Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
在这个星期,我看了一部有教育意义的电影,名字叫《背着爸爸上学去》。这部电影讲述了在一个贫困山区中有一户人家有二个孩子,一个男孩,一个女孩,他们的爸爸石大供不起他们俩一起上学,只有用转勺把的方法来决定谁上学,结果勺把向着叫石娃的男孩子,于是他便有了上学的机会,而他的姐姐却只能在家里做家务。渐渐的石娃已经是初中生了,因为成绩优秀,被化学老师选为参加奥化比赛。果然,石娃没有辜负爸爸的望子成龙之梦,拿回了甘肃赛区的全国一等奖,也给他爸爸争了光。又过了几年,他姐姐也成了一个标致的小姑娘,她到了出嫁的年龄,为了支持家里的生活,她只能嫁到一个自己不喜欢的有钱人家。天有不测风云。
一日,石娃去看姐姐,爸爸则在庄稼地里割玉米,忽然下起雨来,他赶紧回去,但一不小心跌断了腿,还是四五个人来帮忙才把他抬回了家。从此石娃家的生活更困难了。本来石娃已经拿到了师范学院的录取通知书,如果去上大学,家里就没有人照顾他爸爸了,左右为难之时他想出了一个两全其美的办法:背着爸爸去上学。看完了这部电影,我不禁想到,如果没有石大和他姐姐的付出,石娃就上不了学,更考不上大学……当我看到石娃背起他爸爸的时候,我感到石娃是一个孝顺的孩子。
天下每个孩子的父母都是这样,就像我妈妈为了照顾我,宁愿把工作辞了,再想一想这十年来又为我付出了多少,每天忙里忙外的,还要接送我上学,我也一定要像石娃那样,来用优秀的成绩报答他们,让他们也能圆一个望女成凤的梦,让他们也过上幸福美满的生活,再想想公公婆婆他们也为我付出了很多,我也要报答他们,因为他们也希望我早日成才,做一个对社会有用的人,报效国家。看完了这部电影,让我懂得了很多……
石娃的成功告诉我们,他的成果是靠努力得来的,不是来自偶然。爱迪生说过天才是有百分之一的聪明,和百分之九十九的汗水合成的。我们要学会跌倒了又站起来,不能受点挫折就不敢往前面走,我们一定要受很多大风大浪,跌倒了又站起来这才是强者的作风,经过很多次的跌倒,才可以走向成功,有一次我看了一篇文章名字忘了,有3个人去爬山,第一个人看见了山那么高肯定爬不上去所以他放弃了,第2个人爬到半山腰说:还有那么远肯定爬不上去,也放弃了,可是第3个人一直很坚定,他很努力的爬,终于爬到了山上。有一次3个人在一起聊天,聊那次爬山的'时候,第1个人说我很聪明我在山下面看山那么高很定爬不上去的,第2个人说我也很聪明,我爬到半山腰就不爬了。
第3个人说但是你们看不到山上的美景了。这个故事说明,努力的人才会有好的结果。
对于我们来说我们要报答父母的养育之恩好好学习,将来要报答父母,为国增光。
漆黑的山路上,总回荡着动听的歌声,一群可爱的孩子,每天零晨四五点打着火把去上学。从他们的双眸中,我看到了他们对知识的渴望,对理想的追求,对美好生活的向往——他们是贫困山区的孩子。尽管每天要打着火把走两三个小时的山路,被火烧伤过,在山路中跌倒过,可他们始终没有放弃,仍然努力地学习。再想一想我们城市里的孩子,在家不是“小皇帝”,就是“小公主”,每天爸爸妈妈开着小轿车送到学校。相比之下,我们比他们幸福得多得多,有这么好的学习环境,我们能不好好学习吗?
我,一个初一的学生,每天早晨要爸爸妈妈掀被子才肯起床;还要爸爸妈妈烧好早饭;给我收拾好书包;晚上睡觉前还要爸爸妈妈给我铺被子通过看《打着火把去上学》,我感到自愧不如。陶校长曾说过:“滴自己的汗,吃自己的饭,自己的.事自己干,靠人靠天靠祖上,不算是好汉!”这群山区的孩子们从小就养成了早睡早起,吃苦耐劳的好习惯。从他们的身上,我看到了自立、自强的优秀品质;从他们的身上,我看到了朴实、勤劳的性格;从他们的身上,我看到了乐观积极的人生态度。
每个人都有自己的梦想,贫困山区的孩子们最大的梦想就是——考上大学、走出大山。他们喜欢读书,喜欢学习,更喜欢成为一个有知识、有文化的人。我们每天总埋怨老师布置的作业太多,总厌恶一连串的考试,总抱怨自己太倒霉了可是,我们又是多么的幸运呢,
其实,每一天都是一个新的起点,我们应倍加珍惜花样年华,珍惜现在的学习机会,努力学习。回首昨天,应该是问心无愧的;面对今天,应该是倍加珍惜的;展望明天应该是信心百倍的。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
这幅漫画画的是一个小男孩满头大汗地喊道:“又要迟到了!”,而他的奶奶则拿着一顶小黄帽,在后面追道:“小黄帽!”,爷爷也气喘吁吁地拎着书包喊着:“书包!”,更搞笑的是,一只小花猫嘴里叼着一条红领巾,“喵喵”地跑在后面。
这幅漫画的确引人捧腹大笑,可给人们更多的,是欢笑过后的.深思。因为,这幅漫画就是我们生活中的真实写照和缩影。仔细想想,在我们生活中,不也有很多孩子跟画中的小男孩一样吗?他们是父母的“掌上明珠”,不是“饭来张口”,就是“衣来伸手”。那么父母呢?他们把孩子放在手心里怕冻着,含在口里怕化了,对孩子百依百顺,有求必应。他们怎会知道,这种爱会把孩子引入歧途?
一名娇生惯养的大学生,来到广州求学,因为没有父母、保姆帮忙料理生活,什么家务活都不会干,无法适应新的生活环境,最终跳楼自尽。这场悲剧难道还不足以说明溺爱的害处吗?这场悲剧的罪魁祸首正是父母,如果不是父母过度溺爱孩子,让孩子丧失了生活的自理能力,那个大学生又怎会走上绝路呢?
相比起国内的家长,澳大利亚的家长则显得明智得多。他们知道,娇惯了的孩子缺乏自制力和独立生活的能力,长大成人后难免吃亏,所以,他们在孩子打预防针时,把孩子“甩”在地上任其活动,而不是哭了就抱。当然,他们教育孩子的方式不止于此,但就凭他们不会溺爱孩子这一点,就值得许多父母学习。
父母啊,放开你们的双手吧,让孩子们自己学会“走路”,从哪里跌到,就从哪里重新站起来!
今天,我看了一部电影名字叫《背起爸爸上学》,里面讲述石娃从小到大和背起年老的爸爸上学的经历。
石娃小的时候,他的妈妈去世了,一家人里面就剩下石娃、石娃的姐姐、石娃的爸爸。家里生活条件很差,生活的担子压在了爸爸一个人的肩上。一天石娃的爸爸拿起一个盛水的舀子说:"这舀子头转到谁,谁就去上学。”说完就开始转,这个舀子头转到了石娃,石娃高兴的上蹿下跳。他爸爸说:"石娃坐下,上学很苦,要有耐心”然后石娃的姐姐连夜给石娃缝了一双鞋。并叫石娃起床上学,石娃起来穿好衣服出去他爸爸看见了,就领着石娃去上学。到了河边,他爸爸说:“把鞋脱了,到学堂再穿”,石娃把鞋子脱下来并拿绳拴住挂到脖子里,挽起裤腿向河对岸走去。在课堂上老师一声一声的叫他们念书,门口有一个小女孩坐在那里也跟着念。老师第一次见没有理她,第二次老师忍无可忍把小女孩抱出去了。教室了顿时快成了菜市场了。同学们有的打鸟、有的踩桌子、有的交头接耳。忽然同学们发现石娃穿的是开裆裤。顿时同学们都围过来看,石娃脸色变得苍白。石娃的同桌说了一声“老师来了”,刹那间,同学们各回各位教室里顿时变得鸦雀无声。
石娃的脑子很聪明,年年考第一,在化学课上老师抓了点东西放进烧杯里,让三位同学上来尝尝。石娃第一次尝没味道,老师又让石娃尝了一下,还是没有味道,老师见他们疑惑不解就公布答案说:"其实里面什么都没有放”,同学们都笑了!
石娃的.爸爸不幸病倒了,石娃放弃学业,去照顾生病的爸爸,一直到背起爸爸上学。
这个电影告诉我们在生活中,我们要坚持不懈、不惧困难、勇往直前。
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