五年级的课后英语小作文【一】
初稿
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money -it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
自评
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（刘兴顺评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
评分：23
互评（战越评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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互评（李春霞评）
As is shown above, a leader father is sitting in the chair with a seal grasping in the hand, and a lot of money beside him. He seriously said to his son that there is more to life than just money it is power. Simple as the picture is, but a profound truth is reveled in the picture.
I surely disagree with father ’s philosophy. As a leader, he shouldn ’t use his power to make money. It is his duty to serve people wholeheartedly, just one person said “with great power comes great responsibility ”. If he stick to his philosophy. I believe that he will spend the rest of his life in prison. What’s worse, he could affect his son ’s philosophy, guiding him in the opposite direction , nothing can be done to reverse the trend itself. The only solution is to change father ’s philosophy. Because of many greedy officials in China, it is time to reverse the trend itself by establishing new policy. As Chinese always has been our confidence that we can change for the better and better.
In my opinion, there is more to life than just money -it is happiness, nothing is important than happiness. We can live a colorful life in our spare time.
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五年级的课后英语小作文【二】
??家的小白兔-五年级-状物在我家的大笼子里，住着两位“兔少爷。它们俩非常的可爱。一只全身都是白白的，眼睛像两颗大大的红宝石，耳朵又长又扁，只见一根根血管为它的耳朵作装饰；另一只兔子除了耳朵和眼睛边上的毛是黑色外，其他部分也是白色的。但是这只却不同了，它的毛很长，连耳朵上也长了长毛，看起来像个大大的毛球。它眼睛是黑色的，体型比另一只小。它们俩一只是长得胖乎乎的月月兔，一只是新来的宠物兔，但是都特别可爱。
它们都是个大吃货。每当我走到兔笼前，它们总是争先恐后地扒在笼边上，一下跳二楼，一下又跳到一楼，好像在迫不及待的说：“快给我吃食物，我已经饿得不行了！只要放的.是蔬菜或水果，它们都吃。而且，放多少吃多少，放的再多也照样吃完。只要还有，都能吃光，因为它们不会按份量吃，就算吃饱了也会继续吃，所以我只能控制它们吃的量，不然它们又会控制不住，真是个大吃货。
小白兔们不仅是个大吃货，还个不分蔬菜的兔子。它们习惯性的看见菜叶就吃，新鲜的，不新鲜的都吃。有一次，给它们吃了一些不新鲜的菜叶子，吃完第二天马上就拉肚子。还有一次，笼子的旁边有一个塑料袋，里面装了一些青菜。在我没看见的情况下，有一只兔子伸出它的小嘴，咬了几口塑料袋，可能是想把袋子拖靠近笼子吃里面的青菜，结果菜没吃着把咬烂的塑料袋吞进肚子。结果第二天就得到了惩罚，涨肚子、食欲不振、不吃不喝，全家都被他吓坏了，直到晚上慢慢开始吃一点东西。
小白兔们不仅要乱吃，还要捣乱，是两只调皮的兔子。有一次，一只兔子站在一楼往上顶，整个二楼就塌了，让我又要给它修笼子。有一次，我打开笼门正准备喂菜时，两只兔子同时跑了出来，抓住这只放进笼子再去抓那只时，这只又跑了，抓这只，那只又跑出来……就这样，又忙活了一会才把它们都抓回去，真是两只捣乱兔。
小白兔们不愧是我们家的兔少爷，虽然贪吃，又一天到晚都在捣乱，但是我还是喜欢我家的两只小白兔。
