英语中考作文分值安顺【一】
Last Sunday, Jim went out to fly a kite. The kite flew highly in the sky. Jim ran with it happily.
Suddenly the line was broken and the kite flew away. Soon it disappeared. Where was it?
Jim had no idea. So he had to run here and there to look for the kite. At last he saw it on the top of the tree. He tried to get it down. But he couldn’t. He felt sad.
英语中考作文分值安顺【二】
常听爸爸一妈一一妈一说起，以前的安顺城脏乱不堪，街道两旁的住房低矮破旧，市内几条街拥挤、狭窄，垃圾遍地。热天尘土飞扬，雨天到处泥泞，城市发展非常缓慢，自从改革开放的春风吹到了黔中大地，安顺像一颗璀璨的明珠发光了，变美了，变得那样靓丽。
昔日的老城区矗一立起了一幢幢造型各异，错落有致的高楼群，看看若飞大道吧：从前哪里是一间间低矮破旧的瓦房，道路既狭窄而又凹凸不平。如今阔平坦的若飞大道上，人们来来往往，车辆川流不息。大道两旁是一幢连一幢的商住楼，底层是商铺，二楼以上是居住楼。楼群装饰得色彩艳丽，五彩缤纷。超市里，各类食品琳琅满目……每幢楼的前面是一颗颗新种上的梧桐、玉兰、香樟树，还有不同形状的绿化带。每当夜幕降临，大道两旁的华灯发出明亮而柔和的光，映照着绿色的行道树和人行道，这时贯穿南北的若飞大道像一条巨大的光带，点缀着山城美丽的夜晚。
今日的安顺市有了现代化的气息，而经过整洁修建的古老的贯城河也已成为一道亮丽的风景线。贯城河两岸都是汉白玉护栏，一排排绿绿的垂柳的枝条倒垂在河沿两旁，好像一个个含羞的少女低垂着头。太一陽一落山了，沿河两岸的`立柱灯也亮了，每根灯柱都发出黄色的光，与柱顶的反射灯光辉映着绿色的柳条，让人觉得温馨舒适。
漫步贯城河两岸，可以看到工匠们建造的横跨在两岸的造型美观的石拱桥，有的桥身高大，有的桥身平缓。汉白玉护栏上雕刻着一精一美的花纹和各式各样的图案，让人目不暇接，具有很高的观赏价值。贯城河如同一条条镶嵌在城中的彩色丝带，我想，贯城河是因此来得名吧！
每当朝一陽一升起，夕一陽一西下之时，老人们在贯城河的两岸锻炼、散步、乘凉、下棋；孩子们则在河岸两旁嬉戏玩耍。
短短几年，家乡发生了巨大变化，她已是黔中大地上一颗璀璨的明珠，勤劳智慧的安顺人要在不断提高公民素质，提高文明素养的同时，随着第二轮西部大开发的进程，把安顺的明天建设得更美好！
安顺，我的家乡，我一爱一您，我在您饱经沧桑而又快速发展的怀抱中一天天长大。
英语中考作文分值安顺【三】
1。 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day， I was driving along the street。 Suddenly， a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast。 I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side。 But it was too late。 The car hit my bike and I fell off it。
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella， for it was raining hard。 On the way， he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover。 Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her， but he was too short。 What could he do? Then he had a good idea。
2。 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的\'，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3。 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙，读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4。 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays， I did a lot of things。 Apart form doing my homework， reading an English novel， watching TV and doing some housework， I went on a trip to Qingdao。 It is really a beautiful city。 There are many places of interest to see。 But what impressed me most was the sunrise。
The next morning I got up early。 I was very happy because it was a fine day。 By the time I got to the beach， the clouds on the horizon were turning red。 In a little while， a small part of the sun was gradually appearing。 The sun was very red， not shining。 It rose slowly。 At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea， just like a deep-red ball。 At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright。
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5。 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
I was in the kitchen， and I was cooking something。 Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front。 I thought maybe someone was knocking the door。 I asked who it was but I heard no reply。 After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor。 I realized it was the cat。 I felt released。
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：
I was in the kitchen cooking something。 "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front。 Thinking someone was knocking at the door， I asked， "Who?" No reply。 After a while， I saw my cat running across the parlor。 "It＇s you。" I said， quite released。
英语中考作文分值安顺【四】
导入：
第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧
正文：
第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由
第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由
结论：
第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点 オ
英语中考作文分值安顺【五】
导入：
第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文：
第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法
结论：
第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法
