在北京英语作文五年级【一】
国庆节长假期间，我们家去了北京。飞机停在了北京国际机场的`陆地上，我拿起旅行包就从飞机上冲下来了，投入到了北京的怀抱当中。
首先，我们来到了天安门广场，广场可大了，上面还有一大束鲜花，五星红旗随风飘荡。听，是什么声音这么整齐，原来由于是国庆节期间游客比较多，所以一些解放军叔叔在巡逻维持秩序，只见在踏着整齐的脚步呀!
离开了天安门广场，我们来到了壮观的万里长城，踏上长城的第一步时，只见一座座大山出现在我的眼前，一座座山峰连绵起伏。蓝天上的白云轻轻地飘荡在，一会儿像一只可爱的小白兔，一会儿像一只只绵阳，一会儿像一匹匹马，变幻无常。一眼望去，碧绿的山峰再加上壮观的长城真美啊!
最后，我们去的是鸟巢，那里有一座高塔，叫火炬塔。鸟巢的形状像一个小鸟的巢，所以叫鸟巢。鸟巢对面是水立方，那儿白天是蓝色的，一到晚上，灯火通明时，五彩缤纷。
时间不早了。要把北京的迷人之处讲出来，怎么说也说不完，还是你自己去游览一番吧，对了，最后祝大家国庆节快乐。
在北京英语作文五年级【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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在北京英语作文五年级【三】
考完试第二天，我和爸爸还有堂哥去了北京。
哈！终于放假了！告诉你们，我现在兴奋地不得了，因为，我可以到处欢快地游玩去啦！去哪呢？对了！北京！
到了北京，我听小姨说，有八只大熊猫从四川运到了北京，现在就在北京动物园。刚才我还愁来北京去哪玩呢，现在好了，不仅可以看到可爱的大熊猫，还可以看到其他的动物。我迫不及待的催小姨，想要快点起程。我们出发了！
到了北京动物园，首先映入眼帘的是一个大花坛，花坛里的话五颜六色，十分好看。可我已经对花熟视无睹了，我只想尽快看到可爱的`熊猫。于是我们以最快的速度先来到了亚运熊猫馆。人真多！一共才有三只熊猫，怎么那么少？我问小姨才知道，原来这里的熊猫不是从四川运来的。这里的熊猫真懒，好像雕塑一样。第一只好像很害羞，怎么也不肯把头转过来；第二只用一只手拄着脑袋好像很傲慢，却一动不动；第三只很活泼，在那里来回走动，好像很欢迎我们这些游客的到来......
接着，我们来到了奥运熊猫馆。这里的熊猫才是从四川运来的。我数了数，怎么才七只？哦！看！桥上还有一只啊！这只调皮的熊猫！这里的熊猫虽不那么懒，可是很贪吃，瞧！他们正吃香喷喷的竹子呢！这里的居住环境也不错，有水池，还有小瀑布呢！熊猫生活在这里真惬意啊！
我们还去了海洋馆，那里有五颜六色稀奇古怪的鱼。给我印象最深的是罗纹鱼，它不仅颜色好看，是紫色的，上面还有些罗纹。而且它样子古怪，头上像被人打了似的，鼓起了一个大大的包。我们还去看了海狮海豚表演，精彩极了......
这次的游玩，让我在饱了一番眼福！
