雨停了,天空中好像出现了一道彩虹,真美。
空气格外的清新,妈妈提议带我去公园玩。走进公园,脚下泥泞的泥土,小河中跳跃的小鱼,一切都那么美,树上的小鸟正在擦拭它们美丽的羽毛,鸟巢中的鸟宝宝好像快要破壳而出的似的正在微微颤动,天上的彩虹被这番美景衬托的更加美丽。
走在这雨后的公园里,呼吸着清新的空气感觉所有的烦恼都被抛在树边的垃圾桶里。我乘坐在公园的小船上,欣赏着这美丽的风景,我躺在小船上,仰望着天空中的白云和彩虹,真舒服呀,“哗哗哗”完了,又下起小雨了,好小的雨,这使我想到一首唐诗,“西塞山前白鹭飞,桃花流水鳜鱼肥。青箬笠,绿蓑衣。斜风细雨不须归。”虽然下起了小雨,但我仍然继续漫游在这,雨中的公园。
上了岸,我走到了花园,这姹紫嫣红的花朵,配上这微微的小雨,显得格外的漂亮。花中的蜜蜂虽然下起了小雨,但他们跟我一样,还没有回家,他们日夜不停地采花酿造蜂蜜,究竟为谁辛苦为谁甜呢?
嫩嫩的小草,看着是那么的柔弱,但它们其实比世界上任何一样东西都坚强,就是熊熊的烈火也烧不尽它们,来年的春风吹过,它们还会再次生长。
雨中的公园真美,钟灵毓秀这个词好像刚刚好。
静静的站在雨中,享受雨的气息。有点冷了,天空中突然有出现了一轮太阳。这时,我看到你从太阳的金光下走出来……——题记
雨晴,从上小荷到现在,你一直一直是我最好的朋友,我哀伤的时候你安慰我,我快乐的时候你也跟着快乐,虽然我到小荷还不到一年,但是我们的友谊比天还高,比海还深。
记得刚上小荷的时候,我还以为你是个老师,你评论了我的一篇《灰鸟和翠竹》“丰富的想象力,联想,使文章生动有趣。这篇童话寓言趣味性强,很吸引读者,同时也讽刺了哪些骄傲自满的人!
祝你在作文方面取得好成绩”我很高兴,但到最后才知道你原来才十几岁,不是老师,是个学生。上小荷来第一个认识的人就是你,雨晴,记得我申请高级的时候,曾经问了你好几遍好几遍怎么申请,似乎你也有些不耐烦了,那时我的心就微微的流泪,觉得你不喜欢我,很讨厌我。但是看了你今天给我写的贺文,我才知道,你是我最好的朋友,最好的,你没有那样想,我很高兴。
雨晴,对于你迟来的祝福和道歉我很感动,雨晴,不要愧疚了,让我们重新从那个天真可爱的我们做起吧!雨晴,今天是你的生日,祝你生日快乐!
听,窗外的雨发出滴滴嗒嗒的声音,那么清脆,好像要把心中的烦恼全布带走一般,使人心里感到十分凉爽,清松,舒服。
不知怎么的,我从小就偏爱雨,喜欢听雨,淋雨。雨天,静静的,多好啊! 怀着对初一的眷恋,我们匆匆的走进了初二的殿堂。在这里,我又结识了许多新同学。虽然与他们相处的时间并不长,但他们的浓浓的热情却感染了我。他们率真,活泼,努力,上进,不管是在学校中,还是在生活里,我都收获了珍贵的友情。在失落的时候,有朋友那宽广的肩膀可以让我依靠;
在我骄傲的时候,有老师温馨的提示可以让我倾听。在这里,充满了太多的喜怒哀乐,只要我们仔细品味,将会成为一段美好的回忆。它就像一个大熔炉,虽然有时使我们痛苦难耐,但它却铸造了坚强,勇敢和积极进取的我们,使我们能够充分展现我们的风采。我忽然明白了,为自己的未来而努力该是多么幸福的一件事情!就算为此倾注了太多的泪水和汗水,我们也会心甘情愿。
虽然我并不优秀,但是我却很坚强。只有我努力了,我相信我的未来就不会是梦! 一堆沙子是松散的,可是它和水泥,石子混和之后,却比花岗岩还坚硬;一滴水只有放进大海里才不会干枯;
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
The other day, I was driving along the street。 Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard。 On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的',这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red, not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:
I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply。 After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It's you。" I said, quite released。
I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
一场大雨从天而降,洗清了城市里的肮脏。雨后,在公园散步是件十分惬意的事情。
大雨过后的公园,仿佛是另一派天地。天虽不是很蓝,草也不是很绿,但给人种清新的感觉。雨珠顺着树叶划落下去,原来沉寂的树枝也颤动了两下。仿佛串起一条珍珠项链,连着其它树陆陆续续晃动!滴在我身上、脸上,弄得我打了个哆嗦。
我顺着人迹罕至的小路,在林间徘徊。雨后的树林,昆虫从草丛中爬出,湿漉漉的背脊衬着它热乎乎的心。行人不免想俯下身捕捉。突然,一声尖利的鸟叫,让人心慌慌。可一会儿又发现四周静悄悄的,除了风吹过树林“沙沙”声。
水里也是一个新天地。鱼儿不时探出脑袋,呼吸新鲜的空气。有时,还有几只小鱼跃出水面,在空中打个转,吸引了我的视线。平静的湖面上荡起一圈圈涟漪,这边刚刚消散,那边又显现,十分的诗意。不知名的鸟儿从水面上掠过,白色的翅羽划过清澈的水面,留下一道道优美的线条。
天空更加神奇。刚下过雨的天空渐渐沉寂。乌云向西边飘去,留下纯净的心灵。鸟儿在空中划过一道道优美的弧线,几声清脆的鸣叫也被这祥和的景色包围。我置身于这安静之地,心旷神怡。
雨后的公园真是风景如画,令人心驰神往。
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