Dear Mom,
I recently read the book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mom by Amy Chua. I found that you and Ms. Chua have a lot in common in parenting. Today, I’ d like to share some of my views on this topic.
Childhood memories of your strict “dos” and "don’ts" came flooding back. Because count- less hours were invested on practicing musicalinsUu- ments, there was not even a slim chance for me to participate in parties and school plays, let alone fully enjoy the authentic pleasures of family life.Moreover, deprived of the freedom to choose hob- bies, I sometimes felt that I was just like a lonely pup- pet manipulated by others. Dear mother, do you be- lieve that time and time again I woke up from beau- tiful dreams with tears streaming down my face?
However, though Ive labeled it as a brutal regimen when I was young, as I became heavily involved inme outside world, I’ve come to realize that it was quite rewarding to have been tiger trained. As George Eliot putslt,"It never rains roses: when we want to have more roses, we must plant trees". This is as true of 0ur growing up, especially in an unprecedentedly stressful so- cietyr, Fortunately, tiger parenting has equipped me with exceptional study habits,thus helping me stand out in the intense competition. Furthermore, it has endowed me with strong willpower as well as inner self-poise, which bas proved to be a most pre- cious quality of mine. Finally,thanks to your firm discipline, not cmly have I cultivateda discerning taste in art, but I’ve also built my own set of moral values. In view of all these facts, tiger parenting has benefited me in the lorlg run despite the cost of the immediate joy of a normal carefree cbildhood.
Now, looking back on my childhood with your specialparenting method,I want to extend my sincerest appreciauon to you, my dear mother. As I am to commence my college life now,I promise you that Ill improve myself ina "tiger" way, going all out to fulfill all of my dreams.
Love,
Daughter
专家点评:
通过这封写给母亲的信,作者把母亲的教育方式和“tiger mom”的方式作对比,阐述自己的观点。开篇简洁明了,正文欲扬先抑,强调对“tiger training”的赞同,依此出发向母亲表达深切感激之情。文章结构清晰,观点明了,逻辑性强,行文通顺。作者词汇量丰富,长句驾驭能力强。建议适当改变句式,保证长短错落有致。
在别人的眼里,我们班并不是什么好班级。有时侯,还会因为我们,老师、班主任被受到批评。往往就是因为这样,所以,把班主任给气哭了。可是,老师并不会真的去生我们的气。就是因为这样,我们和班主任的感情,比其他老师的感情好很多。或许,可以说,是因为班主任比较了解我们,她不会像其他的老师和我们分地位,所以,我们和班主任的感情又进了一步。
上课的时候,我们都是该笑的时候就笑,该生气的时候生气,该开玩笑的时候开玩笑,我们从不埋怨过班主任,我们经常讲:班主任就是我们的好朋友。在别的老师听起来,我们是那么的没大没小,可,在班主任的眼里,我们是多活泼、可爱。班主任常常和我们坐在一起谈心里话。我们也从不向班主任隐瞒什么,有什么话,我们就直接的说出来,在老师的面前,我们从不伪装,甚至有时候,我们还会开她的玩笑,可,她从不生气的,而且,会用幽默的语气来回答我们。
记得有一次,那是在六年级下册的时候,班主任的裤子破了,我们班的大晓益对班主任说:“老师,有件事说出来会让你丢尽面子的`,你说,要不要说出来啊!”
“不要说出来,我是一个很爱面子的人,你过来我这边说,快点啦!”班主任说道。
“你不会自己过来啊,凭什么我过去啊。”大晓益没大没小的说道
“你就过来嘛。”班主任‘急’着说。
“呀啊,你过来嘛!”大晓益又说道。
……
“算了,我告诉你吧。”
大晓益边走边说,最好走到班主任跟前小声地说。
“你的裤子破了一个洞。”
而,大家都没想到班主任会这样的回答。
“什么,怎么只有一个,我昨晚明明剪了两个洞啊!还有,这叫流行、时尚。”班主任调皮地说。
接下来就是我们的哈哈大笑。…哈哈
我们真的败在她的手里了。
……
就因为这样,我们每节课都希望是班主任的课。我们上班主任的课,我们的快乐是来自于班主任那儿的,所以,我们从不急着要回家,从没想过要放假、分离。可是,时间是残酷的,从不会,听从我们的安排的,让我们离开这所洪前小学,离开活泼开朗的班主任,离开同学、朋友。
为什么快乐总是那么的短暂,在过三天,也就是24号,这一天,我们要开始军训,从这,每个人都明白了:和小学同学的真正分离。再也不可能回到那个充满快乐的班级,再也不可能回到那个活泼开朗的老师,再也不可能回到那个生活八年的小学了。
我想我们班的同学了,我想我们班的班主任了。我想你们了。我真的希望能够永远的和你们在一起读书、笑、哭,一起去做媒婆,一起去鸡婆,一起去做调皮鬼……
想你们了……
Dear Mum,
Such is sons’ nature; I really do not know how to express my thanks to you. However, I can imagine, on the day 18 years ago, when you gave birth to me, what a complex feeling you had. In the past few years, every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me, then in the afternoon, you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day‘s hard work. Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon, like a bird is leaving its parents. Nevertheless, your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and I love you mum!
your son
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