今天,学校里开展了纸飞机比赛。
比赛马上就要开始了,我们怀着紧张的心情来到了操场。我们一来到操场,就迫不及待的叫着:"四(3)加油四(3)加油......"
开始了,选手们开始折飞机,他们左折一下,右折一下,不一会儿,就把飞机折完了,老师说:"预备......,开始"同学们抬起手臂,举起飞机,一架架小飞机争先恐后飞了出去。
我的心里也非常的紧张,心里不住的喊:"加油,加油"还好,我长长的出了一口气,因为前三名都是我们班的\'同学。
一会就开始了第二场比赛,我的心情也随着更紧张起来。这一次没有上一次的好,因为这次郭星辉没有进入前三名。
不过我还是欢呼起来,为选手们高兴!比赛之后,我们一起去照相了,为这次胜利留个纪念。
今天的纸飞机比赛可真有趣啊。
今天阳光明媚,我们学校二年级举行纸飞机比赛,比得是飞机在空中停留时间的长短。老师带我们到操场上,把参加比赛的队员集中在一起,先发给他们一张a4纸,让他们折成一架纸飞机,再把它涂上美丽的花纹,一架架飞机整装待发,准备迎接激烈的比赛,而我站在一旁观看,许多飞机在天上飞来飞去,五颜六色漂亮极了,像一道彩虹挂在空中。
我在回家的路上想到:无论以后遇到各种比赛,我都要尽自己的努力为班级争光。
1。 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。
2。 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:
One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children。 They have not eaten for days。" I took some food with me and went。
When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger。 There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger。
I gave the rice to the mother。 She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice。 When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"
3。 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away。 He was soon lost among people and traffic。 He could not find the way back home and started crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying。 They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened。 Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived。 The two students decided to take him home。 Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound。 She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it。 She served them with tea but they left。
修改后:
The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street。 After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home。 But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic。 When he could not find the way home, he started and crying。 Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop。 They immediately went up to him。
"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked。
"I want Mom, I go home。" said the boy, still crying。
"Don't worry, we'll send you home。"
And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house。 With the help of a policeman, they finally found it。
When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house。 Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea。
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