I was born in a beautiful town with high mountains around it.The mountains are covered with all kinds of green bamboo.Through the town runs a small stream.It’s said that a new railway is going to be built to the east of the town and a bamboo factory to the west.All the children of the school age can go to school.If anyone is ill,he can go to see the doctor in the newly-built hospital.People in the town are hard-working and never take the backwardness lying down.Though they are having a richer and better life,they are not satisfied with what they have got.They are working hard to build their town into a modern one.
Hi! Boys and girls! My name is kelly,I am 12 years old. I am a student. I study at XiShan Primary School.I am in Class 1,Grade 5.I have three good teachers. They are Mr Lai, Miss Huang and Miss Lu.
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
街心公园的每个角落都散满了夕阳的余晖。那些疲惫的游客正三五成群的向出口涌去。红花、绿叶、清河依旧装点着这个美丽的公园。
夜幕即将来临,公园里一片寂静。只是隐约着听到一阵声响。我沿着声响开始寻觅着这声的源头。在梧桐树旁,我终于察觉到了一抹白影。咦?莫非还有人?我满腹疑问地走进,这才看清在那梧桐树旁的小河边有一个手拿网钩的佝偻老汉,身穿着一件已经洗的泛白的旧布衫,一双破旧的帆布鞋,黝黑的皮肤。此时,他正一手拿网钩一手拿麻袋在河里打捞着什么。
难道他在网河中的小金鱼?是想网鱼偷回家吧?不行,我得看个究竟!想着就迂回到了他身旁,猫在树后面。盯着他的一举一动。
只见他把网伸入水里,轻轻搅拌,很轻很轻,仿佛怕惊动了他的宝贝般。一会儿,水中就漂起一些塑料袋子,里面还有香蕉皮、瓜子壳……他把它们通通网住,拉上岸,送进麻袋中。一次又一次地重复着相同的动作。似乎并没有停下来的意思。
不知不觉的,月亮已经攀上了夜空。夜的清冷,月露出了她的眉尖,月光洒在他的身上,只见他开始微微喘气,虽然很轻微,却还是被我捕捉到了。不一会儿,麻袋里约装了三分之二的'垃圾,什么垃圾都有。老汉把网放在一旁。在河边踱步,盯着河里,好像从哪里会突然冒出金子一样。他俯近岸边,用手捧起一捧水,放在眼前看看,又嗅嗅,这才满意的去拿麻袋。然后提起麻袋向出口走去。
月光下,佝偻的老人,麻袋、银辉、漫长的小路,似乎融成了一幅风景图。和谐、静谧。老汉看了看麻袋,摇了摇头,又转而笑了笑,继续前进。
哦,是他默默地清理水中的垃圾,让明天美丽的公园又将以一份绚丽展现于众人。游客们只知“街心公园”景色美丽,鸟语花香,山明水秀,而且十分温暖,却不知在夜幕下还有不为人知的一份美丽。老汉清理鱼塘时也是一道风景,在月光的沐浴下更为美丽动人。他的善举动与这种奉献精神成了这公园里最美丽的风景。
My chinese teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She wears glasses. She always helps us study and.Music is her favourite. Eevrybody likes her because she has a kind heart.
Miss Lu is our math teacher. She,s very active and smart. She has tress. She,s young and pretty. She,svery strict,but kind. Her class is so much fun.My favourite teacher is Mr Lai. He is our English teacher. He has two small eyes and big mouth. He wears a pair of glasses, too. Because he is a university student. He,s very humoar. He speaks English very well.we like him so much.They are my teachers. Do you like them?
Thank you
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