五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【二】
很多人一听到夏天，就不由自主地联想到炎热的太阳，但其实夏天，它拥有着自己独特的味道。有冰激凌香甜的味道，有麻辣小龙虾辛香的味道，还有那冰镇汽水的气泡味……
夏天的味道是香甜可口的。因为天气炎热，每家每户都会必备冰激凌。冰与火撞击的冰爽感觉常常使我们流连忘返，回味无穷。有时候来不及吃就已经开始融化，急的我马上舔一圈，那清凉的香气蔓延开来，瞬间消除了夏天的烦躁和不安。
夏天的味道是辛香麻辣的。天气闷热，那混浊的湖水下一只只鲜红的小龙虾蠢蠢欲动，时不时地冒出一些小气泡，它们也想上岸脱掉厚实的外套凉爽一下呢！每年夏天都有很多人去钓龙虾，即使被风吹日晒，但大家依然乐此不疲。目的就是为了享受钓龙虾的乐趣，也是为了吃一顿美味的麻辣小龙虾。
夏天的味道也是清新宜人的。在夏天，暴雨总是不期而至，在连续几天的闷热过后，便会下一场酣畅淋漓的大雨。天空黑压压的一片，阴沉沉的，不时还会电闪雷鸣，让人恐惧。但随着大雨过后，空气会变得清新起来，空气中的尘埃被冲刷得一干二净，泥土的味道掺合着新鲜的空气，仿佛灵魂也被洗涤过一样，让人觉得焕然一新。
这些熟悉而美好的味道散落在每一个夏日的角落，构成了一个丰富多彩的夏天。
五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【三】
My father is a handsome man . He is tall and medium build. He has short black hair and big eyes.
My father works in a hospital. He is a doctor. He wears a uniform in the hospital. He drives his car go to work. He is a good doctor. He loves his job.He works hard.
My father likes sports. He gets up at 6:00 clock every morning.
Then he runs go out. In the afternoon, he plays basketball.Sometimes
he plays chess with my brother.
My father also likes listening to music and watching TV. He likes
listening to the popular music. He likes action movies best. His favorite movie star is Li Xiaolong.
My father thinks healthy food is good for our health. So we eat apples every day. We don't eat French fries. We often eat vegetables,fruits and fish.
My father is also a humored man. I love my father very much.
五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【四】
早上，太阳公公刚刚升起，伴着微微的凉风，美丽的公园里的花草树木随风轻轻摇摆。美丽的公园里很凉快，到处散发着花草的清香。美丽的公园里的年轻人非常少，大部分都是老爷爷和老奶奶，他们都是来锻炼身体的，有的在舞剑，有的在做健身操，还有的在拉杠子。美丽的公园里一片繁华热闹的景象。
中午，火辣辣的太阳高高挂在天上，像一个大火球，散发着刺眼的光芒，烘烤着整个大地。美丽的公园里没有一丝凉风，只有阵阵热浪。小花低下了头，桃树的叶子打了卷儿，长长的柳枝垂到湖面一丝不动，只有那朵朵出淤泥而不染的荷花张开了笑脸。美丽的公园里的小路上很难见到人，偶尔会在树荫下见到两三个人。美丽的公园里显得格外安静。
傍晚，太阳收起刺眼的光芒，变成一个金色的光盘。美丽的公园里变得热闹起来。人们吃过晚饭，都出来散步、乘凉。美丽的公园里的老人有的在跳舞，有的在散步，还有的坐在一起聊家常。年轻人带着小孩子在美丽的公园里嬉戏、玩耍。美丽的公园里充满欢声笑语，显得格外悠闲。
五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【五】
今天，我们坐车去天香公园玩。到了天香公园，还没进去，一阵芳香扑鼻的气味飘了出来。游人们不禁赞叹道:“多香啊，多么邻人陶醉啊!”于是大家在花香中进去了。
刚进去，我就听见孩子的笑声、鸟儿的歌声、大人们的谈话声……最美妙的要数溪水声了，那那声音时而响、时而轻、时而快、时而慢，真是变化多端，还有许多小孩在玩耍。
再往里走。荷花池出现了，池里的荷花那么显眼，远远就能望见。小金鱼在水中自由自在地游着，一会跑到荷叶下面乘凉，一会又跑出去，真调皮!蜻蜓也在水面上照镜子，累了就停在荷花上休息。一阵微风吹过，荷花们就跳起舞来，连小鸟都唱歌为它们伴奏!
看!大树撑起绿色的大伞为我遮挡阳光，我躺在草地上，轻轻的抚摸着小草，小草也为我挠痒痒。我感觉好久没有这么近距离的接触草地，所以现在我闻到了大自然的味道……
香山公园，一个有山、有水、有树、有花草的美丽公园!!!
五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【六】
My father is of middle height.His eyes are sharp and full of expression.He always appears serious and looks like a judge.At first sight you may think he is hard to come near.In fact he is very kind and thoughtful① of others and their feelings.Appearance often makes people think wrongly; therefore we cannot give an opinion about a person by appearance.
My father is a man of success.By his own talents and efforts,he has achieved great achievements in what he does.He has not only created wealth for society but also provided our family with a rich life.Now he is well-known to people all over the city.People of all walks of life②come to my house and,as a result,I gain lots of hard-earned social experiences③and see more joys and sorrows of the world.
At home my father is a severe parent.He is very strict with my mother and me.He does not allow my mother to accept anything from others.He requires that my mother should go to office in time and leave it last.He has high expectations of me.④ When I am lazy and idling away my time⑤,I can see that it hurts him deeply.When I am doing something great,such as carrying out an experiment,he is more than excited.With such a father I am always reminded of going on and on,never giving up.
五年级写我最爱夏天英语作文【七】
夏姑娘的脾气非常暴躁，时而烈日当空，时而狂风暴雨。但是它拿着调色板吧夏天描绘的绚丽多彩，它把夏天的公园描绘的五彩缤纷。
在五黄六月的季节，我们顶着骄阳似火的太阳来到了公园。公园里的大树高高的像一把把大绿伞，我在树下吃了又甜又凉的小布丁，听着树上传来的阵阵蝉声，如同给我奏上优美的音乐，真是舒服极了。树下郁郁青青的草坪像家里铺的毛毯，我躺在草坪上又柔软又舒服，真想躺下打个滚，睡上一觉呀！不但这里的草坪舒服而且花儿也芬芳扑鼻，夏季花儿争奇斗艳竞相开放，我在花儿旁享受着花儿的芬芳，真是让我陶醉。这里的小河清澈见底，旁边的假山倒影在水中，看到这样的景色让我想起了一句诗就是：“遥望洞庭山水色，白银盘里一青螺。”
公园里的鸽子全身雪白雪白的，别人买的一袋鸽食，他们先把鸽食倒出一点，然后等鸽子飞过来叼，人与动物和谐相处，真是有趣极了。
夏天的公园如此美丽，我十分喜欢，我又想起一句诗是：“人皆苦炎热，我爱夏日长。”
