我的旅行英语作文五年级去三亚【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我的旅行英语作文五年级去三亚【二】
到了那里，我们把东西放在宾馆里，就一起去植物园参观。我们看见了铁瓜树，高高的，树皮厚厚的、硬硬的；还看见了鸡蛋花、莲雾树等等……
晚上吃完饭后，爸爸带我去海边玩，我卷起裤子，跑向大海，浪花也一起向前冲，好象要和我拥抱，直到我看见大海才知道，那飓风掀起大海惊涛骇浪，直到我看见大海才明白，那太阳搅乱海水染成蓝色的海洋，直到我看见大海才清楚，那海水来去拍打海岸呼吸的欢畅。我还捡了好多贝壳，其中有一种是最美的.叫彩扇贝，分布于热带太平洋，生息环境于深海底，种类稀少。
第二天，我们去了南山的大小洞天，大洞天是整个南山，小洞天是神仙住的地方。下午我们一起去游泳，我刚刚下水时特别害怕，一看见妹妹像一只鸭子一样快活的游着我一点也不害怕了。也赶紧跳下去，向海里游去，游着游着我游到了水位最深的地方，妹妹看见我游得那么快，她也想游过来。可惜的是妹妹一次游不到一米，才九十多厘米，一游到那儿她就会沉下去。六点整了，我累得气喘吁吁，都走不动了！
第三天是最开心的一天，也是最难忘的一天。我们去了南山的海边，零距离观看了一百零八米高的海上观音圣像、观海平台。 其中我最喜欢的是108米高的海上观音，她是正观音的一体化三尊，分别表示和平、智慧、慈悲。为华夏造像之最。有一句是：“祈福万事兴，南海拜观音”。然后就用我的名字写诗。那个叔叔给我写的诗是：林茂枝青花倍红，美姿娴淑玉玲珑，君秀端庄分外娇，学林植栋金榜名。看完后，我们准备回海口时，妹妹和我都累了，所以想要爸爸背我，爸爸不动声色，让我和妹妹比赛，看谁坐的“车”跑得快。过了五六分钟，我们到终点了，妹妹输了，因为我的动作比她快。下午，我们就回海口了。
我的旅行英语作文五年级去三亚【三】
Computer is a very useful machine. Some of them are big, but some of them are very small .Many people like playing computer. Computer has many functions, so that people can do a lot of things by computer, like watching movies, listening to the music or playing games. It can make our lives very colorful and convenient. Various people can make good use of computer. Children can use computer to learn and play games. Parents can use computers to work. I think computer is a kind of wonderful and interesting machine, so I like computer very much.
电脑是一种很有用的机器。有的电脑很大，但是有的'很小。很多人喜欢玩电脑。电脑有很多功能，人们可以i用电脑做很多事情，比如说看电影，听音乐或者玩游戏。它可以使我们的生活充满色彩和便利。各种各样的人都可以好好利用电脑。小孩子可以用电脑来学习和玩游戏。父母可以用电脑来工作。我认为电脑是一种神奇有趣的机器，所以我很喜欢电脑。
我的旅行英语作文五年级去三亚【四】
以前，爸爸经常对我说：“有一个游乐场很好玩，那里有一个巨大的过山车，等你长大了一些，我就会带你去玩。”哈哈……我终于盼到了这一天，这是在暑假中一个晴朗的'星期天下午，爸爸开着车，带着妈妈和我来到了锦江乐园。
一进游乐场，我就迫不及待地拉着爸爸妈妈冲到游乐场的位置地形图处，寻找出过山车的位置，直奔而去。终于我坐到了过山车上，系好安全杆，即期待又紧张地等待着车开动。过山车开始起动了，车子慢慢地沿着轨道向上爬，我的心一下子被拎了起来，下意识地紧紧抓住扶手。
然后车子很快地冲下来转了一圈又一圈，我闭着双眼，不断地尖叫起来，什么都顾不上了！听着耳边的风声与一起的玩伴们的尖叫声，我感觉到自已马上就要掉下去了……又过了一会儿，车子终于缓缓地停了下来，我抬起发软的腿，慢慢地走下了车子。这真是我长这么大以来最刺激的一次游玩。妈妈问我“怎么样，好玩吗，还敢再玩吗？”我兴奋地回答她，这真是太好玩了，下次我还要再来玩一次！“
我的旅行英语作文五年级去三亚【五】
星期六，我和妹妹在爸爸妈妈的带领下去儿童乐园游玩。
我们乘车来到儿童游乐场，儿童游乐场十分美丽，游戏的节目众多。有碰碰车、淘气宝，还有恐龙世界，真是举不胜举。
我们首先来到玩碰碰车的地方，只见小伙伴们开着五颜六色碰碰车，让我看得眼花缭乱。我和妹妹迫不及待地坐上一辆红色的碰碰车，由我来操控方向，妹妹控制前进和后退。忽然，有一辆绿色车夹住了黄色车，我也去凑凑热闹，快速上前夹住了绿色车。这时，还有一辆红色车趁机而入，把我的车夹住了。我们都使劲想把对方撞开，结果不成，结果都被撞了出，玩碰碰车真是带劲。
玩好了碰碰车，我们又来到淘气宝玩。这里面玩得东西真不少，有“马”、“房子”、“楼梯”和“障碍”等等。我玩起“打鬼子”的游戏，我成为中国的勇士，我奋勇战斗，总算把“鬼子”打败。我正玩得尽兴，妈妈催促我去别的地方玩，我只好恋恋不舍的告别了碰碰车。
接下来，我们来到了恐龙世界。我看到一只大恐龙，这只恐龙是给游人们玩的。我便不由自主地来到恐龙面前。只见恐龙的头不停地撞着铁，我忍不住大笑起来。其他游人听见笑声也纷纷跑过来看，涌上前去，争先恐后地玩了起来，场内不时传出欢声笑语。真是开心极了！
时间不早了，我们依依不舍地离开了儿童游乐场。
