五年级六篇英语作文短的【一】
??短的科幻小说（续写）地球上最后一个人独自在房间里，这时，忽然想起了敲门声。他大吃一惊，一头雾水，心想：怎么可能?地球上不是只有我一个人了吗?哪来的敲门声呢?不可能呀!难道……难道……是外星人?他悄悄地走到门旁，蹲下身子，躲在那里静静地观察。
敲门声继续传来，“咚咚咚”，响亮而沉重，带着一丝诡异。地球上最后一个人联想起他曾经读过的一本书——《八十天环游地球》，主人公菲利亚·福格那无所畏惧，勇敢加强，不惧怕任务艰难险阻……于是心中顿时充满了坚强的信念，刚才的那些畏惧和害怕消失了很多。
他继续蹲守在门边，外面的敲门声还在继续。没有丝毫停歇的.意思。地球上最后一个人这是恍然回悟起自己就是一个科学家，可以研究一切来历不明的事物，那么还有什么可怕的呢!于是他大胆的推开大门，看见了门外站着一个外星人：四只小腿又细又短，眼睛长大额头上，而且只有一只，全身长满体毛……咦!怎么突然之间消失了?还不待他看清楚，外星人眨眼间就消失得无影无踪。
地球上最后一个人没有多想，立刻返回实验室，小心地放入一种实验药水。天空霎时变得乌云大作、闪电雷鸣交加，天就像要塌下来似的，大雨却始终没有下来。一个小时过去了，两个小时过去了……将近五个小时的时候，突然一声轰炸，一团绿色的烟雾腾空而起，紧接着大门就被这团烟雾砰地一声撞开，随之升上天空消失不见了。
他走出大门，门口站着一只短耳、小鼻，吐着长长舌头的，有着四条又细又长小腿的狗。这只小狗正是在这个地球上唯一留下与他作伴的动物。科学家牵起小狗的前脚，他们一起开始了重建地球的伟大计划。
五年级六篇英语作文短的【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级六篇英语作文短的【三】
在后半期的语文学习开始之前，我觉得有必要和大家谈谈心。谈心，不是一个矫情的词，至少在我这里不是。就像我开头称呼你们为“亲爱的”，既是惯用语，又确是有心而发——无论你们怎样让我恼火，我从来没有真正地漠视、讨厌和放弃过你们当中的任何一个。不过，要说我有多喜爱你们，多愿意无条件为你们呕心沥血死而后已，那就过了，已经进入矫情的地界，鸣警！我们尽量只谈事实、只讲心声。我们的相处，我们在人生路上这段短暂的交集，从时间上说，已过一半，正在进入倒计时。时间很快，你们懂的。
五班的李海燕同学曾在练笔里问我，是有多走投无路才选择当老师。六班的吴守正同学也在初中伊始时表示不理解：大好青春为什么要浪费在不成器的我们身上，更有率真的某某，当面以老老师的衰老想要“威慑”我，呀，原来不只那岁月，你们更是那***猪刀。不管怎样，好心的你们，潜台词里似乎觉得：老师，多细枝末节的职业；不管别人，至少不适合胡老师你。
呵呵。是么？我已不知老师的地位至此，我已然不知，课堂上除了教学，还真的需要管纪律。只是，本科读师范，硕士读语文课程与教学论的我，当老师早就成为理想化的目标，教育成了事业的代名词。
某种程度上，我很能理解你们。我知道你们都是渴望被尊重、被肯定，喜欢自由和快乐的孩子。谁不曾是呢？我时时翻看我初中时的，看看当时我当学生的心态，跟你们何其相似。所以我愿意去尊重你们，尽可能地给你们自由。这不是新的教育理念所提倡的吗？然而，结果不很好。应试教育的余威不灭，我的理想、你们的心愿，常常一头撞在现实的南墙上。而六班的孟刘颖同学说得好，过分的宽容便成纵容。纪律问题就成星星之火，课堂逐渐涣散，到了令人非常不愉快的地步。
某种程度上，我又不太能理解你们。时代在你们身上打下了鲜明的烙印，信息的爆炸、财富的积累、人际的龃龉，学习氛围已然不同往日，尊师重道开始悄然褪色。亦师亦友，看似简单，似乎总是单边实现，是老师的难成朋友，是朋友的难当老师。不知道胡老师在你们眼里更偏向哪种？而我，正为这个问题而长时间困惑和苦恼。我不能理解的是，尊敬且不谈，起码的尊重和礼节都不懂——发言不举手，举手发扁言，点名直发懵，站直需三秒，一笑闹哄哄，一静懒沓沓——呜呼，怎一个乱字了得！什么时候，你们在课堂上才能做到有礼有节、收放自如？
这，便是我写这封信的`初衷，想提高课堂效率，改变这令人不愉快的课堂，不要让我走出教室就不想回头，宁愿在办公室一直改作业也不想上课——而语文课堂本应是一个愉快的交流过程。我认识你们所有人的字，但我管不住你们在课堂上的嘴和心。当然，我知道大家心里早就开始嘀咕了：谁叫你上课那么没意思？语文课上教的又不考~哈，平心而论，“闲静少言，不慕荣利”真是我的标尺，“谈定”、“平淡”从我上大学时就几乎成了我的标签，更有友人大呼：你太淡了，像水一样淡！兼学生直言：胡老师是一个“很正经”的人……所以其实不善言辞的我，选择当老师，不会瞎白话真是一不妥，所以我很少开玩笑、讲故事、做游戏。我偏爱哲学思维，又向往诗意地娓娓道来，置你们的认知范围不顾，当然不受欢迎。如果你们要我成为鞠萍姐姐或易中天，我只能尽力为之。而课堂的基本要求，也望孩儿们尽力为之。语文功夫的确在课外，课堂上是助推力，限时的思维和语言训练，也不可轻视。
改变需要我们共同努力。你改、我改，大家改，才是真的改。
当然，我不会天真到相信说这几句你们就会照办，我倒希望能成君子协定，恐怕君子不多。不依规矩不能成方圆。科代表兼任课堂纪律记录员，事件、原话、课堂影响，一一记录。一周之内可消号，一周总结一次，上交班主任、通知家长。狠下心对你们，是自私的；狠不下心来，是自虐的。再有三番两次不尊重老师挑战我忍耐极限的人，我自然谨记“过分宽容是纵容”，报之以更简单粗暴的处理方式。
愿我们的短暂相处成为人生中更愉快的记忆。
五年级六篇英语作文短的【四】
叮铃铃……上晚自习的钟声响后，走廊上传来了一串有节奏的脚步声“嗒嗒、嗒嗒……”咳咳！告诉你吧，那是我们的语文老师张老师正在向教室进军。
只见张老师在全班同学的静候中闪亮登场，他颇有风度的说：“此时此刻，手里有课外书的同学请举手。”“刷” “刷” “刷”全班立即变成了手的林子。我知道，擅长变花样的张老师今晚上又有新花样了。老师啊，快别吊胃口了，快把你的新花样广而告之吧。“统帅”终于下令：“阅读5分钟，预备，开始名训练有素的士兵一声“得令”，便是老鼠钻进书堆里——咬文嚼字。
今天这气氛，我实在是十分兴奋，我选好角度，边做好看书的架势边“偷拍”。哇噻！同志们一个个全神贯注，与那蚂蚁似的文字作紧张战斗呢。你看，“夫子”李坤边看边轻摇其头，一副十分陶醉的神情。咦！“话匣子”黄盼已经被张元帅列入黑名单了，原因是不小心打开了话匣子，违反了张元帅的在阅读是保持安静的“大律”。说着，战斗时间五分钟已到。瞧，张元帅又在发布今晚第二号命令了：“请大家迅速脱离书海，整理思路，将你这五分钟的真实见闻与感受以文字的方式记录下来。”“噢……哼……哈哈……”此时教室里的情况恰好是对拟声词作了生动形象的应用。
军令如山，心不愿动，手却必动。片刻过后，亲爱的战友们战绩非凡：《紧张五分钟》写出了紧张的气氛；《感悟五分钟》写了时间的珍贵；《遗憾五分钟》写出了时间太紧，美文未尽的`无奈；《黑色五分钟》不用说就是黄盼受训后的抠心力作；《无聊五分钟》是“杭漂”（杭州漂流）人员何中玲的真情告白……
哎呀，不好，镜头里出现了一张夸张的脸，那是张因生气而情绪激动的脸。扯呼！我赶紧埋头用笔诉说我的心里话，第七只眼告诉我张元帅已走近我，我佯装镇定。从隐蔽的摄像头里看到张元帅正注视着我作文本上的《偷拍五分钟》，那张脸竟然变得十分生动起来，那是张因兴奋而盛开的脸。我赶紧收回视线，在作文的结尾写上“这是我最刺激也是最成功的一次偷拍，噢耶！”
五年级六篇英语作文短的【五】
刚巧，当时正有一个打柴的人担着柴禾从前边过来了。季礼心想，叫这人把钱捡去，他一定会十分感激，他挑的那两捆柴还未见得值得这么多钱哩。
等那打柴人走到跟前，季礼看清了他身上竟然还穿着冬天的皮袄，而眼下正是初夏5月，虽还不十分炎热，但穿着皮祆也是够呛的，季礼认为这人一定很贫穷，让他把钱捡去正好。
于是季礼大声朝打柴人喊道：“喂，你快来把地上的钱拾起来。”
打柴人一看季礼那个样子，感到很生气，他把镰刀往地上一扔，摆着手，朝季礼瞪大眼睛说：“你是谁?凭什么居高临下看不起人?我既然能在炎热的夏天穿着皮袄去打柴，难道我会是个贪图钱财的人吗?”
季礼一听打柴人的`话，心里不免有几分敬意，连忙向他道歉说：“实在对不起，是我错看了人，请不要见怪!请问先生高姓大名?”
打柴人鄙夷地朝季礼淡淡一笑道：“你这人见识短浅，只会从表面上看问题，还那么盛气凌人，我有什么必要对你说出我的姓名呢?”说着，打柴人头都没回，也不再理睬季礼，拿起镰刀，对地上的钱连看都没看一眼就走了。
季礼看着打柴人渐渐远去的背影，惭愧不已。
有些人常常凭自己的浅薄见识去衡量别人，实在未免有点“以小人之心度君子之腹”了。
