要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
敬爱的老师,亲爱的同学们:
大家好
我今天想竞选组长一职,这个职位有许许多多的人向往,但这职位需要一个有责任心的人来担任,或许我还不够好,但我认为我可以做好,我有这个决心,伟大的心理学家、教育家耐基曾经说:“不要怕推销自己,只要你认为自己有才华,你就应该大胆提任这个或那个职务。”
假如老师和同学让我竞选成功,我会用前所未有的精力,清醒的脑子和认真的态度完成这项工作。我一定会全力以赴,做到最好,上课认真积极,下课饱览全书,还会为同学和老师做力所能及的事。严格要求自己,为同学树立一个好榜样,并在老师展开活动时帮忙,我知道自己还有不足的地方,比如脾气不好、爱发火……等等,我会认认真真的去改正,人谁无错,只要知错就改就行,我还不会与别人因为一点点事公报私仇,更不会辜负老师和同学的信任。如果我选上了组长,我一定会像唐朝皇帝(李世民)一样,不乱用权职,不因公徇私。当然,每个班干部都应该这样。就算我选不上班干部,我相信其他任职的班干部也一定会做的很好,在优秀的班干部的带领下,我们班级一定会和睦相处,团结一致,遵守纪律,尊师重道。
如果同学们相信我,请把你手上的票投给我,我不会让老师和同学失望的,谢谢。
尊敬的老师,亲爱的同学们:
大家好!我是刘晨怡!我是个活泼开朗的女孩。我的爱好有许多,比如:弹钢琴、跳舞、游泳、阅读名着。
从一年级起,我就开始担任班上的班干部了,四年过来,已经积累了相当多的。
当班干部,我为的是想为班级出一份力,让我们四9班走在最前端!
假如我当上了班干部,我会更加严格要求自己,以《小学生守则》来衡量自己。自觉带领同学们认真地早读、写作业、打扫卫生和摆课桌椅等。做好老师给我的任务。在五(9)班这个温暖的班集体里,大家都是平等的,我要虚心听取同学们的意见,取人之长,补己之短,相互学习,共同进步。
假如我没被选上,我也不会气馁,我会继续加油,努力做到班干部所需的条件。
是花,我总会开。是树,我总会长高。是鸟,我总会飞翔。是石头,我总会铺设道路。是班干部,我总会做得很好!
老师、同学们,请相信我可以做好!
我的演讲完了,谢谢大家!
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