时态:描述自己过去的经历自然用一般过去时
谋篇布局:文章以时间为线索,描述自己在家的行为
主题:难忘的经历,所以中心应该突出如何难忘,如何有意义
My First Stay at Home
顺叙,倒叙,插叙,补叙,分叙。
1.memorable experience
2.on business
3.take care of oneself.
Every time when the New Year is coming, my mother will go to the flower market to buy some fresh and beautiful flower to decorate our house. I like to go there with her, because I can gain the knowledge about flowers, at the same time, I like the living atmosphere. It makes me feel the happiness.
每次新年即将到来的时候,我妈妈都会去花卉市场买一些新鲜、漂亮的花来装饰我们的房子。我喜欢和她一起去那儿,因为我可以学到一些关于花卉的知识,同时,我也喜欢那里热闹的氛围,这让我感觉快乐。
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