英语作文考试评分细则【一】
亲爱的爸爸：
您好！
您知道吗？您一年到头都在外地打工，为我们一家挣来那得之不易的血汗钱作为生活费，可是钱回来了，却不见你的人回归家里啊！
去年，您好不容易从百忙之中抽空回家，我高兴地为您打开门时，却被一个我从未见过的景象惊呆了：您的身上沾满了灰尘，手上还有石灰留下的印子，在咳嗽声中，你伸手拍了拍身上的水泥，这些水泥是从工地上带下来的，它们是些害人精，沾了水泥的皮肤通红的，也是身上痒的原因。
您的这个形象让我在大脑中构建出了您在工地工作的样子，可您还高兴地说工地是您挣大钱的地方。我心中想：这哪里是挣大钱的地方呀？这分明是一个害人的地方！您进了屋，高兴地在家里转来转去，时不时还伸手去抓痒，我在旁边看着，真心疼啊！
您还有一个坏习惯，我真希望你可以戒掉，那就是爱打麻将！
以前您在家时，一有时间就去打麻将。早上起了床，第一件事就是去打麻将，中午回来吃过饭后，又去接着打，晚上吃了饭后还是去打麻将，一直打到晚上十二点左右才回来。就在去年，你去打麻将，一打就是十二个小时啊！望着您那黑黑的眼圈，我真希望世上没有麻将这个害人的东西，在这里，我想问一下你在外地还有没有打麻将呀？
我希望您可以早点回来，并改掉打麻将这个坏习惯。
祝
万事如意，身体健康！
您亲爱的儿子：xx
20xx年1月3日
英语作文考试评分细则【二】
一是“源波讨源”、“依文论文”。“源波讨源”即要求阅卷老师要充分明白手头的作文，是考生在特殊场合和有限时间里写的“急就章”，且中学生阅历有限，因此阅卷老师应根据中学生的实际情况来评阅，按照中学生的思路来理解，不能按成人的标准来进行评价。“依文论文”就是，阅卷老师要按照文章的体裁来充分理解文章，是什么体裁（议论、说明或记叙）就按什么体裁标准来评价，不能有个人的好恶。
二是“立足给分，不立足扣分”。刘教授说，一般老师往往喜欢对学生的文章“找问题”，但考虑到考生写的是“急就章”，所以阅卷老师应立足于尽量发现考生的“闪光点”，今年作文强调感情真挚，内容充实，文体符合。此外还鼓励考生的个性发展，“个性”就是“闪光点”，因此在发展等级分方面，只要涉及标答中的一点，就可给分，直至满10分。
三是“以宽容开放心态评阅”。刘教授说，今年强调老师要以宽容、开放心态评阅考生作文。凡是和话题沾边（所谓“进了门槛”）的作文，都不当作偏题处理，当然要宽严有度。此外，鼓励阅卷老师敢于给考生作文打满分，“满分作文允许有个别瑕疵存在”。
四是“通过阅卷起到一定导向作用”。刘教授说，高考作文评卷要体现导向作用，促进教育向素质教育发展。比如说，现在倡导作文应告别模式化，端正文风，内容与形式统一，摒弃华而不实的、空洞的.东西。今年作文强调是否体现了考生的独自的、真实的生活和情感体验，思维状态是否清晰、有序展现，是否有“我”在（即个性化）。刘教授还说，今年对作文十分重视“符合文体”这一点。因此，像那种追求形式华丽、文体怪异的文章，将不受欢迎，“非驴非马”（即文体不正）的文章，不可能得高分。
据刘教授介绍，今年高考语文评卷还将严格控制速度，每位老师每天只能评120份试卷，落实到每份作文上，阅卷时间平均在4．5分钟左右。以前有媒体曾报道高考作文评分“90秒钟定生死”，这在我省是无稽之谈。
英语作文考试评分细则【三】
两节课后，试卷发下来了，我竟然是八十分，真是太不可思议了，明明昨晚复习的好端端的，怎么会考成这样？！回去要挨老爸的竹笋烧肉了。我只能强装笑颜，其实心里已是万念俱灰。回家的路上，奶奶一个劲的数落我，回到家又被爸爸妈妈呵斥。灰头土脸的我有种无颜面对江东父老的感觉。
我痛定思痛，认真分析了每个错误点并一一订正。我暗下决心，今后一定要努力学习、全面复习，跟“认真”、“细心”做朋友，争取获得好成绩。
英语作文考试评分细则【四】
亲爱的爸爸：
您好！
人们都说母爱是伟大的，但现在我觉得父爱同样伟大。
还记得去年冬天的一天吗，您连续上了24小时的班，吃过晚饭后早早就睡了。到了夜里11点多，我肚子突然疼起来，妈妈喂我喝了点热水也不见好转，我已经疼得在床上打滚儿。爸爸，您听到动静就起来了，看了看我说：“不行，马上去医院。”二话不说，您背起我就往医院赶。最后医生诊断为“肠痉挛”需要输液，因为我疼得躺不住，您只好抱着我，一边安慰我一边给我揉肚子，两个小时没换过一个姿势。看着您熬得通红的眼睛，我真想哭出声来。爸爸，我想对您说：“等我长大了，我会像您照顾我一样照顾您和妈妈。”
生活上，您对我无微不至，在学习上也对我严格要求。我的英语成绩在班里名列前茅，这和您从小对我的培养密不可分。一年级时，您就用简单的英语和我交流，家中日常用品也被您用英语贴上标签。到了三年级，您把英语书上的每一个单词做成卡片，每天晚上不厌其烦的帮我背诵，您还给我买了幽默丛书《父与子全集》英汉对照，没事时我就会拿出来看一看。我对英语的浓厚兴趣离不开您的教育。爸爸，我想对您说：“儿子一定不辜负您的教育，好好学习。”
爸爸，您不仅是我的良师，也是我的益友。我想对您说：“作为一名学生，我会用我的成绩来报答您！”
儿子：王其校
20xx年9月27日星期六
英语作文考试评分细则【五】
亲爱的爸爸：
您好！
我有许多心里话想对您说，可是每次鼓起勇气到您面前时，我总是说不出话来，我就趁这次写信的机会跟你说说我的心里话吧！
自从我们家买了电脑以后，我很高兴，可是我每次想玩电脑的时候，您总是找这样或那样的理由来拒绝我，可是我曾经偷偷的看了您在上网的时候，你竟然在打扑克，我真觉得不公平，你娱乐，我为什么不能娱乐呢？只有在双休日才可以勉强玩一会，当我没写完作业的时候，您总是催我赶快去写作业，可我根本没心思写作业。您应该让我放松一下心情再让我写作业，这不是两全其美吗？比如老师说要我们写日记，您要我写完作业才能出去玩或玩电脑，可是我没有做什么有意义的事情，您让我怎么写日记呢？所以说，您应该让我做一些有意义的事情，才能让我打开思维更好地完成作业。
您不给我玩电脑我可以理解，但是您望子成龙的心也太强烈了吧！每次有同学来找我玩，爸爸总是说不要和一些成绩差的同学玩，古人云：“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”啊！如果他跟我玩能让他的成绩提高，这也算一种美德啊！难道你不想让我们黄家永留芳名吗？难道你不想让祖宗为他的子孙而骄傲自豪吗？所以您应该让我和成绩差的同学玩，让我们的下一代子孙为我们而感到无比的骄傲与自豪吧。
祝爸爸工作顺利、万事如意。
您的儿子：黄杰
20xx年9月5日
英语作文考试评分细则【六】
When I was a freshman in college I watched the film Gua Sha Treatment for the first time, now I am a junior student and I come back to review the movie from a multicultural aspect, I have many different feelings after watching the film again.
At the beginning of the film, XuDatong is given an award and later he delivers a speech. What makes me impressed most is in his speech he says “one day I will become one of you, a truly successful American, today this award proved that America is a true land of opportunity and I am the living proof of that.” At that moment Xu thinks he has realized his American Dream totally with his lovingly wife and adorable son. However, I think it is ironical that to make a speech like that and I assume it is made on purpose to hind a clue for the story\'s development. How many non—American people have such a beautiful American dream? One of my classmate studies in American now and before he went aboard he told me his American dream is he can stand at the top of the New York. To be honest, I also dream that one day I can get the Green Card living there happily and successfully maybe working at the Wall Street. When Xu gets the award he thinks he entirely melted in the melting pot neglecting the multicultural obstruct, later the plot goes against the way he thinks. And later Quinlan asked Xu\'why you be the scapegoat of your father?\' Xu answers \'because he is Chinese.\' Then maybe Xu knows that there is always a wide gap between Chinese and American cultures.
The second scene is Xu hit his son Denis because Denis hit the son of xu\'s boss, at the middle of the film xu tells his boss that he hit his own son is only to show his respect to his boss John Quinlan, that time Quinlan feels puzzled “what a Chinese logic”,yes, American can never understand such a logic full of Chinese characteristic, because they respect everyone including the children, they won\'t beat a child to please the boss, and there is no such a conception of degree between employee and employer, they feel everyone is equal, which is quite different from china.
Connected to the second scene, the third difference I want to analyze is the care for the children. In America, people pay more attention to the right of children which can be seen from the law—leaving children alone at home is illegal, while in China it is so common that almost everyone may experience such loneliness. And Children Welfare Agency does work in America which shows the importance Americans attach to children\'s right. What\'s more, I remember a line \'No one won the case, especially the child.\' In my opinion, it also manifests the universal concern from the American public to the children.
The fourth aspect is following the procedure, in the film, more than there times, the people focus on the rule, the law, the procedure. At the Christmas Eve Xu wants to return back to his home pretending as a Santa Claus, what a pity, the security recognizes him and persuades \'you are always a good tenement, never causes troubles for me.\' And another scene is at the end of the film , the judge says \'I have to follow the procedure.\' However, in China people always have to ask for a favor to do something, and later you have to pay back the favor,for myself, I prefer the American style, strict to the procedure.
The fifth and the last point is the humors, Quinlan says \'you can\'t fall, your health security is the company paid.\' \'Datong, welcome home, maybe next time, you can come from the front door.\' \'dady, why you come from the window\' \' because we don\'t have a chimney.\' I really adore this distinguished American humor, especially in dangerous situations, which is quite rare in China.
That\'s my whole reaction to Gua Sha Treatment.
英语作文考试评分细则【七】
dear mum,
hi mom. i got to school last day. i had my record card. my chinese teacher said i was the best student in the classroom. my english teacher said i was good at speaking. my science teacher said i can do better. but i think the science is science is very difficult. my p.e. teacher said i need to practice more. and my math teacher said i was hard-working. but my history teacher said i was a lazy boy.
i hope i can do well.
your son
peter
