to prevent H7N9 we should know some common sense. First of all, it is important for us to prevent H7N9 from ourselves. For example, clean our hands frequently.
Sencondly, do more exercises. Such as running. Lastly, change our diet to keep balence. For example, eat more types of vegetables and drink more water
上个星期六的早晨,明媚的阳光透过窗户柔柔地撒进我的房间,我正享受着假期带给我的轻松。
突然一位妇女的“河东狮吼”打破了小区的宁静,她那粗大的嗓门声毫不留情地闯进了我的耳中。小鸟仿佛被吵醒了,亮开了大嗓门将我从睡梦中吵醒。我心烦意乱,躺在床上翻来覆去地睡不着。
没办法我只好被迫细细地“聆听”一下。“谁那么缺德,向楼下吐痰,是不是有病呀,没素质没公德心的东西……”妇女大声责骂着向楼下吐痰的人,那骂声格外的刺耳。我好奇地打开窗户,来看看她究竟“受了多大的委屈”。只见妇女气得满脸通红,一边用纸费力地擦着身上的痰迹一边不顾一切地继续重复着责骂,刚买的\'水果也顾不上拎,滚落了一地。在这时那不和谐的声音也引来了更多的人,还有些纷纷推开了窗户,伸出了“鹅脖子”。那妇女一见这情况骂得更凶了,她一脸的怒气冲冲。看着倒霉的妇女,我在心里也骂起了那个随地吐痰的人。
一阵东风吹来,我缩缩了脖子打了个冷哆嗦。关上窗户我又躺到了床上,这时骂声也已渐渐远去,可我的眼前却浮现出另一幕情景。
去年的一天,天公作美,阳光灿烂,春风拂面。我正和爸爸在楼下开开心心地打着羽毛球,真是天有不测风云,一个未被“火军打得半死不活”的烟头从天而降,偏偏“死皮赖脸”地落在我那十分柔嫩的小手上,火辣的刺痛让我哇哇大叫。爸爸见事不妙,拉起我的手只往家奔。回到家后,爸爸先用冰水给我洗了伤口,又上了药消炎,再在我手上贴上了为一座平面山——创可贴。我呢,忍着痛,眼含金豆豆坐在沙发上,埋怨着那个随意扔烟头的人。这件事虽然已过去许久,可每当我看见手上留着的淡淡伤痕,就情不自禁地想起这件事。
想到这儿,我抬头仰望,今天天空是那么湛蓝,空气是那么清新,但这不文明的行为却污染了美好的清晨。如果大家都能拥有一份公德心,都能为他人多着想点,那么我们的生活会比蓝天更蓝,比空气更清新。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
How to prevent the H7N9?
As is well known,the A flu is spreading throught our country. However, if we negnect it, the deadly H7N9 may cause more infectors,or even more deaths. So what is the most important is that we should take some effective measures to prevent it.They can be listed as follows.
Firstly,it is necessary for you to realize the Avian flu can be prevented if you develop good living habits. For example,you shouldn’t forget to wash your hands before meals.Besides,don’t spit everywhere and try to cover your mouth or nose with paper or hankerchiefs when you have to cough or sneeze.What’s more, remember to wear the mouth-cover if you have to go to the public places, such as the crowded cinemas,supermarkets, buses,where the A flu may spread easily.
Secondly,of course, taking exercise more often and taking good sleep to build your body are wise choices for you to reduce the risk of being infected.
Last but not the least, if you are unlucky to be infected with the slight flu cold, try to stay at home,and take some medicine. Do pay attention to your daily body temperature. If you have a high fever, go to the hospital without delay for further treatment. Make sure you are not expected to come back to school before the cold or flu is cured.
Only by doing like this can you prevent or defeat the A flu in the end.
只见她个子很矮小,皮肤黑黝黝的,头发乱糟糟的,面容很憔悴,身上穿着破旧的棉衣,散发着不好闻的味道,背上背着用破布捆着的快辨别不出颜色的铺盖卷,在她的脚旁还立着一个破旧不堪的箱子。唉,来京打工的人可真不容易呀!这时,那个阿姨咳嗽声连连,大概是要吐痰了。我能感觉到她喉管里即将喷涌而出的粘痰,赶忙把脚往后退了退,身子也尽量往后仰,生怕她把痰吐到我的脚上或溅到我的裤子上。可我怎么也没有想到的是:她竟然从兜里拿出一团皱巴巴的手纸,努力地把痰吐到了手纸里,再小心翼翼地把痰包好……
不久,汽车到站了。那个阿姨拿着行李和包着痰的手纸下车了。汽车慢慢地开动了,透过玻璃窗,我看见她快速地把那包着痰的手纸扔进了车站的`垃圾桶里,我的眼睛湿润了。那个小小的身影渐渐地走远了,但在我的心目中,她却变得无比高大!
我真的不敢相信刚才发生的一切,阿姨,我错怪您了!那个阿姨在我脑海里的形象一下子改变了。她,一个外地人,都能保护环境卫生,不随地吐痰,而有的北京人,却很难做到这一点。
这件事直到现在,我还记得清清楚楚。她,一个值得我们每一个北京人学习的、保护环境的好榜样!
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