如果你这样想,那就太平庸了!美食只能暂时满足味觉;时髦的衣服只能满足一时的虚荣心;玩具汽车更不用说,快乐就像过眼云烟,瞬间即逝!
假如我是一个万能人,我会在病人因身患癌症,熬受各种痛苦的时候变成一位医术高超的医生,还病人一个健康的身体,我还要让癌症在世界上从此消失;假如我是一个万能人,我会在小悦悦被车碾压后第一时间打120,送她去医院,我还会给她爸妈打电话,让他们好好照顾小悦悦,从此健康快乐的成长;假如我是一个万能人,我会在汽车拥堵时立刻变成一位交警,疏散交通,让汽车在道路上有序进行。假如......
太多的假如,总之,假如我是一个万能人。我会在人们需要帮助时第一时间出现并给予帮助。让这个世界上没有疾病和痛苦,只有欢乐和幸福!
本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。
1 No one can deny the fact that ...
2 The idea is hardly supported by facts.
3 Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...
1:Peoples views onvary from person to person. Some hold thatHowever, others believe that
2:People may have different opinions on
3:Attitudes towards vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards
4:There are different opinions among people as to
(1可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;
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High school is regarded as the best time in a person's life. As a senior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.
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