我的城市写一篇作文英语五年级【一】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
我的城市写一篇作文英语五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我的城市写一篇作文英语五年级【三】
进入大门，首先映入眼帘的是花坛、喷泉和那平如明镜的'湖水。在大门广场的右边，是一个鸽舍。每天都有许多人到这来喂鸽子。瞧那一只只大腹便便、左摇右摆的鸽子多可爱啊！
继续向前走，不到50米便会有一些租船的码头。登上一只小船，任那春风吹拂着你的脸庞……春风吹起水浪，水浪拖着孤舟，鸟雀在树上欢乐地唱歌……一切都是那样地生机勃勃，让人仿佛置身于世外桃源之中，完全忘了这是在繁华喧嚣的城市里。
小船，渐渐地驶入了湖的深处；风景也越来越美。绿树怀抱着翡翠般的湖泊，鸟儿在漫天飞舞，花朵竞相开放，十分美丽。
之后，小船驶向中心，像一个小岛驶去。小岛不大，但是风景很美丽。岛上还有一个吊床。当你平躺在吊床上，仰望天空，便会不由的哼唱“蓝蓝的天上白云飘，白云下面马儿跑……”
在滨湖公园一片茂密的森林里，有一个面积不算太大但也不能说小的游乐园。这儿有飞毯、碰碰车、旋转木马……我最喜欢玩的就是卡丁车了。想象一下：你坐在卡丁车上，手握方向盘，脚踏油门与刹车，在赛道上尽情奔驰……那该是多么开心啊！
当夜幕即将降临，人们渐渐的散去时，来这儿散步最好。夕阳西下，在湖面上洒满了金光。仰望远方，一栋栋高楼大厦拔地而起，夕阳的余光洒在每一座大楼、每一户人家的窗户上，令人心旷神怡。此时此刻，那一座座大厦似乎在遥望滨湖公园这颗宝珠，如痴、如迷。而我也沉浸在了这一片美景中，如痴、如迷……
我的城市写一篇作文英语五年级【四】
春日里的阳光格外明媚，到处生机勃勃，我们每个人的脸上洋溢着喜悦，无法掩饰心里的那份激动，因为今天，我们“阳光班”的成员在老师和妇联的带领下，要去参观太仓市博物馆和城市规划中心展览馆。
太仓市博物馆位于新区行政中心的广场东侧，刚走近博物馆，我就被它新颖的外表所吸引了，与其说它像只藤条编织成的帽子，更不如说它像个“大圆仓”。这种独具一格的建筑，更激发了我走进去一探究竟的***。
我满怀好奇和期盼走进了博物馆展厅，首先映进眼帘的是一座晶莹剔透的玻璃桥，我正准备上桥走走时，悬挂在桥上的.一块牌子引起了我的注意：“正在维修，请绕道！”郁闷，只好从桥边走过去，不经意的往桥下瞄了一眼，哇！桥下有许多惟妙惟肖的古代建筑，我在为古代就如此繁华的太仓感到惊讶时，又为自己在太仓生活而感到骄傲，我一边看，一边和同学小声议论着藏品的妙处。几百幅字画让我目不暇接，这些字，有的苍劲有力，有的圆润流畅，有的潇洒狂放……赞叹中，我在心里默默鼓掌。
接着，我们又来到了城市规划中心展览馆，一进门，我就惊奇的发现，地是玻璃的，地下是一条又一条的道路，顺着路标我很快找到了中市路，找到了陆渡中心小学。当我正陶醉其中时，导游姐姐高声喊我们去看电影，我疑惑地走进去，里面有个不大的屏幕和一些椅子。这部小电影是用动画做成的，描绘了以前太仓的历史和以后太仓的繁华景象……时间很快到了，我们依依不舍地回到了学校。
通过这次太仓半日游，我见到了太仓的历史和太仓未来的美好景象。我爱太仓，希望它以后会更加繁荣昌盛。
