高中生英语作文评分标准【一】
There are a small number of people called “the moonlight clan” in our society, who always run out of their income each month and have no plan to save money. Concerning with this kind of consumption conception, some consider it as a fashion while other oppose it.
在我们的社会中有一小部分人叫“月光族”，他们每个月总是没有钱剩余也没有存钱的计划。关于这种消费观念，有人认为是时尚而其他则持反对态度。
Those who are in favor of this kind of consumption conception point out that being moonlight clan let them have more chances to enjoy lives and live in a high-quality life. However, the opponents argue that it is not a kind of rational conception because those called “the moonlight clan” may have no ability to cope with their rainy day. In addition, this kind of consumption habit put a premium on extravagance and waste to some extent.
那些支持这种消费观念的人指出成为月光族让他们有更多的机会享受生活，过高质量的生活。然而，反对者则认为那不是理性的概念，因为那些所谓的“月光族”在他们低迷的时候可能没有能力应付。此外，这种消费习惯在某种程度上形成了奢侈浪费。
Taking the two opinions into consideration, I am inclined to agree with the latter one. From my point of view, the life of the moonlight clan is more luxurious or high-quality but they may be lack of sense of security, especially in their rainy day. Therefore, I still advocate that all of us should keep some money at any time so that we will not be too difficult in our rainy day.
考虑到以上两个观点，我倾向于同意后者。从我的角度来看，月光族的生活更豪华或质量更高但是他们也许会缺乏安全感，尤其是低迷的时候。因此，我仍然认为我们所有人在任何时候都应该存一些钱，这样在困难的时候就不会过得太艰辛。
高中生英语作文评分标准【二】
For thousands of years， animals have trodden a slow path， their spirits together with the body。 But our human being\'s transportation is too fast。 The body moves but the soul is left behind。 We try to free ourselves in convenience， but we only imprison the soul。 Since we invented how to count hours， we do everything to short the time， short the deadline。 But the time saved can\'t be shorten。 Nowadays， we spend lots of time staying in front of a TV just changing the channels， while we have no time to talk with a good friend or play with our family。 We have plenty of time to search old news on the internet， while we hardly think about our life。 In the end， the only thing apparent is our loneliness。
Take your time， please。 Try to follow the natural steps and have your own clock。 Try to share your time with everybody you love， share your mind， your happiness and sadness。 Try to read the world we live in， do not only catch a quick glimpse at the society。
Someday， when we know how to spend every second in our life， we can then live our own life。
高中生英语作文评分标准【三】
??准答案高中生记叙文我大抵明白为何“答案”前面总加上“参考”两字了，既然是“参考”，又何必太“标准”呢？一篓子的错误答案让人气不打一处来，现在物价都上涨了，你就给点质量行嘛。
这些出版商真是狡猾，前段时间，一拨人批判，认为“答案是多种多样的。”标准答案容易扼***孩子各个领域的创造力，束缚了他们广阔的思维空间，这些本无可厚非。可黑心商家钻了空子，将“标准”包装成“参考”，紧接着，一批印有“参考答案”的辅导用书横空出世，顺便为他们答案的失误铺平了道路。
可是出版商们又进入了另一个误区——无需对标准答案的探求。本想着既然有了参考答案，又何必需要标准答案，这种想法完全错了。标准是衡量正确与错误的天平，是划分对与错的鸿沟，尽管是那么空虚，却无时无刻不规范着我们的言行，决定着我们的成败。就算标准限制了我们的思维，但就因此轻易地将标准舍弃不是大错特错吗？
不仅仅是答案需要标准，生活中的许多言行不也需要标准吗？黑心商家出版的这些不堪入眼的书籍不也逾越了道德的标准？瘦肉精、地沟油的产出不也违背了良心的标准？机动机组的发生不也破坏了工作责任的标准？标准是规范社会工作生活的`准绳，约束着人们的言行，我们又怎能将标准抛掷于脑后，去追求所谓的“参考”呢？
当然，我们应该用百分之百的决心去追求标准，以百分之百的信心去坚守标准，标准的追求与坚守都在于我们强大的内心。何为强大的内心？它即是一切美好事物的集合体。在标准的追求中，也许仅仅是一瞬间的错误念头，便能将你从天堂拖到地狱，而拥有一颗强大的内心，便能让你装上坚定的翅膀，飞向标准的天宇。在标准的坚守中，拥有强大的内心，便能使你面对诱惑一笑而过，不会因此绊住你停滞的步伐，将标准贯彻到底。长此以往，标准就会贯穿于你生活中的每一个细节，这样标准便掌握在你手中。
诚然，标准很重要，但千万别以标准为最终目标，在标准之上，我们还有很多的东西要追求，伟大抑或崇高，但这一切都立于标准的基础之上，现在的任务是什么呢？就是——
踏踏实实地追求标准呗！
高中生英语作文评分标准【四】
Time flies like an arrow before we realize it .It is known that nothing is more precious than time. The good old proverb "time is money" reminds us that time is valuable. When time goes by, it will never return. However, it is a pity that some people don't make full use of their time .They spend a lot of time in sleeping, chatting playing computer games or other unmeaning matters. . They don't realize that wasting time is actually equal to killing themselves. They always regret not having made great achievements. One of the reasons may be they do not make good use of time. Therefore, in order to be successful, they should first get into the habit of being on time. It’s a sign of cherishing time. Don't put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Being lazy will eventually lead to failure. Don't wait, because you don't know how long it will take when you put off your plan.
The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in study or job.
高中生英语作文评分标准【五】
Take your time
For thousands of years, animals have trodden a slow path, their spirits together with the body. But our human being's transportation is too fast. The body moves but the soul is left behind. We try to free ourselves in convenience, but we only imprison the soul. Since we invented how to count hours, we do everything to short the time, short the deadline. But the time saved can't be shorten. Nowadays, we spend lots of time staying in front of a TV just changing the channels, while we have no time to talk with a good friend or play with our family. We have plenty of time to search old news on the internet, while we hardly think about our life. In the end, the only thing apparent is our loneliness.
Take your time, please. Try to follow the natural steps and have your own clock. Try to share your time with everybody you love, share your mind, your happiness and sadness. Try to read the world we live in, do not only catch a quick glimpse at the society.Someday, when we know how to spend every second in our life, we can then live our own life.
高中生英语作文评分标准【六】
在我的印象中桂林是阳光明媚的地方。我每年都梦想去那里度假。桂林以它美丽的自然风光出名。
Firstly, owing to the goodlatitude, it's neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer. So it seems likespring all the year round.
首先，由于良好的.纬度，冬天不是很冷夏天也不太热。所以那里是四季如春。
Secondly, as no large industrythere and focus on tourism, there's almost no pollution. Maybe we can enjoy ourbeautiful nature there.
其次，由于那里没有大型工业区，重点关注的是旅游，所以那里几乎没有污染。也许我们可以在那里享受到我们大自然的美丽的风光。
Thirdly, the landscape in Guilinis the best in the world. For example, Lijiang River is as clean as a mirror.While boating on Lijiang River, I found myself in wonderland. The mountains alongthe river are so fantastic. Some of them look like animals; some of them looklike plants; and some of them look like human beings. The elephant mountain,it's the symbol of the city.
第三，在桂林的景观是世界上最好的。例如，丽江像镜子一样干净。在丽江上划船，我觉得自己犹如在仙境中一般。河边的山是如此的奇妙。其中一些看起来像动物；有些看起来像植物；有些看起来像人类。象鼻山，是这个城市的象征。
What's more, it's also worth visitingthe silver cave. It's eroded by carbon dioxide and water falls. As you enterinto the cave, you will discover yourself in another fanciful world. You can'timagine how magic our nature is.
而且，银子岩也是值得参观的。它是由二氧化碳和倾斜而下的水形成的。你进入洞中，你会觉得自己身处于一个幻想中的世界。你无法想象我们的大自然是多么的神奇。
