Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
一走进风采馆,就看到了一根巍然屹立着的柱子,讲解员在一旁有声有色的做介绍:“现在大家看到的是武魂柱。”接着把我们引到武魂柱的后面,只听到前面的同学到了转角处都哗然一片,我惊奇地想是什么让他们那样惊讶,当我也来到了武魂柱的后面,只见一个全是兵器的展厅出现在大家的眼前:三节棍、大刀、复合剑……“好漂亮!”我不由发自内心的赞叹起来。展厅的`后面是一个立体影院,通过3D短片让我们知道了武术源远流长的历史,对武术有了更深一层的了解。
我们又来到了博物馆的地下一层——数字化多媒体互动区域。瞧!那里有几个人在一个神秘的红棕色屋子里嬉笑着,走过去一打听才知道原来他们在玩“听声辨位”的游戏。
突然,从不远处又传来一阵阵笑声,闻声而去,只见几个人在一个个木桩上走路,红灯亮到哪里就要走哪里,看谁能坚持到最后不从木桩上摔下来,原来这是“梅花桩”。我也马上向那些一个个红灯“宣战”。游戏开始了,前面的木桩的红灯亮了,我迅速往前方走去,可是忽然红灯又出现在了我的右后方,这下我可着急了,赶快转个身,可是已经来不及了,我只能试着伸出左脚,想去碰后面的那个木桩,但一个没踩稳,就败下阵来。还有“神拳无敌”、“眼疾手快”……有趣的体验活动让我大开眼界。
这次中国武术博物馆之行,让我明白了武术不仅能锻炼人们强壮的体魄还能锻炼人们坚强的意志!
好长一段时间没有看部电影了,听别人说《武术之少年行》这部电影拍的很好。这不,抽中午时间在网上将这部影片看完,整体感觉真的不错!
故事:十年前,李魁老师带着儿子李一、李二回到自己小时候的永华武术院,开始他们的武者之路。由于武校不让养狗,两个孩子在和同学解救“小狗”的事件中,认识了杨耀武、方芳、张德明三个同学。他们在湖泊边的一个废旧砖房前,给“小狗”安好家,结盟宣誓“行侠仗义,***富济贫,苦学武术,勇拿金牌”,并成立了金武门。五个孩子为争取荣誉和勇夺金牌而努力。在学校习武的成长过程中,他们互帮互助、共同进步。为争取省武术代表的资格参加武术比赛,为实现目标而奋斗。生活当中,武校上届毕业的两位学长由于选择道路的不同,郭楠成为拍摄电影的武术指导,何乐则贩卖人口,做违法勾当。其后者并以欺诈的手段,骗取武校的两个孩子进行拐卖。解救人质的过程中,进行激烈的搏斗与厮***,演绎了一场正义与邪恶的较量…
情节:李魁老师教导学生。“武术是一门艺术,不是用来攻击对方,伤害对方。武术的意思,就是武学中的艺术,武中有艺,艺中有术。表现在它的动作风格和感情中。在武术中,谁胜谁负是没有意思的,武术的四个基本是速度、弹跳力、平衡和柔韧性。这四个之外就是要创造出新的难度。在台上虽然没有对手,但是选择了武术的人也就选择了一生的对手--就是自己。每次比赛,你就要比上次的你做的更好!”李魁老师教导自己孩子时,巧用划火柴和生火来比喻散打和武术。“散打,就像划火柴,要有摩擦,很快就会看到火花。武术,就像生火一样,不能急,要有耐性,要有很大的空间。”
有感:习武重在武德,做人重在品质。习武,不可以自己的武学去违心、违法做事,要做真正武者;做人,从小树立正确方向,努力成就,不断进取,自强不息,勇于战胜自己,做真正强人!
漫步书的世界,为自己的心灵完成一次全新的阅读旅程!阅读《影响中国孩子成长的99位名人》,我知道了名人乔治·史密斯·巴顿。
巴顿有一句名言:"有一种东西,比才能更罕见,更优美,更珍奇,那就是自知之明。"
做人要有自知之明。骄傲自大,弄虚作假,到头来只能空虚一生,丢了真情,丢了良心!
在这里,我想起了一个故事:
战国时,齐国大夫邹忌,长得比较帅气。一天早晨,他穿戴完毕,照着镜子,问妻子:"我和城北的徐公相比,谁漂亮?"妻子回答:"您漂亮,徐公怎能比得上您呢。"
徐公是齐国的美男子,邹忌对妻子的回答不大相信,于是他又问了他的妾:"我和徐公相比,谁漂亮?"妾也说:"徐公怎能比得上您呢!"
第二天,有一位客人来做客,邹忌和他聊天,就问客人:"我和徐公谁漂亮?"客人说:"徐公不如您漂亮!"
又隔了一天,正好徐公来访。相比之下,邹忌感到自己确实不如徐公美。事后,邹忌细想:本来我不如徐公漂亮,可是妻子、妾、客人都说我漂亮,原来是因为妻子偏爱我,妾惧怕我,客人有求于我!看,邹忌就是一个有自知自明的人。
自知之明,就是自己要了解自己,对自己有正确的看法,不要过高估计自己。
一个人若没有自知之明,总以为自己是无与伦比的天才,对别人正确的意见也听不进,那就不会进步,影响自己事业的进展,甚至失败。再说,若自己没有自知自明,总是自以为是,也会使身边的朋友不满,最后会一个个地离开……
让我们都来做一个有自知之明的人!
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