喷莲花写作文的老师
老师长出了一只长长的大象鼻子,发火的时候还不停地挺起来,一股股地往外喷着火气。
“同学们,排笔方式的结尾,就是用排笔的修辞方法写结尾,很简单的嘛……”老师的长鼻子一挺,“突突突”地往外喷着气,像一朵朵莲花朝黑板上飘去,然后一朵朵地砸在黑板上,每砸一下就出现一个字,不一会儿,一篇作文的结尾就出现在了黑板上:
您像蜡烛一样,燃烧自己,照亮别人;您像春蚕,奉献了自己装饰了别人;您像粉笔,牺牲了自己,留下了知识;您像园丁,不辞劳累,培育了小花。
这篇作文的内容是写老师为了培养人才所付出的辛苦,结尾用排笔的方式对全文进行了概括和总结,从而突出了本文的主题。哦,我突然明白了,打开作文本,为昨天的作文写结尾:
这就是我的三位好朋友:爱说爱笑爱闹的刘强,但是,谁要惹了他会记仇一星期;不爱说话一生气就爱哭的马琳琳,但是,哭过了就会展现一副笑脸;脑袋不大却总爱胡思乱想的牛小强,但是,一遇到写作文需要想象的时候,就什么也想不起来了……
作文内容分别写了我的三个好朋友的不同的故事,结尾呢,既是排笔句,又对三个好朋友进行了概括性的总结,突出各自的性格……
就在这时,突然听到妈妈的叫声:“女儿,快起床吧,该吃早饭然后上学了……”
“哎呀——我不正在上学吗!”我一边说着一边不情愿地睁开眼睛,嗯——怎么?我怎么躺在自己的床上?怎么不是在教室里?妈妈怎么会在旁边?天啊,原来做了一个梦,怪不得老师长出了大象鼻子,还能喷出莲花一样的气体在黑板上写字!
“作文结尾案”侦破记
夜里,牛牛正在写作文,可是,该结尾的时候,却怎么也写不下去了。老师要求用“总结”的方式来结尾。牛牛还记得老师说过,总结式结尾,就是对正文的内容进行概括式的总结,并且紧扣中心,还要突出主题。可是,他就是写不出来。
此时,他已经困了,只好放下笔上床睡觉,留着结尾明天早上再写。可是,早上起床一看,结尾写完了:
电视台到队上去采访的记者要给爸爸照相,可爸爸却只让他们把他的\'车照了下来。照片带了回来,妈妈看到照片流下了眼泪,将照片压在玻璃板下面。我和妈妈理解他,他爱他的工作,爱他的车……这就是我“陌生”的爸爸。
这是一个非常不错的总结式结尾,可是,这个结尾哪来的呢?难道妈妈偷偷写的?不可能啊,妈妈从来不替自己写作业。牛牛要弄个明白。
当天晚上睡觉之前,以《我的外公》为题写了一篇作文,故意留下结尾不写。然后躺在床上,打开暗淡的壁灯,半闭着眼睛,克制着困意不睡觉,等着看古怪。
12点时,突然,有一股风吹了进来。牛牛悄悄睁开眼睛一看,竟然有一个和自己一模一样的人坐在写字台前,正在写作文。
“天啊——”牛牛惊叫起来。
正在写字的牛牛一惊,回头一看睡觉的牛牛起来了,吓得他一下站起来,身子突然变小,接着变成一只燕子,顺着窗户飞了出去……
牛牛起来看作文,结尾已经写完了,而且还是总结式结尾:
外公没有说什么,脸上露出了欣慰的笑容。他又背起邮包,向另一家走去……我的孙公就是这样一个令人敬爱的人。外公每次下班回来,我总是迎上去,取下他的邮包,深情地叫一声:“外公!”
原来是一只会变化的燕子!
本人在参加英语BEC中级考试取得了不错的`成绩,现把我半年来在准备作文时常用到的一些句型推荐给大家,希望对备考英语BEC的网友有所帮助。
第一部分、BEC作文段首句常用句型:
一、对立观点命题形式的首句:
1. Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A .
2. Some people say A , other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.
3. There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A , some prefer to CHOOSE B . Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.
4. From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B . 5. Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .
6. In general , I prefer to _____ .
7. As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .
8. When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .
9. When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .
10. At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .
11. When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .
12. When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .
13. When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .
14. When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .
15. While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____ .
二、单一观点式
A . Agree
1. One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .
2. I would follow the reasoning that _____ .
3. Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .
4. I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .
5. After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .
6. my arguments for point are listed as follows.
7. I agree with the above statement because _____ .
8. Nowhere in the world has the issue of _____ been so much debated like in our society .
9. I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation because _____ . 10. Thinking logically , I can only say that the title statement is valid because _____ .
11. I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that _____ .
12. Some may hold the opinion that AAA . But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _____ .
13. Many one have the idea that AAA . However , many others disagree with this argument . But both side of the problem whether _____ are supported by good reasons .
14. Recently , it has been much debated over the problem of AAA . Those who object to AAA announce that _____ . But those who favor AAA utter a sonorous voice that _____ .
15. Recently , there is vehement discussion on the issue of _____ . Those who criticize _____ argue that _____ . They claim that _____ . But people who firmly advocate _____ , on the other hand , argue that _____ .
16. There is a much-debated problem today about _____ . Those who object to _____ argue that _____ . They are very sure about _____ . But people who prefer _____ , on the other hand , claim that _____ .
B . Disagree
1. Until recently , _____ was viewed as _____ . But people are taking a fresh look at it .
2. Recently , we often hear about _____ . But is it ?
3. These days , it is often heard about _____ . But is this really the truth ?
4. I feel such an attitude is negative , and that it can bring _____.
5. Some people argue as if it is a general truth that _____ . But to be frank , I cannot agree with them for the flowing reasons .
6. Despite the fact that many people believe that _____ , I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis .
7. Although some people hold the opinion that _____ , I wonder whether the argument could bear close examination .
8. In the nationwide , discussion , many people argue that _____ . But I can say nothing but _____ .
9. Advocates of AAA proclaim that _____ , but I _____ .
10. Until recently , _____ was regarded as _____ . But _____ .
11. Some people think that _____ , but I disagree with this opinion for numerous reasons , as presented below .
12. Now , it is increasingly mentioned that _____ . Such people think _____ . But I can only cast doubt on whether _____ .
13. Now , it is widely believed that _____ . These people think _____ . But I wonder if _____ .
14. I cannot totally the idea that _____ . Because , in my point of view , I believe _____ .
15. As a matter of fact , I support that _____ , but I cannot agree with the title statement .
16. Nowadays , it is widely held that _____ . People of this kind think _____ .But I doubt whether _____ .
第二部分、BEC作文常用结尾句:
1. Taking into account of all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that_____ .
2. All reliable evidences point to one saying , that is _____ .
3. For the reasons presented above , I strongly commit to the notion that _____ .
4. While it is true that _____ , I think that _____ .
5. Given the factors I have just outlined , I can only say that _____ .
6. This is not to say that _____ . But in terms of _____ , it is _____ .
7. Therefore , it is easy to draw the conclusion that _____ .
8. Recognizing the fact that _____ should drive us to conclude that _____ .
9. To put all into a nutshell , I _____ .
10. In a word , I support the statement that it is better to _____ because Good stuff! Wonder why there are so few hits.
总有萦绕在心头的琐事,让我做不到“既然目标是地平线,那留给世界的只能是背影”。生活,不是毫无目的自由散落的蒲公英,而是一株随风摇曳的芦苇,在泥泞中挣扎着向上。
龙应台向往自由,向往民主,却依旧完成了由文人向仕的转变。她曾笑言自己在地雷阵上跳芭蕾舞,被禁锢着,却永不放弃寻找自由的希望。为仕十年,她也曾体味 过“余舟一芥的无边无际无寥”,却从未扔下肩上的重担轻松地走向自由生活的.道路。政坛上总有人对她指手画脚的说到“看不惯它的那个文人调调”,她却一直坚 守着自己“独立的精神”。她的心中自有一片天空,思维在风中放飞,自有在一瞬间升华。可她仍扎根于生活的土壤,一心只为台湾的文化政治奠基。或许,一场 “说走就走的旅行”对她来说轻而易举,或许,走出政坛走向文学世界天马行空更为自有。但她只是咬着牙头也不回的崽这条注定充满艰辛的道路上披荆斩棘,在泥泞中涤荡清辉。
柴静曾说“不要因为我们走得太远,就忘了我们为什么出发”。生活便是这样,不能在羁绊的路途中忘记生活的本来目的,换取心灵的洗涤。
“蜀道难,台湾女子上凉山”。张宜平,放弃年薪百万的生活,毅然来到麻风村抱起孤弱的孩子。是怎样一种信念指引着她不断前行?大山之外的生活的确灯红酒 绿,却少了一份心灵的静谧。是爱,牵绊住她向往自由的心:是爱,让她留下马不停蹄的脚步。她看起来无比坚强,可她内心的柔软,恰似雪莲花初绽时不胜凉风的 娇羞,轻轻掠过每一个孩子的心头。自由,是筝线那头的轻鸢,而张平宜,轻轻握住筝线这头,微笑的扎根于凉山的土壤。
生活,好似壶中青茗,在沸水中上下翻腾。即使不能逃脱杯盏的禁锢,仍能升华出自身的那缕清香。
蜘蛛网上的小精灵
晚上,张盟盟正在家里写作业,突然,窗外传来呼救声:“你能帮我脱离蛛网么?”
张盟盟探头窗外,原来一个小精灵被粘在蜘蛛网上了:“当然能,但是,要看你值不值得帮助。我读几篇作文,你如果能用设问的方式说出结尾来,我就帮你。”
“嘻嘻……不就是结尾段里要有设问句吗?或者说,就是用设问句写结尾。小菜一碟,开始把。”
张盟盟阅读的作文题目是“气喘病”,内容写一个得了气喘病的人与病魔抗争而终不见好转的故事。
小精灵马上说出结尾:
我也想早日把气喘这一魔鬼从我身上赶走。这个世界上难道就没有驱赶气喘病这个魔鬼的仙术吗?
“不错不错,请听下一篇。”题目是“我不再是小姑娘了”,内容写一个胆小的小姑娘,平时连发言都不敢大声,见了虫子都要吓得大哭大叫,如今,在老师的培养下,已经有胆量了,不再是那个胆小的小姑娘了。
小精灵马上说出设问式结尾:
在老师的培养教育下,我的胆量大多了,再不是那羞答答的“小,姑娘了。爸爸妈妈也夸我有出息。我想,这难道不应感谢我的班主任——王老师吗?
“你真聪明。我再考你一篇”
这是一篇将老师比作“妈妈”的作文。
小精灵马上就说出了设问式结尾:
怎么样?认识我们的“妈妈”了吗?我们的“妈妈”可爱吗?反正在我们哥几个心中“妈妈是太阳”,我们是太阳底下最幸福的人。
“哦,果然很精彩!”
张盟盟用一根木棍将蜘蛛网缠下来,小心翼翼地将小精灵从蜘蛛网上摘下来……从那以后,小精灵和张盟盟成了好朋友,经常在一起玩。
①高尔基曾说过:“天才出于勤奋。”卡莱尔也说过:“天才就是无止境刻苦勤奋的能力。”只要我们勤奋不懈,勇于探求,那就会使自己变得聪明起来,就能在事业上取得巨大的成就。愿我们每一个人都能到“勤”的深刻含义,做一个勤奋者。
《说“勤”》
②“慎独”是一面盾牌,可助你抵御各种各样的诱惑,防范各色各类的“糖弹”;“慎独”是一盏明灯,可帮你照亮前行之路,明辫是非曲直;.“慎独”是一剂良药,可使你内心清朗,精神昂然。那么.就让我们用“慎独”警示自己,鞭策自己,踏实做事。坦荡为人,做一个道德高尚的人,使我们的社会更加文明,更加和谐。
--《小议“慎独”》
关于议论文结尾的多种多样,却也没有固定的模式。只要能够深化主题,使文章结构紧凑,完整严谨,表达有力,什么样的方式都可运用。
综上所述,自强自立在个人成长和成材方面是非常重要的。雏鹰经过风和雨的洗礼,终究能成为一只展翅翱翔的雄鹰,靠的是自强自立的信念。DD《说“自强“》
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