时态:描述自己过去的经历自然用一般过去时
谋篇布局:文章以时间为线索,描述自己在家的行为
主题:难忘的经历,所以中心应该突出如何难忘,如何有意义
My First Stay at Home
外貌,语言,神态,动作和心理描写。
开篇句:Aboutnine O'clock one evening inMay, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句:His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot.We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.(展开描述一下事件
例子1 题目:Honor for my teacher
Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it. To me, it happened , and I still remember the whole process vividly. At that time, I was
It was a sunny day and things were awfully before it happened. Then drew my attention. I saw , and to my was It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would .
Whenever I look back on what happened that day, I think it is right to . First for all, no one can deny her . Furthermore, it is important for us to
注意,这是一个写作模板,里面有12个空格,并不是说一定要填满12个空格。可以按照实际情况进行取舍。
今天上午,我们班上了一堂有趣的英语课。
人都到齐后,老师就开始上课了,她先教我们读单词,只见她吐词清晰,她读一句,我们就跟着读一句,然后再问我们问题,答对时老师就会面对笑容地说:“good或very good。”更有趣的是:她还用玩游戏的方式来教我们学习……
今天这一课道具要用蛋糕,老师先把题讲完,就利用剩下的一个半小时去订做蛋糕,还说:“买回来后就让大家一起分享。”听后,大家都兴奋不已,于是,我们就自觉地打扫卫生,有的扫地,有的洒水,还有的拖地……
大约一个小时以后,我们在二楼看见老师回来了,为了逗老师开心,那些顽皮的小家伙有的躲了起来,有的放起了音乐,还有的吹起泡泡来,老师一进门,呈现在她眼前的是一个“泡泡天地”,我们真的把老师逗笑了,老师把蛋糕放在了许多桌子的正中间,然后轻轻地把它打开了。我们欢呼着把蜡烛插在了蛋糕上并且点燃了,然后用英语唱起了生日快乐歌,当我们正准备吹蜡烛时,老师提醒我们要Make a wish!原来是许愿的意思啊!我在心底里许了个愿,希望以后能当上国家足球队队员。许愿后,我们就吹灭了蜡烛,开始吃蛋糕啦,我故意把奶油弄得额头上、鼻子上、脸上和下巴上到处都是,同班同学都用那流利的英语来描述着我的这张“小丑”的脸,然后,开心地笑了,我们完全变成了一群可爱的外国学生。
今天上午的这堂英语课我们既吃了蛋糕,又学到了英语,真是有趣极了!
顺叙,倒叙,插叙,补叙,分叙。
My first stay at home alone was memorable. When I was twelve, once both of my mother and father were away on business, and I had been all by myself for two days. My parents left early the first day, and I got up soon after they left. In the first evening I was a little scared, so I turned on all the lights. I actually kept the light on in my bedroom the whole night. For fear of getting up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near my bed and set the alarms respectively at 6:00, 6:10, and 6:15. In order to prove that I could take care of myself, I washed my own clothes the second afternoon, though I could wait for Mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big girl.
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