现在,正是西瓜成熟的季节。我买了一个大西瓜。
我用刀把西瓜切两半,里面的瓜乌黑发亮的,我把西瓜切成一片一片的,刚刚放下刀子只见爸爸和妹妹像一匹野马,开始向西瓜“进攻”了,我把刀放下只见厨房少了好几片,我问妈妈西瓜为啥少了那么多,都钻进你爸和妹的肚子里了,我听了立刻让爸爸吃少一点。但爸爸把我的话当耳边风,我急了,立刻拿起一块赛进我的嘴里,妈妈看见说,别急我们来比赛,我想最后一片西瓜一定落到我的手里,没想到被妹妹抢走了,妹妹说:“哥你不如我。”我说:“别骄傲。”
真是难忘的一天。
我和爸爸俩人一组先比赛。随着阿姨一声“开始”,我就手捧西瓜圈开始咬。我的鼻子早已闻到西瓜特有的清香味,我的牙齿却咬不到瓜瓤。于是我把鼻子贴在西瓜上撅着小嘴啃。我瞄准瓜皮瓜瓤交接的地方,咬了半圈,我看了一下爸爸,他也用跟我一样的方法。然后,我又换了计策,横一口,竖一口,像牛耕地一样,纵横交错着吃。吃得甜甜的西瓜汁顺着嘴角直流,“飞流直下三千尺”了。爸爸则沿着正反两面边缘咬。突然,中间的一块红色的瓜瓤掉下来了,他大惊失色,但是反应很快,迅速抓起西瓜瓤,三口两口地吃了。原来西瓜的边缘都被爸爸吃了,变薄了,所以中心才会掉下来。接着,我使用了黑虎掏心的办法,用舌头把红瓤给弄破。我像蚕宝宝一样,一边转西瓜一边吃。后来,我和爸爸同时完成了比赛。可是我的.西瓜皮四分五裂,爸爸的还是很完整,这一局我就输了。
第二场是两位女士的比赛。阿姨比赛很投入,嘴巴张得大大的,每口咬得多多的,腮帮子装得鼓鼓的,很快就吃光了。妈妈吃得很斯文,总是一小口一小口的轻咬。阿姨吃完了,她才吃了一个小洞,但是妈妈还在坚持不懈。其实胜负早已分晓。
最后,这个奇特的吃西瓜比赛,爸爸得了最具智慧奖,妈妈得了坚持不懈奖,阿姨得了最快速度奖,我得了最佳勇猛奖。
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.
一沙一世界,
一花一天堂,
手中即无限,
永恒亦短暂。
Nowadays, many famous university campuses have become one of the popular tourist attractions. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of middle school students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 “谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, … … have become one of the popular … …. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that … ….
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to … …? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for … … in that … …. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, … … will have negative effect on … … because it will not only do harm to … … but also to … ….
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, … … is not a good thing. … … With the increasing … …, it will ruin … ….
其次,提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity:段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence:关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in one’s opinion即以“启承转合”递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness:以设问句“So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?”开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“On one hand … …. On the other hand, … ….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。
1. It has been shown that … …
类似句型:It is known to us that … …
It is said that … …
It is reported that … …
It is controversial that … …
2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使…能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
最后,提纯范文“措辞”。
1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。
2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions
a multitude of
a great deal of
a large amount of
plenty of
many a
3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。
I argue that … …
I maintain that … …
I claim that … …
I insist that … … = I think that … …
I hold that … …
I assert that … …
I assume that … …
4. negative adj. 否定的.,相反的
hold negative view = hold opposite opinions
5. phenomenon n. 现象
social phenomenon 社会现象
natural phenomenon 自然现象
6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever
(选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever
在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:
1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3. 我的看法
Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.
However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.
In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.
一年一度的吃鸡毛比赛,是这个小镇的年度盛事,加上今年是第一百届,镇长决定扩大举办,口号是:“爱吃鸡毛,百根一千。”本次比赛,以高额的奖金为号召,就看冠军可以吃多少,以千为单位,不怕你吃多,奖金就是无限量往上累积。
所有的镇民觉得机不可失,立刻展开如火如荼的大食训练,无论如何都希望能把自己的胃,能在比赛的现场,装下最多的鸡毛,成为赫赫有名的“无敌大胃王”。
比赛终于要开始了,选手们无不摩肚擦嘴,哪里管吃得满最鸡毛的形象,令人不敢恭维,大把大把的鸡毛,一古脑的往嘴里塞满。
场外充满的亲人摇旗呐喊的加油声,“!加油!”或是:“老公!反正是免钱的,你只管吃,让大家见识你的`实力!”
中场过后,有人撑不住了,吐的吐,晕的晕,甚至还有人直接被抬到救护车上,选手们脸上痛苦的表情,让大家都看不下去了。但是比赛依旧进行着,秉持运动精神的选手,丝毫不怠懈,努力的把鸡毛继续塞到爆。
冠军出炉了,他是一个一星期没吃饭的乞丐,饥肠辘辘的他,等着这场比赛好久了,平时没钱买的鸡毛,这时可以大大饱食,是何等难得的机会。
得到的奖金,足够让他未来了好几个月,不愁没饭吃。只可惜他不去找工作,等到坐吃山空,只怕又只好饿肚子了,或是期待下一次比赛的到来了。
真是有够笨的一个乞丐,本人不予置评。
夏季天气真的是非常的炎热,除了穿得少,吹着空调,还得吃西瓜来解暑。今天我们一家人来了歌吃西瓜比赛。
爸爸买回来一个15斤的大西瓜切成了均匀的10块。比赛分成人组和儿童组。首先是我们儿童组,今天表哥表姐都在我们三个人个子挑选了一块瓜准备就绪。规则是一分钟内看谁吃得最多,不要求吃完。奖品是一个冰激凌。
爸爸妈妈爷爷奶奶当观众,舅舅计时。只听舅舅一声令下:“开始!”我们不顾一切的开吃了。只听见喀嚓喀嚓的声音在回荡。"时间到”大家哄堂大笑,西瓜汁流了一地,我还有半块没有吃完,表哥最厉害吃了个精光。我们都笑得直不起腰来了。
成人组开始啦,我来计时。“预备,开始。”之间妈妈还没有开吃就被爸爸的吃相给笑趴在地了,爷爷奶奶牙齿所剩不多慢慢吃着。舅舅也是狼吞虎咽。“时间到。”我一声令下,爸爸孩子继续吃。最后虽然爸爸吃得最干净但是他犯规,舅舅获胜。一场有趣的'吃西瓜比赛真是解暑又开心。
Expert tips on how to prevent avian influenza H7N9 collated by current argument data dictionary
1.平时加强体育锻炼,多休息,避免过度劳累,不吸烟,勤洗手;注意个人卫生,打喷嚏或咳嗽时掩住口鼻。
1 usually strengthen physical exercise, rest more, avoid excessive overworked, do not smoke, wash their hands; pay attention to personal hygiene, when sneezing or coughing and cover your nose and mouth.
2.保持室内清洁,使用消毒液清洗的地毯,避免使用难以清洗的地毯,保持地面、天花板、家具及墙壁清洁,确保排水道通畅;保持室内空气流通,应每天开窗换气两次,每次至少10分钟,或使用抽气扇保持空气流通;尽量少去 空气不流通的场所。
2 keep the room clean, use disinfectant cleaning carpets, avoid the use of hard to clean the carpet, keep the floor, ceiling, furniture and walls clean, to ensure smooth drainage channel; maintains the indoor air circulation, ventilation windows should be at least two times a day, 10 minutes each time, or use a fan to keep air circulation; as little as possible to airless places.
3.注意饮食卫生,进食禽肉、蛋类要彻底煮熟,加工、保存食物时要注意生、熟分开;养成良好的卫生习惯,搞好厨房卫生,不生食禽肉和内脏。解剖活(死家禽、家畜及其制品后要彻底洗手。
3, pay attention to food hygiene, eating meat, eggs should be thoroughly cooked, processing, preservation of food to the attention of raw, cooked separately; develop good health habits, good kitchen hygiene, do not eat raw poultry meat and offal. Anatomy of living (dead to wash hands thoroughly, livestock and poultry products.
同时,在户外洗手不方便的时候,可以使用免洗洗手液,随身携带,随时随地隔离病菌,呵护您的健康。
At the same time, when the outdoor hand-washing is not convenient, can use hand sanitizer, carry whenever and wherever possible, isolate the pathogen, take care of your health.
4.发现疫情时,应尽量避免与禽类接触;公众特别是儿童应避免密切接触家禽和野禽。
4 found in the epidemic, should avoid contact with poultry; the public especially children should avoid close contact with poultry and wild birds.
5.注意生活用具的消毒处理。禽流感病毒不耐热,100°C下一分钟即可灭活。对干燥、紫外线照射、汞、氯等常用消毒药都很敏感。
5 pay attention to disinfection and living appliances. Avian influenza viruses do not heat, 100 ° C, one minute can be inact
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