妈鼓励我说：“男子汉要勇敢，最上边的风景可美了，你还要不要上？”我一想，拼了，硬着头皮上去了，摩天轮开始慢慢的转动，速度不快，但是越升越高，我慢慢的也闭上了眼睛，不敢看了，妈妈让我睁开眼睛看看外面的景色，我说：“不，我害怕！”妈妈说我再不睁开眼睛就不陪我玩了，让我自己去玩，我也只能慢慢的睁开眼睛往下面一看，哇，太美了，景色像画一样，真后悔没有早点睁开眼睛，错过了美景，不过还好，毕竟看到了，虽然时间很短。
最后我和爸爸做了海盗船，我不敢做，爸爸鼓励我说：“没事，它就像荡秋千一样。”我半信半疑只好坐了上去，一开始它还慢慢的摇，我一下就高兴了，原来就这么简单啊，没想到，摇的越来越高，都要把我悠出去了，我吓的嗷嗷大叫，终于停下来了，我下来后就跑向妈妈：“我以后再也不坐这破玩意了，吓死我了！”虽然这么说，但是我心理还是挺高兴的。妈妈说我是一个勇敢的孩子。
今天是我最高兴的一天，因为我战胜了自己，我想我以后会更勇敢的。
五年级英语作文20词我的一天【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文20词我的一天【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的\'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
五年级英语作文20词我的一天【四】
在一个星期天的早上，爸爸、妈妈决定带我一起去东莞玩。
过了一会儿，我们便带上东莞地图出发了。爸爸说，先到科技馆玩一下，我上次已经跟学校的旅游团去过一次了，所以有一点熟悉路程怎么走。爸爸开车开了差不多半个小时，就到了东莞。爸爸过头来对我说：“接下来的路程就要靠你了！”我非常有信心地说：“没问题。”因为爸爸第一次自己开车来东莞，路程不怎么熟悉，所以要有个“指挥员”，而我已经来过东莞了，所以爸爸决定要我当这个“指挥员”。
经过我认真地指挥，不到十分钟，就已经来到了科技馆门口，我们一起买了票，就进去玩了。我们先去观看怎样造纸，造纸的步骤是这样的：先把一些纸屑放在一个机器弄湿，然后放在另一部机器里搅拌，搅拌完后，又放在一部叫“蒸汽机”的机器里，大约蒸了15分钟左右，一张纸就造成了。
接着我们又到了二楼，一进门，我就看见了“神笔马良”的雕塑，再走近一看，原来不是雕塑，是个机器人，而且还是个会画画的`机器人。我就付了三元钱给那个工作人员，工作人员就叫我坐好，大约等了五分钟，那个“神笔马良”动了，大约两分钟以后，“神笔马良”就把画画好了。我接过来看了看，虽然有点丑，但是也不错了。我们还在科技馆看了很多有趣的东西，学到了书本学不到的知识，真是收获不少。
中午，我很饿了，爸爸就说到“真功夫”吃饭，吃完饭后，爸爸说带我们到“华南摩”玩。
我们又开始开车去“华南摩”了。
下午，我们到了“华南摩”。一进门，我就看见了很多游戏，可是这些游戏都是大人玩的，不合适我玩。爸爸说：“我们去游戏厅玩。”说走就走，过了一会儿，我们到了游戏厅，游戏厅的游戏可真多啊！
我在游戏厅里玩了一会儿，学的很有意思。这时，爸爸又说：“我们到楼上去玩吧！”我点了点头，便冲上楼去了，一进门，原来是“天线宝宝”专区，门口站着个“阿Po”，我跟“阿Po”照了一张照片留影，便进海洋球里玩了起来，玩了一会儿，爸爸说要走了，我才依依不舍地离开了东莞。
这一天我多么愉快啊！
五年级英语作文20词我的一天【五】
I always get up early in the morning.I usually have my breakfast at half past six.I leave home half an hour later.
I'm never late for school.There are many classes in the morning.At a quarter past twelve,I have lunch.Sometimes,I'm not so busy in the afternoon.After school I have dinner with my family.After I finish my homework I often play some games with my family.Only then will I to relax.
Although this is a busy day, but I feel full and satisfied.
