初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(刘兴顺评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分:23
互评(战越评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评(李春霞评)
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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我终于又可以探索新的知识和游戏了,在路上我激动不己,虽然就20分钟的路程,但对我来说就像过了20年一样,每过一分钟就催一声,我恨不得一秒钟就到。
买完票后,我就像一个兴奋的小天使,领着爸爸妈妈上了楼,在二楼里我学到了不少知识,在三楼我也乐中求学,学中有乐。我们玩了宇宙馆,和谐花园馆,人类与脑馆等。
月球漫游这个游戏在宇宙馆中,我排着队伍,随着大家,坐上了“椅子”我脚一蹬“呼”立刻升上了“天”。在上面左右晃了几下后,弹簧椅便带着我慢悠悠地下降了,哇!太刺激了!等差不多到地面时,我又使劲一蹬!哇!我觉得自己又飞起来了,好像真的在月球上漫游一样,可惜时间太短了,我还没过瘾,工作人员就让我下来。
让我刺激的游戏不止这个,地震体验屋也让我玩了还想玩。我跟着前面的工作人员一起进了一间屋子。我们听着广播的指导,都躲进安全的地方并关掉了所有的电源。不管我们是坐着还是蹲着,都感受着地震的威力。不一会儿,服务员又让我们走进另外一个房间,在那里面,我们有的坐着,有的站着,但不管怎样都看着前面的视频(地震资料),之后感受3——9级的地震威力。
体验完了地震,我还开了模拟地铁,我走进模拟地铁,坐在驾驶员的位置上,推了一下按钮,地铁便开了。我又按了一下加速的按钮,我感觉我的椅子在晃动,不一会儿,前方显示到站了,我便用力拉下了暂停这个链。啊!我的.地铁安全地靠站了。这也意味着我成功了。我的心中比吃了蜜还甜!
在科技馆中我还玩了许多游戏。比如:有趣的电子游戏我是环保小人;奇异的魔法读心术;刺激的人体手术;台风体验馆等。
这次的科技馆一日游也告诉了我一个道理,边学边玩才是生活中的十全十美。
首先,我们走进了科技馆内宽敞的大厅。伴随着一声声音乐的跌宕起伏,泌人心脾,在我们头顶上方的小铁球也欢快的舞动起来了。瞧:那些靠边的小铁球听话的一点一点地滚动下来,再滚动上去,仿佛在向我们点头问好呢!那些中间的'小铁球也忽上忽下,一会儿摆出了一座宏伟壮观金字塔,一会儿又摆出了一条飞流直下的瀑布,真让人眼花缭乱,目不暇接啊!
然后,我们穿过“月球地面“——之所以叫它月球地面,是因为地板上画的都是月球上的图案,我们走在上面仿佛就置身在了月球之中,体验了一把当宇航员的感觉。
最后,我们径直向前走去,便看到了“地板上的钢琴“。这些钢琴都装在了地板上,而且特别大,琴键表面与地面平行,整个钢琴好像嵌入地板之中。我心想:钢琴在地板上,该怎么弹奏呢?如果是用脚踩得话,会不会被踩坏啊,正当我苦苦思索。“DO、RE、MI、FA、SOL、LA、SI”我的右边传来了一阵音乐声,原来是张芊,罗梦玲正欢快地踩在钢琴上弹奏着美妙动听的乐曲呢!看到她们玩的这么欢快,我也不由自主地加入到她们的行列,把脚往钢琴上伸了伸,啊!还真有钢琴声出来呢!真是太不可思议了,科学可真神奇啊!
这次参观科技馆活动,使我受益匪浅,增长了见识,开阔了眼界,也让我明白了许多科学神奇奥秘的道理,更让我励志好好学习,天天向上,长大后也可以为科学做出一份贡献。
然后我们乘电梯上了楼,先进了蜘蛛洞,看到了各种大小不同的蜘蛛,又去了机器人馆,这时我看到有一个小女孩站在魔方机器人面前,把魔方弄乱给机器人恢复,只见魔方机器人没弄几下就把魔方恢复了,太厉害了。还有人在跟机器人下棋,比射箭,画画。甚至还有机器人在跳舞、弹钢琴。机器人还会表演节目,看得我目瞪口呆,实在是太厉害了。
科技馆一共有三层楼,我还玩了好多馆,有一些地质环境变化,有计算机馆,还有一些知识我也不是很懂,妈妈告诉我到初中我学了物理就会知道的。
最后我们去了地下一楼看球幕电影,听里面的叔叔阿姨介绍,这是世界上最大的球幕电影,整个影院就是一个球,我还是第一次看这样的'电影,我非常兴奋。电影里讲得是亚马逊人的生活,看到他们那里的生活,我感到我非常的幸福,那里的生活条件非常的差。电影里直升飞机飞来飞去的感觉就像我们自己在开飞机一样,还有点晕车的感觉。
下午我们还去了东方明珠塔,因为时间来不及,我们就没有去登塔,不过我还是很高兴,因为我看到了真正的东方明珠塔。下一次我一定还要到上海来玩。
这就是科技改变着我们的生活,这就是在一步步发展的科技。所有,计算机网络把世界连成了一家,因此,“天涯若比邻”不再是梦了。这就说明只要我们肯去动脑筋,去改变,我们的科技就会越来越发达,我们的生活会越来越方便。好比,如果到了22世纪人们传递信息,只要说出话,然后说出接受人的名字,那样传递信息更方便了。让我们一起努力,一起去改变我们的生活,让科技更发达。
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