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她是一位语文老师,是我的恩师。
仍记得她的第一课,不是单纯的认识同学,不是直接开始授课,而是“刁难”了我们这些心比天高的孩子。她在黑板上写下了几个甲骨文一样的文字,让我们认。刚才我们还对她说我们不识字感到愤愤不平,这时都安静了下来。她逐一将字拆分解读,还讲了汉字的演变历程和中国文化的博大精深。时隔近三年,她的第一课仍使我记忆犹新。初相识,她便教会我学无止境,让我们心服口服。
他是敬业爱生的老师。她伴我们走过初三那年,她几乎将所有精力都投放在我们身上。特别临近中考,她的眼睛都被黑眼圈包裹着,但她上课仍不失活力。午休时,她在办公室为几个同学讲解答题要领和美文佳句。看着她疲惫的双眼,我不禁心头酸楚,暗中卯足了劲,努力学习,不辜负她的期望。那时的我觉得,她疲惫的双眸是最美丽的,她为我们而辛劳。
她的教诲可使我受益一生。初三的我心气极高而却屡屡失败,不免心生怨恨。一次次的失意,一次次的打击,终使我不知所措。她便来找我谈心。“你努力学了吗?”我点头。“课后认真复习整理了么?” 我还是点头。说到这,我不禁眼眶一红,为什么我比别人付出更多,却收获如此细微!她摸摸我的头让我平静,然后说道:“你这是到了学习瓶颈处。就像那花瓶,瓶颈处细窄难行,而一旦你走过那瓶颈,岂不是天空任你驰骋?”她的话语重又点燃了我学习的热情。“xx,你还像现在一样认真勤奋,但要适当地为自己减轻压力,老师相信你一定能成功!”她的眼中流露出笃定的神色,她对我的信任和鼓舞一直伴我走完初中。
如今,每当我泄气之时,便会想到她的教诲,当我懒散之时,便想到她辛劳的背影。偶尔去她的博客看看她的文章,清新的文风、详实的内容、真挚的情感,读来让人心情愉悦。从文章中得知,她现在所带的是普通班,课堂纪律不佳。但她仍像对待我们一样对待现在的每个学生,不放弃任何一个人,热心地给他们送去鼓励,耐心地给他们送去知识……
就是这样一位老师,敬业,爱生,用小事来传授人生道理,用心对待每个学生。她就是我的恩师XX,师恩难忘,难忘我的恩师!
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
老师是花园里辛勤的园丁,是人类灵魂的工程师。他们用一支笔,三寸舌,三尺讲台辛勤教育着莘莘学子。
少年不识愁滋味
青春对于每个人都是美好的。自然而然地,我们的玩闹也在使这美好的岁月中一点点流逝。一天班会课上,您说:“黑发不知勤学早,白首方悔读书迟。但是,你们很浮躁,一点都不踏实。书到用时方恨少啊,希望你们从今儿起要多看书,要博览群书。”此后你带了50本书来班上,组成了一个读书角。时不时,你会找同学聊聊。一次,你找到我,问:“看了书什么感受?”我说道:“很奇特,每个人物个性都很鲜明,情感也丰富。”你宽慰的笑了,说:“歌德先生说:读一本好书就如同和一个高尚的人谈话。开卷有益,多看书总是有好处的。”
从此,我变养成了看书的好习惯。
雄关漫道真如铁
人生如关,关关多磨练。我承认,我是个有着很高理想但与现实却相去甚远的学生。高二上学期分科,我选了物化。我找您聊天,您说:“我就知道你会这么选。”我问:“为什么?”您说:“你写的理想贴在桌上,我都看见了。”我说:“我没有足够的自信去应付以后的\'学业。”您深情地说:“别人能做好的,你也可以。要知道,你现在要以新的高度,不懈努力,脚踏实地一步步的走向你的理想。”“嗯”,我点了点头。是啊,即使关关多磨练,也要凭自己一步一步走下去。
谢谢您老师,您给了我自信!
皇天不负有心人
“天道酬勤”这四个字激励一代又一代的莘莘学子。可是一次考试,我发现根本不是这样的。平时不上心的学生一样比我优秀。一次下课您叫住我,问:“这次考的怎么样?”我支支吾吾了半天,您说:“这次考的不好没什么,最重要的是懂得从中吸取教训,要及时总结学习教训,要坚持不懈地做错题集。可能成效不是那么快,那么明显,但这一定能帮助你查漏补缺的。”之后,不论多少分的试卷,我都能很平淡的看待,然后从中吸取教训。从此,我的成绩一点点提升。
谢谢您,老师,您让我看到了希望,逐渐走向成功!
流水匆匆,老师您虽然现在不再教我,但我真心感谢您,您教会我开卷有益,你告诉我自信地去做事,您激励我及时总结。您确实以您的一张口,一双手,一颗心在辛勤教导我们逐渐的向真、向善、向美!
师恩难忘,感谢您老师!
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