五年级英语作文描述自己的卧室【一】
大海一直就是我向往的地方，我很有幸在海边生活了一年。让我有充足的时间来观察海，感受海给我带来的平静与震撼。
早上的海好象还没睡醒，风儿轻轻地摇着，浪花静静地拍打着沙滩。沙滩上螃蟹pk比武，浪花里鱼虾云游嬉戏。看！人们来了！他们拾贝壳，挖螃蟹……。海笑咪咪的看着他们，过了一会，海。好象觉得无劲了，变退了回去，此时已经到了中午。
人们都回家了，只有几只鱼船在那里捕鱼。远远望去，海上就有了几个红的，白的，黑的小点点。仿佛给海穿上了一条花裙子。海十分高兴，拍着手让自己涌出微微海浪，等待着人们的到来。
下午海滩上人山人海。海与顽皮的孩子一起玩耍，它飞快的后退，小朋友则嬉笑的追着它。海看到孩子们追上来了，突然来个小浪，把他们都推倒在浪花里。冲浪的人也来了，海更高兴了，为了让他们玩的更尽兴，它加大了浪花，把他们抬的好高好高。
天渐渐的黑了，月亮来了，它把海照的雪亮，银白银白的。海好象还没有玩够，用力的让浪花拍打着海岸。雪白的浪花，像一个个浪花骑士，骑着马飞快的冲向海边的岩石，随着一次次的撞击，就像中了箭一样摔了下来，不甘心的用最后的力量拥抱着岩石。
五年级英语作文描述自己的卧室【二】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级英语作文描述自己的卧室【三】
去年从北戴河的海边回来，我就与妈妈相约，下一次再去海边，就去青岛。此时这天一大早，我就真的来到了青岛的第一海水浴场。
站在海边长长的木栈道上，凭海临风，我感受着大海熟悉而又陌生的气息。这天的海风平浪静，远处的海面上有轮船发生悠长的低鸣，她必须就是在宣告一段遥远而传奇的海之旅吧？金色的沙滩上，许多橙色的太阳伞整整齐齐地一字排开，一向排到海滩的尽头。大海和沙滩组合在一齐，显得和谐而温暖。虽然还早，海滩上已经四处布满了穿着五颜六色泳装的人，沙滩上留下许多深深的脚印。还有许多人已经迫不及待地下海游出了好远。我快速跑下木栈道，三下五除二就换好了衣服，我欢呼着，奔跑着，扑向大海的怀抱。海水就是温凉的，我感到神清气爽，感到无比舒畅，大海，用她博大的胸怀又一次接纳了我这个北方的小旱鸭子。那里的沙好细啊，坐上去软软的，我就套着泳圈，趴在近海的沙滩上，等着海浪的来临，浪花的轻拍，就像妈妈抚摸，那么温柔，那么细腻。
再往右前方走就就是鲁迅公园（在那里我说不清东南西北，哈哈）。那里的海边全就是赫红色的岩石。海浪击在岩石上，被摔成雪白的泡沫，站在高高的岩石上，妈妈说，有一种遗世独立的感觉。在那里，我遇到了一位正在做画的叔叔，在他的笔下，那海上的快艇，好像有了灵性，那海边的小凉亭，也显得很有诗意。我想，他肯定就是很懂大海的。而我，怎样转动小脑筋，也弄不明白大海的内涵。
栈桥的海水可真清啊！就连一向不下水的妈妈都禁不住光着脚丫，提着裙摆，在海边嬉戏起来。
坐上轮渡，近海的风景就一览无余，小青岛上洁白高耸的信号塔矗立在翠绿丛中，海面上那艘“巨无霸”军舰在稳健地向远方驶去，栈桥那个遥远的小凉亭也在眼前露出了庐山真面目……
海水该退潮了，浪花没有了先前的气势，海水一点点的退后，沙滩显得宽阔了许多，但这丝毫不影响我们的兴致，海水往后退人也跟着退，不知不觉，我就离妈妈越来越远了。
华灯初上，我才从海里把自我捞出来。
大海，明日再见。
