五年级英语秋游作文【一】
我们在等船时，我隔江向远处望去焦山还是呢么的翠绿，就好似一块浮在水面上的翡翠。
过了一会儿，我们进入了焦山公园内，只见一棵棵古树摇着树叶，向我们问好，，欢迎我们的到来。
徐老师带着我们，来到山脚下，准备开始爬山。我们排好队，一点一点向上走去，有人落队了，徐老师就鼓励他，让他重新充满力量，接着走。
在大家的努力下，我们不一会儿就来到了山顶，可还有一个更大的挑战在等着我们。
原来在山顶上，还有一个宝塔，叫“万佛塔”，一共七层。还没等徐老师讲完，有一些人就冲进了宝塔，迫不及待的想开始爬。由于楼梯小，所以我们像一只毛毛虫一样，慢慢的爬了起来。
我们爬啊爬，每层的佛都不一样，各个都千姿百态。不一会儿，我们就爬到了顶层，走出去，只听见耳旁传来阵阵风声，我们听了，都觉得心旷神怡。
美丽的焦山，我爱你！
五年级英语秋游作文【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语秋游作文【三】
在车上我和好朋友玮怡坐在一起，一路上导游姐姐主持了节目，让我们表演了唱歌等等，还奖励了小礼品。一路上在欢声笑语中度过！五十分后我们到达了目的地农夫乐园。
下了车我们在大门口拍了全班集照，导游姐姐给我们发了任务卡。到了园区后我们卷起袖子洗干净手，给妈妈做了一回团子，蒸好了可以当点心哦！过后小朋们都下地里去偷，爸爸们去池塘里捕鱼，妈妈在给我们做中饭。我和好朋友悦珊来来回回跑了十三趟，寻找到了玉米，萝卜，南瓜还有大白菜。虽然有点累，但我觉得非常有趣，通过自己的努力劳动得到了美味的`食材！
中饭过后，我们排好队伍来到种花园区，拿到了导游哥哥给的小花盆，一把小铲子和松果桔种子。把花种下后我把它送给了我的妈妈！接着我们走进了疯狂的小鸟游戏。游戏过后我们全班同学爬河比赛，最后我们这一组赢了，我非常高兴。还走了大脚板游戏，妈妈和我摔跤了，但是我们没有放弃，最终把路程全部走完，我因为摔了一跤没有得到名次，有点不开心，妈妈劝告我重在参与，不在乎名次。
只要开心就好！到了自由活动时间了，我和几位好朋友在玩丛林小分队，还玩了丢手捐和抢凳子游戏。
听到导游姐姐叫我们上车了，我很恋恋不舍得走了，心里在想下次我一定还要带上我的弟弟再来！
五年级英语秋游作文【四】
我抬起沉重的双腿迈开最后几步，终于爬上了山顶，虽然我累得浑身酸痛不能动弹，但心里却充满了成功的喜悦。最后我们恋恋不舍地离开了这个地方。通过这次的爬山让我受益匪浅，无论什么事情，只要坚持，付出努力，就能成功！更重要的`是我想到了我们的学习不也是在“登山”吗？古人说：“书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟”。不错，只有付出艰辛得努力，刻苦攀登知识的高峰，才能感受到知识的浩瀚无边，才能站在知识的顶峰上高瞻远瞩，领略无穷的快乐，这难道不是我秋游登山最大的收获吗？
