十月二日早晨,我,朱文碧,刘锦,刘无双和她妈妈都来到车站会合,可就是不见黄雯娇的人影。我们左等右等,等了半个小时也没见她来,于是我们只好五个人乘公共车走了。
来到常州,还不过八九点种。因为刘无双没吃早饭的缘故,她妈妈还请我们又吃了一顿早饭(我两个同学已经吃过了)。吃完早饭,我们还逛了会儿小商品市场,并且我和刘无双一起,朱文碧和刘锦一块儿,一起拍了大头贴,作为留念。然后我们又一起去吃了“肯德鸡”,还逛了一会儿书店,将近12点,我们才来到了“天语雅阁”。
我们来到“天语雅阁”的一楼,便有一位服务员姐姐向我们招手:“小妹妹,我带你们上楼去。”我们跟着服务员姐姐来到二楼。二楼不像一楼那样亮堂堂的,而是有霓虹灯照耀着,别有一番情趣。我们先每人叫了一杯饮料,并让服务员把没份小吃都来了一份。我们吃着吃着,朱文碧便说:“我们来“成语接龙”怎么样?”我们一致赞同,但接不上的人就必须少吃一盘零食。刘无双先说:“车水马龙。”朱文碧接着说:“龙飞凤舞。”我接着说:“舞姿优美。”接下来是刘锦:“美妙绝伦。”我们就这样,接着一个个说过去,最后朱文碧说了个:“学有成就”,这回可把我难住了,我便胡乱说了个:“就在这里。”刘无双她们听了,都哈哈大笑起来,都说:“哪有这个成语,赖皮,赖皮。”于是我心爱的薯条便“离我而去”。然后,我们又比赛唱歌,要求很低,每人唱一句就行,这次又是刘无双先,她先唱起来:“忘了有多久,再没听到你对我说你最爱的故事,我想了很久,我开始慌了,是不是我又做错了什么?”接着是朱文碧,轮到我时,我便说:“我先欠着。”我一连欠了六句,轮到我时我还想说“先欠着”,但她们这次不在让我,一起说:“快唱!”于是我只能唱起来:“你说你最爱丁香花,因为你的名字就是它。”最后,我们又比赛说明星的\'名字,这次不用想,也能一口气说个五六个:林心如,许邵洋,张邵含,庞龙,张娜拉,陈小春,陈浩民,蔡依林,陈坤,潘玮柏,香香,周杰伦,阿杜,黄征,林俊杰,周星驰。最后,我们的嘴也说累了,便开始放开肚子吃,我一连吃了十一个冰淇淋,四杯咖啡(还包括小吃)刚要离开“天语雅阁”时,刘无双风趣的说:“金银花,今天我终于体会到什么叫做“情有独钟”了。”
最后,我们玩到三点多才乘车回家,这天,我玩得真的十分开心,我会永远记得的。
要求:1、主题明确。语言流畅。思路清晰。2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
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