五年级英语作文范文12行【一】
到湖北荆州的第二天。这天原定的就是中学的课，没我什么事。本来很高兴，随着领导和他们一起到了讲课的地方。帮他们试试课件，然后听听课。可是，随后的各个场合，我都感到非常不适应。比如，没有人知道我是做什么的，没有一个人理我，感觉我提个包的。平时走到哪里讲课，都是备受瞩目。灵宝就不用说了，比如去三门峡等附近的县市，总会在路上被人认出来：你不是某某老师么， 我听过你的课，或者听过您的讲座之类的，那个时候我总是头一低，谦虚的说，是我，谢谢。但是心里却比吃了蜜还甜。习惯了被人当星一样捧，一下子来个没人理，那滋味真的是不好受。我给同事发了个短信：痛苦！他急忙回应：是讲课不顺利？还是饭吃不惯？看到如此关切的短信，我眼泪不由自主地流了下来。回了句：没什么，就是没有在家好！
难熬的一天终于过去了，第二天是我讲课的日子，本来还准备听同事们劝要穿上正式的衣服，由于前一天没人理，很生气，我索性也不换了：谁让你们先不尊重我！我讲《凡卡》，也很自信。因为他们那个地方的教师普通话都不太标准，所以以我专业朗诵者的身份，会很快吸引孩子，所以没有什么压力。
临时接到通知，要我们先上预习课，然后再上正课，说是两节都有人听，因为想知道完整的课究竟是怎么上的。呵呵，正中下怀，表明了是多给了我一节展示的舞台。我平时上课就是喜欢真实，可是总是我课讲完了，有某些老师会质疑的前奏，这次赤裸裸的\'，应该感觉挺好。
一进课堂，我先要调动孩子的积极性，与孩子相互沟通了一下，让孩子小组合作，谈谈对我的看法，一个字行，一句话也中。孩子们商量了一下，每个小组找人汇报，汇报上来的词汇是：大方，热情，亲切等。我不否认孩子们的看法，但是他们没有敢说出最真的感受。突然我听见旁边有个孩子轻轻说了句：就是该减肥了！呵呵，这才是我要的答案。本人虽然在本地区有些小名气，但是肥胖也一直困扰着我，搅和着我的美丽。要不是这个致命的缺点，呵呵，说不定已经冲出河南走向全国了！我立即大声问了句：谁说我该减肥了？那孩子吓得头一缩，不吭气了，其他孩子也都装作不曾听到的样子。我轻轻拍了孩子，让他站起来，他满面通红。我满脸笑容：虽然我很不愿意听到你这样说，但是这是事实，你敢说出来，证明你很了不起，我要给你加5分，因为学习知识就是这样，要敢于表达自己的真是看法！这孩子一愣，不知所措，其他孩子由不解到羡慕，然后其他孩子的小手也一一举了起来。呵呵，我的课前调动空前成功，然后交给孩子预习的方法，以及小组合作的要领，孩子们全身心地投入到了预习中，听课的所有老师也都被孩子空前的热情打动了，一动不动的坐在自己的位置上，学生预习过程中，没有一个老师中途离去，更没有一个老师交头接耳。
有了扎实的预习，第二节课就轻松多了。孩子们在问题的引导下学的津津有味，而且展示时也特别放得开，听课的人越来越多，老师们赞赏的目光也相继照射过来，我一步步地完成了我的教学任务，又让孩子提除了他们不理解的不懂的地方，帮他们一一解决，因为我准备这课的外延大于内涵，所以没有我解决不了的问题，听课的老师和孩子们从赞赏，到佩服，我能从他们的表情上读懂。
下课了，孩子们围着我不让走，一个小孩说：老师， 您留下来教我们吧！我逗她：你们校长不要我啊！小女孩认真地说：没关系的，老师不怕，校长是我们的品德老师，我去给他说！旁边的老师们笑的弯了腰，我却有些想哭的冲动，我爱这纯真的孩子们！
下午，领导们对待我的态度转了180度的弯，关切地问我那个学校的，想吃些什么等等。有的还拿出我的课上的精彩之处给其他人宣传，呵呵，热情地我受不了。他们不停地评价我，由课及人，说我开朗，阳光，虽然胖些，但是很有气质等等。我又轻飘飘的。领导们夸张的将我喜欢的菜分别上了双份，引来其他人羡慕嫉妒恨。走的时候 又将我喜欢的菜和水果但是家乡没有的分别买了好多，让我背上，我不由地发微博：湖北人民好热情！
行程结束了，当地的领导表示：下次还要请我这个专家来！我有些害怕，害怕我们的学生不愿意，当然，我自己也不愿意，这么大老远的，讲了一节课花费了一星期的时间，没有再比这个更奢侈的了。但是我还是点点头，装作很高兴的样子与领导告别。这次行程我收获最大的是明白一句话，而且是切切实实明白了：有付出才能有收获！开始我也是专家团成员，但因为我没有上课，他们都不认可，劳动了，他们换种态度。
呵呵，这次工作行将是我在教育路上的一个逗号，我的这个逗号很圆润，有印迹！
五年级英语作文范文12行【二】
上午十点左右，我们就到了目的地一绍兴东湖。我们走进景区大门，惊讶得目瞪口呆，这人也太多了吧！不过呢，这进去的速度也挺快的，马上就轮到我们了。我们的第一个目标是：坐乌篷船！伴着凉风细雨，我们一家来到了三号码头。我已不是第一次坐乌篷船了，在五年前也坐过，现在想起来也还是回味无穷，当时由于年幼，最大的感觉是兴奋，更是一种乐趣。
我们刚坐上小小的乌篷船，看着广阔的湖面，我难免有一丝紧张。不过，坐在稳稳的乌篷船上，又有爸爸妈妈的陪伴，心一下子就放松了起来。我望向湖中，清澈的湖水，水里的大金鱼在深水游来游去，真快活。虽然没有太阳，但湖面还依旧是波光粼粼的。湖中不时冒出一座小桥，小桥上有许多游客。湖中还有几座小山，有的山上还长着松树和紫色的小花，有的光禿秃的，什么也没长，就像一个还没觉醒的老人。湖边悬崖上好多处奇石，有的像动物，有的像一个个的神仙伫立在那里。一条狭长的湖中纤道贯通整个东湖，躺在山崖的一侧，纤道上游人如蚂，似乎只能容一人通过。纤道上有树有花，一路上奇石假山罗列，时有一二座休息亭，此风景倒真是别具一格，另有一番意味。
小船行进在平静的湖面上，我忽然间想起了课外书给予我的知识：东湖是怎么来的？
“东湖原来是一座青石山，秦始皇东巡时曾在这里驻驾饮马，故被称为箬篑山。后来又成了绍兴的一处石料场，经过千百年的凿穿斧削，又采用特殊的采石法，搬走了半座青山，形成了50多米的悬崖峭壁。劳动者还普遍深入到地下20多米处，日子一久，就形成了一个清水塘。再后来，东湖经过百年的人工装扮，成为一处巧夺天工的山水盆景。”想着想着，我们就来到了著名的“仙桃洞”！虽然你站在岸上看仙桃洞，只是一座简单的石框门，而你在和仙桃洞零距离接触之时，就能在导游人员的`指引下，见到与倒影组合在一起的巨大的仙桃。原来这就是它著名的原因，好神奇啊！
离开了仙桃洞，我们的小船又来到了陶公洞。可以说没有进过二洞等于没到过东湖。陶公洞洞口处只能容下一艘小船通行，进入洞內之后却是另有洞天，在洞底仰望小片天空，坐井观天的意境悠然在目。
最后，我们上了岸，来到了陶社。这里是一处富有历史意义的胜迹。著名革命人士陶成章遇难后，绍兴人民为纪念英烈，就在东湖建立了陶社。因此，东湖就更加出名了。一九一六年八月，孙中山先生还亲临陶社致祭呢！
游看了一圈，我们就要告别这美丽的地方了。郭沫若曾说：“箬篑东湖，凿自人工。壁立千尺，路隘难通。大舟入洞，坐井观天。勿谓湖小，天在其中。”这话细细回味，果然说得有道理啊！虽然我人已在东湖外，可心还在东湖里头啊…，英烈陶成章也永远的留在了我小小的心中。
五年级英语作文范文12行【三】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：
互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文范文12行【四】
今年寒假，我去看望在尚湖景区工作的爸爸。汽车在高速上奔驰，而我的心早就飞到了爸爸身边。
到了车站，爸爸早已在等我了。放下行李后，我迫不及待地问：“你们这儿有什么好玩的？”爸爸说：“游尚湖、爬虞山”
第二天，我早早地爬了起来，缠着爸爸起床，爸爸没办法，只好乖乖投降。虽然还是冬天，可我们仍然兴致勃勃。到了尚湖，我们租了一条游船在湖面上荡漾，波光粼粼的湖面上时而有几只野鸭、白鹭掠过，湖水碧绿，远处的虞山倒映水中。我们的船缓缓的驶向湖中心两座小岛中央，渐渐的、渐渐的我看见在岛上的芦苇丛中，栖息着数不胜数的野鸭、灰鹭、白鹭，还有许许多多我不认识的鸟。当我们的船靠近时，忽的一声，成千上万的鸟儿一下子都飞了起来，密密麻麻的，鸟叫声此起彼伏，不绝于耳。
上岸后，我们去了牡丹园，可惜现在是冬季，牡丹还在沉睡之中，等待春天的到来。
下午，我们爬了虞山。沿着曲折蜿蜒的道路，我们一鼓作气爬到山顶，四周苍松翠柏，奇石耸立，俯瞰山下，山腰处有薄雾缠绕，真是山不在高，虞山不愧是吴文化第一山。
短短几天的行程结束了，我和爸爸一起回了上海，但虞山、尚湖给我留下了许多美好的回忆。
五年级英语作文范文12行【五】
傍晚，我们来到九江，姑姑对我说：“我们今天先休息吧，明天我们去庐山。”我怀着期待的心情进入了甜美的梦乡。
第二天，我们来到庐山脚下，坐着汽车一直到山顶，啊，优美逶迤的山岭，蜿蜒盘旋，犹如一条正在酣睡的巨龙。俯瞰足下，白云迷漫，云雾缭绕，一个个山顶探出云雾外，似朵朵芙蓉出水，美丽极了。正当我们想到对面山头去的时候，缆车过来了，我们坐在缆车上，看见这山真陡啊，好像被刀劈斧削一般！苍翠的山群重重叠叠，像波浪起伏的大海一样，雄伟壮观。
导游带着我们来到漂流的地方，我看见溪水顺着弯弯曲曲的\'山谷流下来，我们坐上一艘皮艇，皮艇先在一个在大池子中划来划去。忽然，一道闸门打开，一个长钩子把我的皮艇钩到闸门口，我吓得赶紧闭上眼睛，激流把我们冲了下去。“砰”的一声，我的心还悬在半空中，我们的皮艇却落在了一个大池子中，又一个长钩子把我们的皮艇钩到了闸门口，我吸取上次的经验，勇敢地把眼睛睁开，“哇，好惊险，好刺激呀！”我开心地跟姑姑说。
坐在回家的路上，看着远处重重叠叠，连绵不断的山峰，我和姑姑心情愉快地聊着。我边聊边想：要是爸爸妈妈也能来的话，他们就能看到这美丽的风景了。
