五年级英语作文中国的一个城市【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文中国的一个城市【二】
进入大门，首先映入眼帘的是花坛、喷泉和那平如明镜的'湖水。在大门广场的右边，是一个鸽舍。每天都有许多人到这来喂鸽子。瞧那一只只大腹便便、左摇右摆的鸽子多可爱啊！
继续向前走，不到50米便会有一些租船的码头。登上一只小船，任那春风吹拂着你的脸庞……春风吹起水浪，水浪拖着孤舟，鸟雀在树上欢乐地唱歌……一切都是那样地生机勃勃，让人仿佛置身于世外桃源之中，完全忘了这是在繁华喧嚣的城市里。
小船，渐渐地驶入了湖的深处；风景也越来越美。绿树怀抱着翡翠般的湖泊，鸟儿在漫天飞舞，花朵竞相开放，十分美丽。
之后，小船驶向中心，像一个小岛驶去。小岛不大，但是风景很美丽。岛上还有一个吊床。当你平躺在吊床上，仰望天空，便会不由的哼唱“蓝蓝的天上白云飘，白云下面马儿跑……”
在滨湖公园一片茂密的森林里，有一个面积不算太大但也不能说小的游乐园。这儿有飞毯、碰碰车、旋转木马……我最喜欢玩的就是卡丁车了。想象一下：你坐在卡丁车上，手握方向盘，脚踏油门与刹车，在赛道上尽情奔驰……那该是多么开心啊！
当夜幕即将降临，人们渐渐的散去时，来这儿散步最好。夕阳西下，在湖面上洒满了金光。仰望远方，一栋栋高楼大厦拔地而起，夕阳的余光洒在每一座大楼、每一户人家的窗户上，令人心旷神怡。此时此刻，那一座座大厦似乎在遥望滨湖公园这颗宝珠，如痴、如迷。而我也沉浸在了这一片美景中，如痴、如迷……
五年级英语作文中国的一个城市【三】
春日里的阳光格外明媚，到处生机勃勃，我们每个人的脸上洋溢着喜悦，无法掩饰心里的那份激动，因为今天，我们“阳光班”的成员在老师和妇联的带领下，要去参观太仓市博物馆和城市规划中心展览馆。
太仓市博物馆位于新区行政中心的广场东侧，刚走近博物馆，我就被它新颖的外表所吸引了，与其说它像只藤条编织成的帽子，更不如说它像个“大圆仓”。这种独具一格的建筑，更激发了我走进去一探究竟的***。
我满怀好奇和期盼走进了博物馆展厅，首先映进眼帘的是一座晶莹剔透的玻璃桥，我正准备上桥走走时，悬挂在桥上的.一块牌子引起了我的注意：“正在维修，请绕道！”郁闷，只好从桥边走过去，不经意的往桥下瞄了一眼，哇！桥下有许多惟妙惟肖的古代建筑，我在为古代就如此繁华的太仓感到惊讶时，又为自己在太仓生活而感到骄傲，我一边看，一边和同学小声议论着藏品的妙处。几百幅字画让我目不暇接，这些字，有的苍劲有力，有的圆润流畅，有的潇洒狂放……赞叹中，我在心里默默鼓掌。
接着，我们又来到了城市规划中心展览馆，一进门，我就惊奇的发现，地是玻璃的，地下是一条又一条的道路，顺着路标我很快找到了中市路，找到了陆渡中心小学。当我正陶醉其中时，导游姐姐高声喊我们去看电影，我疑惑地走进去，里面有个不大的屏幕和一些椅子。这部小电影是用动画做成的，描绘了以前太仓的历史和以后太仓的繁华景象……时间很快到了，我们依依不舍地回到了学校。
通过这次太仓半日游，我见到了太仓的历史和太仓未来的美好景象。我爱太仓，希望它以后会更加繁荣昌盛。
五年级英语作文中国的一个城市【四】
来到宽广的大海边，看着微波粼粼的海面上升起一轮火红的太阳，这就是威海，我们的城市，我们的家。
袅袅清晨，三面环海，一面环山，青山绿水让人仿佛走进了画卷之中。创文明城，让人看到了焕然一新的城市，早上一起来，小屋里射进两三方斜斜的太阳。走出一，平时在街头的小摊已不见踪影，而是都有了自己固定的位置，有固定的时间来摆摊。道路两旁的车辆都停到了停车场，再也不乱放了。商店门前的一些不该放的牌子，也收了起来。
一些工人叔叔爬高，给墙刷漆，墙穿上了新衣，显得容光焕发。一排排干净的垃圾桶来了一批新职员，经常有清洁工叔叔阿姨来打扫，把垃圾桶擦得干干净净。有几个大姨在给信箱做“美容”呢！街道扫得干干净净，像穿上了华贵的礼服，风中飘动的柳絮，在给他伴舞。
文明城市，文明市民。人做的文不文明呢？想创上文明城市，我们大家是关键，不需要你说：“我要做文明人，做文明事！”只需要你做一些力所能及的事，大家一起来做文明市民。那么，我们的这个城市就一定会文明。
平时走在路上，你会看到车水马龙的街道上井然有序。人行绿灯亮起，步行的人们匆匆走过斑马线。车行绿灯亮起，车辆有秩序地行驶，听不到嘀嘀的喇叭声。
在创城的过程中，我也做了不少。一天我在马路上走着，忽然吹起了一阵大风，一个塑料袋恶魔般的向我扑来，我灵机一动伸出手一抓，没抓找，再一抓，总算抓找了，把它送回它的家－垃圾桶。还有一次，我看见一团纸球娃娃般的向我跑来，像幼儿园里的小孩扑向妈妈的怀抱一样，我习惯性地蹲下来就把它“抱”了起来，放进了旁边的垃圾箱。我从小就养成了不乱扔垃圾的习惯，不讲脏话，懂礼貌，尊敬长辈。
做一个文明人很容易，做一件文明事更容易，我们要做一个好市民，为我们的城市献出一份力，我们要携手共同创造美好家园，还是一句话：我们的城市，我们的家！我们都来爱她吧！
五年级英语作文中国的一个城市【五】
深圳是我最喜欢的城市。她年轻富有活力。我在这里居住了10年。我爱这座城市的海鲜和美丽的风景。夏天来的时候，我可以去海边看日出，或者去享受冰爽的海水。在周末的时候，去公园散散步。深圳是我的家。等我长大了，我要为这所城市作出贡献，让她变得更好。
